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Geet in in her room

What 's wrong with him………

There is somethingin his eyes………….

I don't know……….she knows that he hurted her……………..

A the same time…chintu came to wards…………….ahmed………….

Chintu"bhai why ur boss hit that girl………….

Ahmed:u guys didn't regret whatever done………………….

Yes….

If anyone sees u both what will be the future…………..

Chintu"no body sees us and recongise us………………

Ahmed……how……………..

Chintu"because im disguised as villager and geet completely covered herself with gunghat…………………….and nobody can sees her face…………….

At that they are aware that maan is listening to their conversation…………………

He felt very bad…………..

He came back to the room..and find her she is sleeping peacefully……but she is shivering……..

He came to her and covered her with blanket…….and see the hair locks on her face…………..and moon light she looks beautifull………………..but at the same time he saw the wound right behind her lip………….he got up and bought a ointment…to put on .but he lost and touched her lips……………..

Geet got up suddenly with a jerk…………….

She looked at him as he is seeing without a blink……………

She adjusted herself to the wall…as he is too close to her……………..

He smiled at her act….and move forwards…………………..

Geet moved her head back.a slight tension building in  her…………..

He slowly moved as she close her eyes……………she is felt his hands on her lips………………….then she realized likea pasted item……………she open the eyes and found that he is applying ointment to her wound………………….

As he finished……………………….and he get back to the room…………..

Geeet still in thoughts……….kaamal hay insaan.pehle Martha hay.aur phir malam lagatha hay…………kya hay hey……………

As she laid down and close her eyes……..

Maan………..cannot sleep .as her lips are disturbing….him…her touch…………………he is totally confused………………..as he see a shadow……….

He turned with pistol…..

It is ahmed………….

Ahmed:boss….no need to be so rude to her………..

Maan:lookeda t him and move to his room………..

I cannot be rude to her…………………but even I cannot be close to her…………………….

And I don't know why………..i nee dto be far away from her……………………..

Next day morning.he woke up as geet.shouting catch it….come on……………….

He reached the window….as geet and his assistants are running after sometime…….

He looked clearly.as It is rabbit………………….

And finally she caghtit…….and smiling,,..at her victory………

Hey mere naam ..geet handa,,,,,,,,,,,,,hay…………………..tuje mein ne pakda hay…………………………dekh mein tuje khan a nahii banungi……………..tum kitne pyarri hoo.mujse dosti karogi…phir hum khelenge………………..lekin..haa………….kisee se darr matt……..iss ghar mein ek sheer hay……………..joo roar nahii kartha .lekin sheer ke saari adadt hay………bus usee door rehna hay……………..

Soon maan realized that she is referring to him………………

He got anger………….

But as soon as he saw she is smiling…he lost in her smile……………………..

Yeh laadki.itne parishaan mein bhi kaise has sakthe hay……………………

 

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Posted: 24 November 2010 at 8:49am | IP Logged
awsome..love it.
do continue plz.
thx

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Posted: 28 November 2010 at 5:24am | IP Logged
plzzz..... cont..... really interesting

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Posted: 28 November 2010 at 5:46am | IP Logged
nice update dear

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Awesome.  Add me to ur PM list.

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awesome story dear
can u plz pm me whenever u update
i already sent u a request

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pls do continue the next part soon..

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nice update waiting 4 your next part.

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