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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome os
loved it
u are really good
don't know what else to say speechless
thanks 4 da pm


thanks for the comments, its really motivating......................i am glad u loved it, mujhe to laga boring hogaBig smileBig smile.......................i am not good yaar, galti se kabhi kabhi thik thak likh deta hoon basLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
yeh sani kahan mar gayi?????????????????????/

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
OMGGGG BHAI I HAD TEARS IN MY EYES TILL THE END.
aapne beginning itne beautiful way mein likhi hai i can't speak.
 
AND KAMINEEEEEEE U KILLED MY IZZAT IN THE OS.
SUCH A CHOR U ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!LOLROFL
 
res (chalo sab res res khele)LOL
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Firstly *churel holding ears* for giving such a late comment. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz maaf kardo bhai warna mein gussa ho jaungiLOL

Oh ho kamine ne to mera intro hi chura liya, par meine jo self introduction diya vo bhi edit karke chura liya. OMG bhai prinzu sach hi kehti hai what a chindi chor u areLOL  waise sach bolu to musibat hum nahi aap haii, LOL hum to ache bacche hai, jo acchi tarah se aapke ghar mein rehte hai, aap ko hi chain nahi aur hum par dus pranks kehlte the. Ab chingari ko bhakao ge to aag to lagegi hi na. haha that's why aapko itne pranks return mein mile.LOL

Chalo now comment on os before u kill me by sucking my blood with my PVC pipes.LOL overall the OS was one of the best os I have red. Sacchi, pata nahi kyo aapko kabhi apne work par confident kyo nahi hota? It was soooooooooooooo intelligent os u knowLOL mein reason batati hu cuz aapne jo pranks soche vo average insaan nahi soch sakta, par mera bhai to topper hainaLOL it made me laugh and cry simultaneously. That's the best bit ki andar sirf funny stuff hi nahi hai rather real emotional kar dene wala stuff bhi hai. U know what I mean right?LOL

The first bit of the os was sooooooooooooooooooooo nice. Pehle to muje yakeen hi nahi hua ki yeh aapne likha haiLOL I mean it was so mature and beautifully written. Vo jab aap car mein sab moments yaad karte haina, I can actually imagine u sitting in the car and thinking. AwwwwLOL I think yeh aapka best os tha. Iss os mein aapki ek nayi hi writing style dekhne mein aayi. Mature waali.

Ab bhai aapne vo phrase nahi suna kya? Ki opposite attract. We all 3 have got different personalities and that's what makes life so exciting, and we 3 can't live without talking to eachotherLOL bhai aapne to bare posh words use kiye hai, invincible and allLOL haye mera topperROFL

Ab bhai agar twinzy ko gaane sunne hai to aapko itni takleef kyo ho rahi hai? Ab uska taste, mana twinzy 18th century ke gaane pasand karti hai, par bhai jaane dona warna laat paregiLOL  twinzy bhi na aapki hi behen hai, irritate karne mein to degree le rakhi hai dono ne. ab tum dono ki larai mein muje bhi vo boring old songs sunne par rahe hai. KAMINEEEEEEAngry tum dono ki larai mein hamesha mein hi pisti huLOL mein bohot ishmart hu, aapko laat khate hue dekha to meine to apna muh hi nahi khola, kya pata twinzy kamini kya khiladeLOL

Oye hoye abhi tak to kick ka pain bhi nahi gaya to mere bhai ne twinzy ke liye naya career dhoondh liya. That's called a bhai, apni beheno ka pain mein bhi bhala sochta haiLOL arey bhai ab bachao bachao aap hindi mein bhi bologe na to bhi hum samajh jayenge, itni saari languages mein bolkar mehnat karne ki kya zaroorat thiLOL kam akkam gosh! Lol

Bhai u know hamare saath aako weird moments mein hi khushi milegi, jus din hum ne normal behave kiya, u won't be able to tolerate, hahahaha. And awwww bhai twinzy gave u a head massage. Zara sambhal kar, kisi din gusse hogi to sar ke saath gala bhi daba degiLOL and bhai u remembered that muje ajeeb ajeeb sapne aate rehte hai and I usually wake up crying. Aww I would love to hug my bhai when I get up crying. Love u bhaiiiiiiii itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sara.

