MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

Posted: 13 years ago
hey my cutie  piesπŸ€—

 coming straight to the point...i am back with another FF...πŸ˜ƒ



thank u all for the immense support u all show..believe me i feel at the top of the world...

THANK U SO MUCH!!...and the thing which make me write more is that my readers increase with every FF...thank u guys...

ok here are the links to my previous FFs..

Links to my first FF....

1.TRYING TO CREATE MAGIC:


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1461023

2.MAGIC REVERSED

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1468998

3.MAGIC THAT IS ANTICIPATED

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1490066

4. UNEXPECTED MAGIC

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/34955891

and now my gallery..

SIMPLY MAGIC..


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1497181

scroll down for the index...πŸ˜ƒ


Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Characters:

Mayank Sharma and Nupur Bhushan - main protaganists..

Mr Mihir sharma &Mrs Shilpa Sharma - mayank's parents

Mr. Shashi bhushan &Mrs.Prerna Bhushan - nupur's parents..

Samrat Shergill - Mayank's best friend

Gunjan Mehta - Nupur's best friend

INDEX


PART 1 ON PG 1..
PART 2 ON PG 4
PART 3 ON PG 8
PART 4 ON PG 11
PART 5 ON PG 16
PART 6 ON PG 19
PART 7 ON PG 23
PART 8 ON PG 26
PART 9 ON PG 30
PART 10 ON PG 34
PART 11 ON PG 38
PART 12 on pg 42
PART 13 on pg 46
PART 14 on pg 49
PART 15 on pg 52
PART 16 on pg 56
PART 17 on pg 60
PART 18 on pg 65
PART 19 on pg 69
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
PART 1:

SB...nupur ki parhai khatam honey tak tu mayank bhi settle ho jaye ga...

SS...ku nahi bhai sahib...waise bhi itna bara business hai..mayank ko hi tu sanbhlna hai..bus ye us ka final year hai
tu phir ik do saal main business main expert ho jaye ga..


PB...gi bikul...tab tak nupur ka bhi bachelors khatam ho jaye ga..abhi tu us ne fist yaer main admission liya hai.

MS..bus tu phir mubarik ho....ye rishta pakka ho gaya hai.
..ik do din main sagai..aur phir do teen sal tak shaadi...


SB..bht bht mubarik ho..

PB..main mun meetha karwati hon...

SS..g zarror...

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The Sharmas and the Bhushans were the two top families of Delhi. Mihir Sharma and Shashi bhushan were business competetors, but recently thier colabration had paved way for their family bonding.

Both the families were highly conservative and strict to their values. Seeing the matching social status..both of these families decided to commit thier children with each other's, bcz according to them such machtes are not found daily..

Sharmas had only one son..MAYANK SHARMA...and the Bhushans had only one daughter..NUPUR BHUSHAN..

Mayank Sharma was studying in the final year of his bachelors in software engennering and nupur was in the first year
of her bachelors in English Literature.

Both the families decided to bond their children in an engagement because otherwise they will be flooded by proposals..

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The engagement ceremony was a very private affair,just the two families...and as they both were very conservative so combined engagement was not done..

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The sharmas were at the BHUSHAN house..

Mrs Shilpa Sharma put the red chunri on nupur....

SS..bilkul cahnd ka tukra lag rahi hai...

Shipla made her wear her engagement ring..

SS..aj se ye hamari beti...

Congratulations were exchanged...blessings were given...gifts were exchanged..and nupur was seeing all this with a strange confusion in her heart..

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All the four parents went for the press briefing and nupur came into her room...

A huge room with a huge royal bed in the centre...large windows with flowing curtains..

the room was pianted in pink shades...the borders of the roof dark pink and the walls baby pink, the curatins had  shades of white and pink...her study table at the the righ corner side..with books, novels, her laptop, i pod all scatterd on the table...her tv on the wall in front of her bed..

her stereo system VCD player, DVDs all arranged in the rack beside...

He dressing table  and cupboard on the whole of left wall..

She came and sat in front of the mirror...she was wearing her red chunri and gently brushing her fingers over the
ring...when the door knocked..

SB...hum ander a jayen beta..

She stood up..both her parents were standing on the door..

N..mama papa..ayen na...

SB...hamari beti tu is duniya ki sab se khubsorat bbchi hai..dekha prerna..

PB...gi bilkul...pora press photos mang rah tha..per hum apni beti ko nazr thori lagne den gey...hai na...

Nupur was getting uncomfortable with all this flattering...she always used to get embbarressed an how her parents flattered her..

N...mama...papa plz. ap..

MS..thek hai thek hai..hamari beti ko nahi psnd k us ki itni tarref ki jaye...

