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Yun Miley Hum[MN SS]: ** TEMPORARY SUSPENDED **

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Posted: 13 years ago
 Hi friends, i m here again to disturb u. i know m enough bothering u through my FF & OS updates. here m again with a stupid idea, with a stupid brief.
 
 
 
here is the inro😊
plz read & tell me should i continue or not.😊
 
 
 

"rokooo, bus rokooo?.." a girl running behind a bus.  There is stormy night, and also drizzling, the road was empty, even there was not any trace of light except streetlight and the headlight of the bus. Entire Shimla was in deep sleep. It about past midnight, an alone girl running behind the bus to stop it. Driver stopped the bus, the girl quickly entre, "yeh bus Delhi jayegi na?" the girl asked to conductor. She was breathing heavily.

"haan behenji. Peche ka seat khali hai, aap jaake baith jaiye." Conductor pointing to the end seat.

"thank you bhaiya" the girl slump on the last row seat, only a guy was there. He was sleeping, his face covered with a hancy.

 "by god, bus to miss hone hi wala tha!" she murmured, placing her bag on the cabinet. She wiped off her cloth as she drenched lightly due to drizzling.

 It was past midnight. Everyone was on sleep. She bought a ticket to Delhi from conductor.

"accha bhiya, Delhi pauchneme kitna time lagega?"

"shayad kal shaam tak pauch jayenge." Conductor returned her extra money.

"by god, itni der kyun lagega?" she rise her big brown eyes.

"barish ho rahi hai na madam, raste pe land slide ho raha hai aur Simla ke raste to aap jante hai .."

"by god, kal dopahar tak yahi pe chupchap baith na padega." She rest her head of backward, "par mujhe uss kaale pehelwan (black wrestler) se  shadi to nahi karni padegi."  Satisfying smile playing on her lips, and soon she dozed off.

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I woke up, as sharp  sound broke my sleep. I feel something heavy on my shoulder, I turned to saw a girl slept beside, her head rested  on my shoulder, her face cover with hair.

I patted her hand, "oye ladki, wake up." She slowly moved and woke up with a jerk. She hurriedly throwing  her hair back and  make a bun. I just starring her ??.. she was so beautiful, her brown eyes full in sleepiness.

"sorry" she sheepishly smile. OMG!!!!! She has a such cute smile, her white pearl like teeth between her rose petal lips.  I wish, I could touch them ???. is it feel so soft? I wish, I could teats them ???? it it feel so testy?

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i know ab mjuhe sab ke joote padne wale hai, iss stupid ss ke liye!😛

with Love
suja❤️
 
 
                                                    ** Index **
 
Intro            :   Page 1.
Part One     :   Page 3.
Part Two     :   Page 7.
Part Three   :   Page 9.
Part Four     :   Page 11.
Part Five      :   Page 13.
Part Six        :   Page 16.
Part Seven    :   Page 20.
Part Eight      :   Page 27. 
NOTE            :    Page 33
Part Nine       :    Page 35
 
 
                                                   


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Posted: 13 years ago

By gawdddddd

first of all I cant tell you how much I
enjoyed reading this little pokito pokito(little in spanish🤣my stupid spanish class cant stop thinking about todayzzz lesson😭🤣) part
 
sachi mein you're amazing writer
I dunno I m just sooooooo hyper today 😕🤣
 
ok just love the atmosphere
rainyyy❤️😍raat mein Rati (opzzz got carried away with R, hey itss my favorite letter in the whole wide list of letters😳☺️🤣)
toh acha mein kahan thi??
yeh rainy raat mein humari Nupur behenji catching the bus
shezzz in Shimla (wat a beautiful place😍) going to Delhi
bc she doesnt want to marry that kalla pehelwann jee🤣🤣🤣
I just love da way u discribed him🤣
n wow kya chatterbox hai Nupur na😆
sope bus Delhi kal sham tak pohachhe gi
gr88 gr888
and then our Mayu😍(Clapzzz clapzzz👏😆) sleeping in the bus
and he wakes up
when he notices that Nupur waz sleeping on his shoulder(wat a scene if dos CVzzz put dat in MJHT😍😍😡😭)
but how he sayzz
"Oyeeee girl wake up🤣"
n she sayzz sorry to him when
and awwwwwwwwwww he lovezz her smile
and her "testy" lipzzz
dat looked so testy😳🤣
hailaa cant wait to read more
do continue ASAP na=D
sorry I noe u must b thinking em totally insane
(wrong first impression😭😆, but em like that)
but this I
would love to be in your SS listy
 
just realized how much 🤣 facez I have
people might think I fell down harder this time🤣
 
acha nice to meet you=D
love this SS
had sooooooooooo much fun reading it
cant wait to read more
tc🤗
-Lina-
 
 
 
Edited by rkmnsg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey suja!!!
dont say that yaar!! its mindblowingggggggggggg!!! realy fun to be read!!! udo cont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon dear!!!! i will be wait 4 ur update!!! n thanxx 4 the pm!
love
komal❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
U said it stupid...Yeh kya ho gaya aapko...U r alright na...
This wz mindboggling...And the last part wz soooo sweet...
But do cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part...
Continue soon....pls....
Pls add me 2 ur pm list.....!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwwwww suja nice concept dear plzzzzzzz cont soon and dnt forget to add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago
great start dear.................
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice start..!
looks interesting..!
do continue soon....and do add me to the PM list,, :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz do continue i would love to read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey suja

ek aur ss

Congo

intro was fabulous

lied it

cont soon