 As Sani being the wise one out of the 3 once said "family comes first and you wouldn't know how much they mean to you unless they go away from you or you loose one of them (God forbid)" so true. Bhai I think meine aapko yeh baat kabhi kahi thi cc par and wow aapne to os mein bhi daal diya.

You know jabse IF par aayi hu apni half of the tension kam ho gayi hai cuz I know ki I have someone in this world uske paas mein aadhi raat ko bhi jaungi, vo mera dukh share karega. You don't even know ki in kuch months mein aap aur twinzy meri backbone ban gaye hai ho. I have been so dependent on you both and no regrets in that case.

Bhai u made me so happy when you said that this is just the beginning, abhi to saari life baaki hai. Muje ek hope milti hai ki life mein kabhi na kabhi to hum milenge hina and then GOD SAVE THE WORLD FROM OUR AATANKLOL

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KAMINEEEEE KUTEEEEE TUMHARA TO MERA KHOON CHOOS JAUNGI. Meine band baja mangwaya tha, aapne to muje maa hi bana diya. OMG vo saare hot maals to mere haath se sand ki tarah pisal gaye. URGHHH kamine. Uss bacche ko to mein sachh mein chura lungi. God kaise kaise bacche banate ho aap. And kamine uss chote se bacche ko rishwat dete hue sharam nahi aayi. Aur vo kamina baccha, mummy ke aate hi muje maa se aunty bana diya. Ekto meri izzat ka diwala nikaal diya beech airport parLOL but bhai meine aapko sirf dhanda se hi mara. Gala nahi ghot diyaLOL and yelo aate hi aapki jeb khali kardi ice cream se.LOL aur uss kamini twinzy ko jal ki pari hai, huh yaha meri virginity par attack hua and she is thinking about her jail. HUHLOL aur vo kamini uski maa muje baccha chor bolti hai. AREY BACCHA CHOR HOGI VO,USKA PURA KHANDAN, USKI PURI GENERRATIONAngryLOL

Hahaha bhai the next prank was awesome. Pata hai kyo? Kyoki usmein meine and twinzy ne the biggest prankster ko dhul chatayiLOL apka muh dekhne layak hoga jab meine hospital bed tak book kara diyaROFL omg see such caring sisters u have aur aap unpe naraz hote ho ki meri izzat ka faluda bana diya pub meinAngry

OMG ghadaaaaa ulluu ka pathaa kutta kamina khotaaa and such a UGHHHHH. I HATE YOU BHAI. Aapne yeh mere saath pub mein kya kiya. OMG ekto mein itni thaki hari soyi thi aur aap ka shaitani dimaag. CHAIN NAHI HAI USKO. Ek bholi bhali soyi hui larki par taras nahi aaya ki usse lesbian saabit kar diya.Angry bhai mein to khoon choos jaungi by god. Ughhhh mein to sharam ke maare zameen mein ghoos gayi hongiLOL kaha kaha se aise ideas aate hai. U watch aapko to mein chorungi nahi. MuahahaLOL

Finally bhai ko sani ke alawa koi aur bhi dikha band bajane ke liye. LOL. Wow kya plan hai, twinzy ko roof pe bitha do aur hum dono ek  walk par chale jaayeLOL omg I can actually imagine twinzy fuming and smoke coming out of her ears jab hum ladder lekar bhag gayeLOL kam akkal agar ice dena hi tha to thora sabar kar lete, ussi waqt dene ko kisne kaha tha, chutta phenka na ice cream twinzy ne. gosh recession ke period mein kisi ko ice cream ki to kadar hi nahi hai mere alawa. Dekho aapke chehre parse bhi mein waste nahi hone detiLOL