PS...kamal hai ye larki bhi..larkiyan u..

SB..prerna!!..

PS..thek hai...kuch nahi kehti..

SB..aao beta..

All three of them sat on the bed..with nupur in the centre and her parents by her sides..

SB..ap kush ho na beta..

N..gi papa..

PB..arey kush kaise nahi hogi..itna acha larka hai...

SB..nupur ap khush ho na beta..

N..gi papa..

SB..mujhe bus yehi chaiye tha ..ap..

PB..ap zara hum dono ko thori dair k liye akela chorey gey...mujhe kuch baat karni hai nupur se..

SB..thek hai ...ap maa beti batien karo..main chalta hon..

Nupur took off her chunri and began to fold it...

PB..nupur ye lo...

she handed a white envelope to her..

N..ye kai hia mama..

PB..mayank ki tasveer...

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M..tasveer?..achank ku?.

Mayank was shocked...His mother..Shipla Sharma was standing in front of her holding a white envelope..

SS...ku nahi dekhni tumhian?

M..ab ku dikha rahi hain...ab tu sagai ho gai hai na..

SS..tu kia hua?..dekh lo...lo pakro...

he held the enveople and put it on the table..

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PB..table pe ku rakh diya hai?..

N..mama plz.ab tu sagai ho gai haina....mujhe jab dekhna hoga main dekh lon gi...


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SS..kamal hai..larke tu...per khair..tumhari marzi..

Shilpa left the room..

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She gently touched the envelope...and came to her window...The moon as shining full...and light breeze was flowing..She started to remember that how within one week she was engaged....Her marriage was fixed...she didnt had an objecion but olny the things were going too fast...she looked at the envelope and gently opened it..he took out the picture..

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Narrow brown eyes...ruffled hair....and gentle smile with dimples..

Mayank was standing at the window of his expensively but delicately decorated room...

His simple bed with a wooden base...the whole room was painted in cream colours, sliding glass windows with blinds..
his study table filled with books, his laptop on his bed...

all his DVDs and cassetes arranged in the rack..a simple mirror with a stand..with his deos, perfumes and watches arranged...

he pulled the blinds to the side and opened the window...he was holding the envelope...

he opened it and took out the picture..

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huge black eyes...silky white skin..rosy sheeks and lips as if petals of rose...gently smiling..

her beauty increased after seeing mayank's picture...the blush on her cheeks increased her glow...

weraing a simple elegant white shirt and black jeans...collar button opend..sleeves folded till elbows...and smiling at the camera...

N...he is so handsome..

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M...SHE IS BEAUTIFUL...

wearing white shalwar suit, with her duppatta flowing on side ..all her hair flowing in the wind...sitting on the grass..she looked like a flower in th sunlight...

He more tightly held the picture...

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They both were staring at the picture and looked at the moon..SIMELTANOEUSLY...THEIR FIRST CONTACT...

Both of them felt a connection..

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Mayank and nupur were much alike..similar choices..similar priorities..similar aims..similar ways of looking at life..
similar ways of leading their lives..similar ways of handling their lives...

they both were the same poles of the magnet..

but the problem with the same poles is that...THEY REPEL!!!...


Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Mehak jana
i reserve this post for comment in future.lol


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Mehak , wow wonderful update as usual
 mayur got engaged but they didnt c each other.
hai ALLAH ye konsa jamana ki ladka-ladki hai.lol
By GOD main tou bina dekhe kabhi shaadi k liye ha nehi bolungi.

Mehak i loved ur updte as usual
u beautifully describe nups mom-dad and her room.lol
wah they likes each other after seeing their pix.
he is handsome and she is beautiful , they have so much similarity but yah u r right the main prob is-for the same pole of magnet , they repel.
Awesome starting
loved it to the core
do cont. it.



Edited by fariaa70 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
noooo y repel...???

coming back it ws awesum lyk all ur other postss yr i jus loved da concept u truely rock man u r my heroineπŸ˜†
aww love mayur soo much n luv u too alot for giviing us deir such lovely n wonderful os...😳
now ill b waiting for its part each day....
thnx alot
Edited by cutiepie12 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
another SuPERB THING !!!!!!!!!
yaaaaa u ll kill me by u r FF 's
keep rockin n updatin πŸ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
nice one mehak.... update soon.... 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
omg thnx for startin this new ff!
was missing ur ffz......lol
n repeling magic.....hmmmmmmmm it seemz really very interesting......waitin for nxt part!
thnx alot for the pm!!!πŸ˜ƒ
do cont soon!!
Posted: 13 years ago
its too cute......

dere is very few ff which i liked after reading d irst part n its one of dem

cont soon

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