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Geet is busy playing with the rabbit'..she is running''.suddenly rain is started'''.

And geet is still busy in playing'''

She is wearing a white dress'.which is became wet .through rain.she is

She is smiling'''she is flewing her chunnery''.and roaming in the rain'''.

Her every part is visible''''.

Slim body'''completely wet'''''.

Her beauty ,,,,,,,,is feast'''''

completely drenched'.but still she is enjoying the rain'''''.

Maan came to window'.he saw playing.he is completely lost in beauty'''''.

He walked toas if he is in trance''''his eyes are checking from head to toe

She is like a beautiful white rose in water''.her hair locks on her face''''

And she is completely wet trembled due to cold'''''''..

And still she is enjoying the rain'''..

Suddenly she felt the eyes'.she turned to find maan'.which is looking at her without a blink'..she then realized 'that the other men went out taking along with chintu'.and she completely forget that maan and she are alone''''suddenly some unknown fear stuck her..and she ran back to the room'''''''

Maan.confused due to her behaviour'''''he couldn't understand why she ran inside''''..and suddenly he realized what he is doing''''..

God damm.why she is that beautifull''that he cannot take eyes from her'''''

Why she smiles like a angel''so that he cannot forget'''.

Why she is trying to deviate him from his mission'''.and making him to forget'''.everything'''''oh god..what 's wrong with him''

Neither he could avoid her'..nor with her'''''..what's going on''

Within his thoughts he forget.that he is actually moving in stairs'.

Unknowingly'.he entered into her room'''''..

His eyes turn the side ''and shocked to see''''..

She is behind the curtains'..changing'..into other suit''''

He could see the curves of her body'.as she is taking her kameez''''.

And she also taken her pant'' ''..he could see the thighs''

She is like a perfect female created by god''with every inch with beauty''''.

He cannot take eyes''as she realized somebody around'.there'.

She quickly got ready''and came out'' find nowhere''''where maan is hiding back at the wall'''''.

And she came to check the window''..

But she couldn't find anyone'.as she take her head back.leaving the hair fall on maan's face making him'''''..completely lost''''''''.

He could see her brushing her hair'.as water drops on her face'''''..

As he slowly moved to her''''''stand as back facing him'''.

He slowly moved her hair..and kissed her back'''.she soon turned back to find..him.and moved back'.he moved front steps'''and she moved back'''''''

She is moving back'''''.and he forwarded'''''..she realized she is back to wall no place to move''''..he put hands over her side'''.making her cornered'''''

He brought his face close to her''''''

Very close to face'''and kissed the water droplets'''.on her face''''

He saw the beautiful eyes'''''..where he fall on first sight.

He saw lips which are trembling''''.

He slowly''''kissed the lips''''''''.

Suddenly he saw the sound'''''.and her scream'''..

He realized he was dreaming''.and looked the way'''''he runs to the side.where geet is standing on tool'scaring by something''.

He turned side to find'..a scaring cockroach'''''

First he felt surprised and suddenly he smiled''''.

As geet got angry'''''..look'but as soon as smile'''.

She wondered.that this guy can laugh''''''..

He look as cute while smiling''''.

Why are u laughing''''''

Maan.looked at her.and said .why are scaring that small''.innocent.creature''' are too scary for her ''''

Geet:what  do u mean that im scary''''''

Maan:yes..u are too scary'.ur scaring that innocent creature with u scary big big eyes''''''..

Geet:im I too scary' she got down'and looked into the mirror'.

Geet handa or scary''''what..she is checking''''.

While the cockroach had already left the place''''.

She maan''

Why di d u said that im looking normal;;;and im not scary''''.why u said that '''''..

He said other wise ur going to destroy my furniture''''as ur standing on stool as it break any time''to save my furniture and also the creature which will get heart attack of your screams and eyes'''...if something happens to it'..who is going to responsible''''''..

Geet got angry'''ur disgusting.and ur so bad''.evil''..

Dust daanav'''.rakhas'ur monster..sab ''''hindi film mo ke viallian''''..sab kuch hoot um''.

