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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
 Hi friends, i m here again to disturb u. i know m enough bothering u through my FF & OS updates. here m again with a stupid idea, with a stupid brief.
here is the inroSmile
plz read & tell me should i continue or not.Smile

"rokooo, bus rokooo?.." a girl running behind a bus.  There is stormy night, and also drizzling, the road was empty, even there was not any trace of light except streetlight and the headlight of the bus. Entire Shimla was in deep sleep. It about past midnight, an alone girl running behind the bus to stop it. Driver stopped the bus, the girl quickly entre, "yeh bus Delhi jayegi na?" the girl asked to conductor. She was breathing heavily.

"haan behenji. Peche ka seat khali hai, aap jaake baith jaiye." Conductor pointing to the end seat.

"thank you bhaiya" the girl slump on the last row seat, only a guy was there. He was sleeping, his face covered with a hancy.

 "by god, bus to miss hone hi wala tha!" she murmured, placing her bag on the cabinet. She wiped off her cloth as she drenched lightly due to drizzling.

 It was past midnight. Everyone was on sleep. She bought a ticket to Delhi from conductor.

"accha bhiya, Delhi pauchneme kitna time lagega?"

"shayad kal shaam tak pauch jayenge." Conductor returned her extra money.

"by god, itni der kyun lagega?" she rise her big brown eyes.

"barish ho rahi hai na madam, raste pe land slide ho raha hai aur Simla ke raste to aap jante hai .."

"by god, kal dopahar tak yahi pe chupchap baith na padega." She rest her head of backward, "par mujhe uss kaale pehelwan (black wrestler) se  shadi to nahi karni padegi."  Satisfying smile playing on her lips, and soon she dozed off.


I woke up, as sharp  sound broke my sleep. I feel something heavy on my shoulder, I turned to saw a girl slept beside, her head rested  on my shoulder, her face cover with hair.

I patted her hand, "oye ladki, wake up." She slowly moved and woke up with a jerk. She hurriedly throwing  her hair back and  make a bun. I just starring her ??.. she was so beautiful, her brown eyes full in sleepiness.

"sorry" she sheepishly smile. OMG!!!!! She has a such cute smile, her white pearl like teeth between her rose petal lips.  I wish, I could touch them ???. is it feel so soft? I wish, I could teats them ???? it it feel so testy?


i know ab mjuhe sab ke joote padne wale hai, iss stupid ss ke liye!Tongue

with Love
                                                    ** Index **
Intro            :   Page 1.
Part One     :   Page 3.
Part Two     :   Page 7.
Part Three   :   Page 9.
Part Four     :   Page 11.
Part Five      :   Page 13.
Part Six        :   Page 16.
Part Seven    :   Page 20.
Part Eight      :   Page 27. 
NOTE            :    Page 33
Part Nine       :    Page 35

                                                -: PM List :-
My other creationsSmile
Game (Mayur FF)
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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 04 November 2011 at 6:20am

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.PINK. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 09 January 2009
Posts: 37962

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 3:34pm | IP Logged

By gawdddddd

first of all I cant tell you how much I
enjoyed reading this little pokito pokito(little in spanishROFLmy stupid spanish class cant stop thinking about todayzzz lessonCryROFL) part
sachi mein you're amazing writer
I dunno I m just sooooooo hyper today ConfusedROFL
ok just love the atmosphere
rainyyyHeartDay Dreamingraat mein Rati (opzzz got carried away with R, hey itss my favorite letter in the whole wide list of lettersEmbarrassedBlushingROFL)
toh acha mein kahan thi??
yeh rainy raat mein humari Nupur behenji catching the bus
shezzz in Shimla (wat a beautiful placeDay Dreaming) going to Delhi
bc she doesnt want to marry that kalla pehelwann jeeROFLROFLROFL
I just love da way u discribed himROFL
n wow kya chatterbox hai Nupur naLOL
sope bus Delhi kal sham tak pohachhe gi
gr88 gr888
and then our MayuDay Dreaming(Clapzzz clapzzzClapLOL) sleeping in the bus
and he wakes up
when he notices that Nupur waz sleeping on his shoulder(wat a scene if dos CVzzz put dat in MJHTDay DreamingDay DreamingAngryCry)
but how he sayzz
"Oyeeee girl wake upROFL"
n she sayzz sorry to him when
and awwwwwwwwwww he lovezz her smile
and her "testy" lipzzz
dat looked so testyEmbarrassedROFL
hailaa cant wait to read more
do continue ASAP na=D
sorry I noe u must b thinking em totally insane
(wrong first impressionCryLOL, but em like that)
but this I
would love to be in your SS listy
just realized how much ROFL facez I have
people might think I fell down harder this timeROFL
acha nice to meet you=D
love this SS
had sooooooooooo much fun reading it
cant wait to read more

Edited by rkmnsg - 03 November 2010 at 3:48pm

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komal991 Senior Member

Joined: 10 August 2010
Posts: 511

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
hey suja!!!
dont say that yaar!! its mindblowingggggggggggg!!! realy fun to be read!!! udo cont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon dear!!!! i will be wait 4 ur update!!! n thanxx 4 the pm!

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Auroni.92 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 May 2010
Posts: 5102

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
U said it stupid...Yeh kya ho gaya aapko...U r alright na...
This wz mindboggling...And the last part wz soooo sweet...
But do cont soon...

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ShwePoo IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 May 2009
Posts: 5433

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Nice part...
Continue soon....pls....
Pls add me 2 ur pm list.....!

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zarfishanzahid IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 December 2009
Posts: 5198

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwww suja nice concept dear plzzzzzzz cont soon and dnt forget to add me in ur pm list

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sreevijayan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 February 2009
Posts: 8262

Posted: 03 November 2010 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
great start dear.................

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hgrhr IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 February 2009
Posts: 10792

Posted: 04 November 2010 at 12:12am | IP Logged
nice start..!
looks interesting..!
do continue soon....and do add me to the PM list,, :-)

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