TV. Nooooooo ab yahi baaki reh gaya tha. Ek tv remote ke liye hum ek dusre par ande maarenge. Uff,LOL and jeezzz twinzy usse ande hi mile the pure kitchen mein maarne ke liyeAngry meri hairstyle bigaar di hogi kamini neLOL omg humne to aapke ghar ka naksha hi badal diya. I wonder abhi tak uncle aunty ne hame ghar se nikaal kyo nahi diya?LOL see that's why it's good to bring borya bistar, sarak par sone mein kaam aata haiROFL

Ek baat samajh nahi aayi kam akkal, itni bari egg fight ke baad kaun pagal ghore bech kar so sakta hai? The answer is KAMINA GANGROFL trust me hum log na agar egg fight ke baad itni deep sleep mein so sakte hai then am positive we can even fall asleep in the battle field during warLOL bhai hum to bacche hai and hamari neend gehri hoti hai par kamine tum to buddhe ho, itna thok rahe the, kaan mein awaz nahi ghusi kya?LOL poor uncle ko door kaat kar aana para. Oh god ab yahi din dekhna baaki reh gaya tha ki apne ki ghar mein choro ki tarah kaat kut karke aayeLOL u know when you asked ur dad for breakfast, I wonder uncle aapko hi utha kar gas par kyo nahi bitha diyaLOL uncle mahan hai yeh sab hone ke baad bhi hame ab tak ghar se nahi nikala, waise it's not like I have a probz with it cuz muje to pipe charna aata hai, bas twinzy ki fikar hai muje. Bechari kaha jayegi?LOL

HAHAHAHAHA u know the PC blasting prank u played. Gosh I can't imagine twinzy kaise bhagi hogi after she red that notice. But man it looked so proffesional, mein bhi ullu ban jaatiLOL

A book on bhai and his sapne with 200 hot girls on an islandROFL I would laugh agar vo saari 200 larkiya lesbian nikle island parROFL but bhai jis tarah se twinzy and meine aapko ek dulhan ki tarah sajaya tha na, I bet 200 lesbian girls wahi island par aapka rape kar detiLOL aapki to dilo tamanna puri ho jaatiLOL HAHAHAHAHA aap to darwaza hi thok te reh jaao, twinzies darwaza nahi kholne waaliLOL

Bhai aapne muje os mein na 'thali ka baingan' bataya hai. Kabhi aapki side par to kabhi twinzy ki side parLOL man getting peanut butter all over ur face is harshLOL. I can't believe twinzy peanut butter ko dho kar dubara se so gayi. How could she trust us/ROFL hayeee iss ghar mein rehna baccho ka kaam nahi hai. Har kadam par baba pj ke traps haiLOL

Yaar bhai yeh twinzy kabhi hamara saath kyo nahi deti when we're annoying people?LOL kamini aise waqt par hi saath chor deti haiLOL but here comes our shaitani dimaags. Bechari twinzy, itne ghante se puzzle bana rahi hai par kamina bhai ko uski khushi dekhi nahi jaatiLOL, fir aa gaya twinzy ke naak mein dum karne and I can't believe aap jigsaw ke pieces bhi churate ho. What a chor manLOL last mein bhai came like a hero and solved the jigsaw in 1 go, bless twinzy, uska muh dekhne layak hogaROFL

Bhai u do realise that am gonna kill u? kyo mere piche pare ho kamine? Aapne meri ssg meri mummy ko hi suna di and ooooh aashik ka bhi pol khul gayi. BHAI AASHIK AND ME CAN'T BE TOGETHER. Uski already GF haiLOL leave that kutta aloneLOL I wonder jab mein ghar wapas jaungi, mera swagat mum phool haar se karenge ya phir gun point seLOL

Hahahahahahha u got kicked in the pool. Nananana. What a joy seeing u fluttering around in water thinking "what the hell? Mein yaha kaise aaya?"LOL how can u forget ki jab tak aapki 2 sis hai aapko bhi chain nahi lene dengeLOL

Aww bhai ur convo with ur dad was so cute. I really hope ki aap kisi din muje surprise de. OMG mein to faint hi ho jaungiLOL.