He left the room'.smiling'''''.as she is still scolding''

By that ahmed saw maan'..smiling'as he wondered '''howwmany years gone of seeing that his boss'.smile''''''.

He also hear the scolding him..

He wondered why he is not yelling at her''''''smiling'''..

Something is changing'.he .is still thinking''''''''..

While geet.stopped''''''

And remembered his eyes '''.

Checking her from head to toe'''''

What's wrong'''''.with him''..

And she even scolded'..also'''''''''.

But if he returt  back at night,,,,,,,,,then''''''

She slowly peep her head''and heard the sound of his jeep'''.

She jumped.with happiness'lagtha hay,,''''''..he is going out at night'..he is not going tobe with us''''''

Yaa.hoo''.geet''''.she started dancing''''''''''

And to the shocking effect,,,,,,,,,,

She saw man'''..who is firing.and aiming at her'''

Within a span.od second''.she don't know what to d o as she stand as a statue''.

Suddenly she felt she is dragged by some one.and with in a minute'''

She felt a huge arm'.around her waist'''''to protect her''''.

And his left hand' busy In firing back the person'''''

And his eyes re in fire again''''''..

She gasped ''.and close her eyes''''

She is so scared.and hugged him'''''..
with a shock'.he felt the hug.and the tighten of her hands''''''..

As his heart lost in a moment'''..and second thought'''..

His mind told to handle the situation''''''.

As he know her state of condition'' she is in fear''''..

His concerned nature came back''and make another turn''''..

and hugged her back''to protect her to be fired''''..

with  aslight insgtance of the curtain''''''''

as he moved'''..

he saw ahmed '''''fire on the person''''..

he woowed''.

And maan.sighed in relif''''

But geet still holding him tight,,,,,,,,,,,in her embrace'''''''.

He is completely lost''.

She heard .the silence''''

Maan.hold her'and said'open ur eyes'''''

And leave me so that I can move'''''.\

Geet open her eyes'.to find the browny eyes'''looking at her''She felt in concern''in that eyes''.

He dragged her into the jeep''.

And within a jerk he started the jeep'''.

Part ends


Edited by srilu_123 - 29 November 2010 at 4:13am

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Maan smiled'''and he forwards his hand'' touch the lips''''''

Geet feel shy,,,,,,,,,,,,,and move from there''''''..

He caught her dupatta''..and reached her back''and nape'''..

And kissed there smoothly'''.

Geet felt 10,000 volts current into her body''''.

He then untied the dori of salwar''.and squeeze it to the right shoulder.and kissed her there'''''''..

He hold her tight

And make her to turn around''''.and kissed her eyes which are closed'''

Geet open the eyes'''I love your eyes when I first met''u on the night'''''..

Geet sighed''and open her eyes'''''..

I was lost in most beautifull eyes''''..i ever met which is seeing me in fear''''''''''.

Geet smiled''

And the sweet smile''''

And the beautiful ears''

He is in his words along with his actions'..

He took his left ear ring'.and kissed there''''''right ear ring and kissed there'..and then to mouth'''.and around the neck'''hugging her tightly''''

Geet is loosing her self control'''''maan see this and he picked her up and took her to thebed..and made her to laid on thebed''''

Lay on her side'''''''..

He is kissing her body''''..showing his hidden love,passion,,,,,,,,,,for her

In meantime geet In her land'''''enjoying every moment'''''''

He kissed her abdomen''''''butter files flew in her stomach''''.

He is kissing every part of the body'''''

Every inch,,,,,,,,,and biting lightly In few places making geet to moan'''''''

And finally he reached the last stage''''''''..

Maan''''' her pleasure'''passion,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet realized that he had undressed her ''.and himself'''''

And finally he had released her'''''''''after the climax is over''''..geet felt the pain and pleasure'''.

She had given everything to him'''''

She understand how much she loved him'..

And howmuch he loves her''''''..

And his husband''.mr maan singh khurana''''''''.had make her dream alive'''and she is now his'''''''''''''

At the morning'.she find bed is empty''..

As she remembered that maan had woke up and dressed and kissed on her forehead and saying .bye sweetheart'''.

Imagine if ths happens in GHSP actually

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