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Geet still in shock

She don't know the person'..who is aiming at her……

What the hell is that .why the person wants to kill her //////////////

She knows that she is innocent and she cannot harm anyone……………

She belongs to a simple family…………..with her mother and her…….

She knows she had a uncle……but she didn't meet him………………….

By the time his uncle son should come and take her with him…………..

But this person kidnapped……her………….

And she is in train of thoughts……….

Where maan on the other hand………….

Thinking of the fact that why the person aimed at geet…………………

Is the same person….or some other person…………..

He thought of something…………

And suddenly he looked at her……………..

Her eyes are in shock..and she is scared……..he stopped his heart which is saying to hug her and console her…………

But he actually wanted it……….

Suddenly he realized the van opposite to his jeep…….

Geet screamed and hugged him……………………..

Maan stopped the jeep…………………….

And he hugged back geet………..

He wonders why the hell he is doing this……………………..

But he tried to start the jeep……….but it is stucked……………..

He looked around ……….

He got down the jeep………..

Maan:move we need to walk…………..

Geet:came back.and said that hello I had a name remember………….

Maan:he said geet………..

Geet:shocked.for first time he called her by name……………..

But it sounds great for her………………

With a shock…

But he held her by hand………..and start to walk…
now can u please move or want me to take u in my arms……once again………..

Geet in shock.and realized…………….no…..i will walk,,.

And she entered int o the jungle……………….

He is walking in front…..and she is back…………..

Suddenly she start babbling……….what is this life…………

Complete full of adventure……………………

Every day one life first in cottage and second………………in jungle……………..

Maan………turned back…………..

He came in front of her.and said…….

If u use ur energy in walk….rather than in words…then it could be useful,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,in moving out of jungle…………….

And donot use ur brain,,,,,,,,,,,,which u had little quanity………….ok……….

And he turned front……………

She got the instance that he called her dumb………..

What the hell he is thinking,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

As out of anger………she stepped on stone,,,,,,,,,and above to fall on ground but as soona s maan turned back,,,,,,,,,,,she landed on maan……..and maan ,,,,,,,,,,as not prepared……falled on the ground along with her………………………

 

She falled flat..on his chest…………….as maan felt pain………………………….

As ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,his anger out of his mind……………….

But as the soft body touched his chest the emotions started…………………..

He quickly……tolds………….

Why don't u use that big eyes while walking………..instead of words……………………….

 

She twinkled the eyes and got the poin.t………as she lifted herself…………………….

So maan…………

He make himself straighten,,,,,,,,,,,and started walking,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He wondered why she is not answering back………………..

She said……kya insaan hay…………………hero samaj tha yeh kya…………jungle hay akele ladki…………….

Maan listened to the words………………………

He turned and started walking back………….

Who mein majak kar rahii thi…………….mera matlab who nahii tha………………….

He is busy in walking towards her……….with a continuous stare geet closed her mouth with duppatta

He came towards her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,came close..too close……………………. Like it was…………………….

And he looked at the back..and remove structure………….

On seeing that …………geet screamed…………….

And closed her eyes……………

He closed her mouth………….

Why are u shouting………..

 Because there is snake in my shoulder……….and ur saying not to shout,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Yes……….ur not shouting………..inviting the animals for dinner of both…………..

I had no problem…….i can climb trees………………as u told im jungle………….e..but what about u …dreamy girl……………..can u do it…………………

And turned back,.andstart smiling……………………

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geet why he is smiling…………..

geet there is one way…………………..try to talk to him……………….

As geet.is lookinga t his smile…………………

He stopped smiling,,,,,,,,,,,

Why u stop smiling……………u look good while smiling…………..

She said and start smiling…………………….

 

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Geet is moving along with him………..

She is too tired…

Where as maan is moving with confidence……………….as he know each part of jungle………………

Suddenly he looked back.at geet,,,,,,,

Meantime geet is babbling………………regarding her fate……..oh no ab kya huwa.as with in a fraction of second…..she saw maan dragged her at the tree….and close her mouth with his hand………..and slamed her to the tree………he is too close that geet cannot breathe………………..

But he is looking at the other direction…………..as he find the creature moved to the other side……….he relived…………….but his hand is still on geet mouth…………

As he turned towards ,,,,,,geet and found her sobbing……….he relived her………….

Geet.short of breathe………couging heavily…….

 

Maan:tum teek hoo………

Geet:Ware wah.pehle mu pe haat rake …saase band karthe hoo,,,,,,,,,aur,,,,upar se …………….pooch  e tho hoo…….e teek ho ay aaa nahi.tum insaan hoo………………

But maan is cheking top to toe…..he realized that she is wearing anklets which are making sounds……………….

He looked at her anger……….

,maan:nikaloo…………….

Geet"what………………she is confused…………

Are payal…………….jo tune pehana.jise wajah se problem h o rahe hay……………….

As she is ready to remove one is stuck………….maan tried to remove but……………..it was…….broken……….

Geet had became sad………..

Maan:why ur sad…………………

Geet:crying………………………….

Maan:what's wrong………………..

Geeet:u never know emotions as yeh mere maa ke akhari nishanii……………hay…

Maan:\felt bad and said…………………even I didn't have mother…………I lost her before…………………..

Geet……….felt bad……..

And they rested at the tree….

Maan:dekoo tum yeha ped ke pass so jaoo………..

Geet:mdin tumare pass nahii so unki……………..mein yehi teek hoo……….

Maan gave a look……..and rested his head at the tree………….

But cannot sleep as she is near sand…….

Suddenly she realized a creature moving towards her,,,,,,,,,,,

She woke up,,,,,,,,,with a jerk……………and .reached thetree………..

Maan open his eyes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He tried to move as…he tilted his head,,,,,,as geet is sleeping in his shoulder,,,,,with hand onnhis waist,,,,,,,,

He smiled a moment………..he looked at her,,,,,,,,,,smiling face…………her baby…….type attitude.and he saw the broken anklet.she is holding…….

He thought……..how can a p;erson could be that much wild to kill such a innocent girl……for money………………..

His blood boiled of the fact…………..

He tried to wake up geet……..

As geet opened her eyes…………….she found……….her headis rested in his shoulder……………..

She woke up/…………..she felt embrassed……….

Maan..started walking…………………..

Geet followed him……………

Geet:yeh kya ho rahe mujko…………………..kitna door rahene ke koshish kar rahii hii,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,jitna uske pass kyon jaa rahe hoo…………….

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