Bhai thank you so much for such a marvellous os. Aapne itni depth and itne meaning se likha hai ki meri aankho mein aansu aa gaye. Kamine yaar I sacchi mein can't believe ki tumne itna maturely likha hai. Am still in shock. Bhai again am very sorry for such a late comment par apni choti behen ko maaf kardona. Pleashhhh *sani looking at bhai with puppy eyes*LOL

 

I LOVE YOU AND TWINZY ITNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SARA. MUAHZ

Love

sani

p.s- am not really good at mahabharat comment. sorry for any mistakesEmbarrassed 

 



Edited by Sani_Rani - 12 November 2010 at 4:13pm

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
I will cherish every moment that we spent together and I can't forget a single moment when we did all the masti together. I just want you both to know that how much you guys mean to me. U guys did annoy me at some point or I got on your nerves but trust me this is what sisters and brothers are for. I have experienced the best days of my life in last 1 month and I promise you that this is just the beginning. It's a start and we have got the rest of our lives. We won't loose contact now as we will spend our vacations together every year from now on. Both of you be prepared as I may give u surprise next year."
  
                  it was d bst part of ur OS.......it jst shows how much u love ur frnds.......no mattr how many pranks u play on each othr.......in d end u will always be togethr .....nd dats wat a true relationship is .....no mattr wat happns ....u always end up togethr......
     pj kabhi kabhi kaam ki batein b karta hai ......dats new to me .......keep up da good wrk...of smiling nd makng othr ppl smile......Big smileBig smile
 
      

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
@diya- i know right. muje to pata hi nahi tha ki kamina itna maturely bhi likh sakta haiROFL

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

OMGGGG BHAI I HAD TEARS IN MY EYES TILL THE END.
aapne beginning itne beautiful way mein likhi hai i can't speak.
 
AND KAMINEEEEEEE U KILLED MY IZZAT IN THE OS.
SUCH A CHOR U ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!LOLROFL
 
res (chalo sab res res khele)LOL


OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG finally my churel commentedBig smileBig smile.....................ro kyu rahi thi, mera OS mein hasane ke liye likhta hoon samjhiLOL

ab beginning likhne mein hi zada tar time jo lagaya tha, baki sab to jaldi jaldi mein likh diyaLOLLOLLOLLOL

ab tumhari izzat ki band bhi to bajani hi thi naWinkLOLLOLLOLLOL

mein chindi chor hoon yeh saara zamana janta haiLOLLOLLOLLOL

i will be waiting for mahabharat commentBig smile

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

@diya- i know right. muje to pata hi nahi tha ki kamina itna maturely bhi likh sakta haiROFL
   
    Winklolxx.......bacha bara hoo gaya hai ......aab tak likhna tou aa he jana chahyye na ....waisey left hand se likhta hai ya right hand se ......LOL

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by diyaa1pk

I will cherish every moment that we spent together and I can't forget a single moment when we did all the masti together. I just want you both to know that how much you guys mean to me. U guys did annoy me at some point or I got on your nerves but trust me this is what sisters and brothers are for. I have experienced the best days of my life in last 1 month and I promise you that this is just the beginning. It's a start and we have got the rest of our lives. We won't loose contact now as we will spend our vacations together every year from now on. Both of you be prepared as I may give u surprise next year."
  
                  it was d bst part of ur OS.......it jst shows how much u love ur frnds.......no mattr how many pranks u play on each othr.......in d end u will always be togethr .....nd dats wat a true relationship is .....no mattr wat happns ....u always end up togethr......
     pj kabhi kabhi kaam ki batein b karta hai ......dats new to me .......keep up da good wrk...of smiling nd makng othr ppl smile......Big smileBig smile
 
      


ab hum aisey hi hai ji, logo ko tang zaroor karte hai but apne doston ki khushi hamesha chahte haiBig smile

hawwwwwwww matlab kya hai aapka, mein kabhi kaam ki baatein nahi kartaLOLLOLLOLLOL.........OMG yeh to mera secret tha aapko kaisey pata chal gayaLOLLOLLOLLOL

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