Fan Fictions

   

kismat ka khel updt 05/11 last part (Page 4)

Post Reply New Post

Page 4 of 75

srilu_123

IF-Rockerz

srilu_123

Joined: 07 January 2009

Posts: 6001

Posted: 18 November 2010 at 4:16am | IP Logged

Geet open her eyes

She is trembled under bed sheet,………..

It is morning………..

She open her eyes fully .then suddenly remembered that she is playing with water///////////

And she suddenly looked at her feet…………

Suddenly she felt dizzy…..and surprised as she remembered lightly maan………….sucking her blood and touching her feet……………….

And tieing with cloth………….

Her senses had flesed up……………..'

He touched me again……………………..

First he lift me into his arms………carried me ………..now he literally touched me………….

By that time she heard………….a sound………….

At the door……

Doctor came in…………..

Hello sweet girl……how r u….u had fight with your death and successfully defeated……..

U know the creature which bite u was one of the dangerous snake speicies……….

Be careful dear it is hardcore jungle……

Her mind flashed…suddenly…she want to ask the questions….as the lip is struck on seeing maan…………………

She rememebered maan lifting her in his arms, sucking blood……………

What ;s wrong with me…….why im supposing to do………..

Yeh insaan muje college se utakar yaha layaa………………lekin muje bachaya kyon…………….

But cannot say  a Word…………on seeing maan………..

Because he is not looking a ther…………

he went with doctor……………..

on the other hand………

the doctor….well mr maan…………………I will take a leave……..

I think ur enough to take care of her………

See u bye…..

Thanks doctor.maan replied……..

Name is maan…………….

Ahmed came in………….

Sir everything is ready……………..

Maan looked back to his men……….

They shook their head…………….

It is to keep an eye on geet……………

He board to his jeep……to see the window……..where geet is looking at him…..

He looked at geet………..

Geet moved from there……..

Kya hay iss insaan main…ajeeeb hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,lekin why im dare staring at him…

SHe came down with…..where chintu.is there………..

All men are watching them…..

Chintu bhayaa………….

Chintu shocked……………………

And smiled….chintu bhayaa…..never dare to think about her…

'warna who bijali ban kart ere par giregea………he remembered maan's punching shots..

Nahii……….

Dekho……….muje yeha se bahar jaana hay……………………

He said how…………

geet and chintu manager to escape………

but suddenly maan sensed the danger…………………..

he saw a weird man……..following in the disguise of beggar……………..

he saw him,…at the time when he crossed his home………….

Ahmed and other are shocked as maan………………..stopped the jeep………….

With the surprise….he looked at veera…..who is his assistant…………..

Maan……….i will be back………..

And suddenly the beggar felt where maan had gone………

He didn't see maan is behind him…..and hit him hard……….

Before he could run away……

Maan got hold of him……tell me where are ur followers……….agar seedi bataya………toh bach sak the hoo,,,,,,warna apne jaan se haat d o betoogiiiiiiiiiiii…….

He signled to the left…….maan ordered his followers…………

Suddenly he remembered .then he droke back to the cottage………

Geet is very happy……….as she is free out……..

And she is doing some shopping with chintu…………….

And maan came back with a flew////////////he saw the place…………….

Which is messed////////// he looked at the window.and find geet is not there…………his blood was boiled…………………….a unknown fear stuck him………………kahi…….rana ke adami ne use utakar legayaa hay kya……….as the other 4 people are dead……….

First time maan singh khurana worried of someone………..

Lot of pain in his eyes………

He suddenly see geet is coming on other direction with some plastic bag………….chintiu along with her…they are laughing on some jokes……………….

Maan got very angry………..and with surprise he grab her hand……….and gave a tight slap on her face…………………..with that she fell on ground……and blood is on her lips…………..

And chitu was horrified…………………..

As ahmed……….tum log kaha hoo….tum log ke befakoofi kewajah se .hamere kitne log mare gayee pata hay……………

And he is fuming on him………..

But geet lifted her up………….she didn't react she got inside the room………………….

As she entered into the kitchen………………………..

Maan…….realised a minute.what I have done………….i should feel happy……if she didn't gone of the house eithere she should get kidnapped or killed…………….

Now whata………..

He moved to the room…….he realized that she is in kitchen….he taught that she is doing to herself……………

Something……….

The whole incident he was shocked…….

As he saw that the room………..is very neat it is just looking lik e a kitchen…….

And geeet.is arranging something on the shelf………..she cleaned…………….

The entire thing………………..

He surprised tha t how can she do all these work

She taken some alloo and atta ….and busy in preparing…………..stuff…………

She is completely busy…………….

He thught she would be crying……….

But he felt bad when he saw blood still coming from her lips……………

He turned away….

After sometime she came with plates in hand……………….

Ahmed looked at surprise.even chintu too…………..

Chintu bhaiyya……..aeelle lijeeye..garam garam.paratha………….shudd ghee ke……………………aap ke lie………..

Such mein mein is mein jeher  nahii milee….agar shaq hay…toh mein khaatee hoo.

And she take a bite.waha geet wah……….kya khana banayaa.pata jab bhi muje hostelke khane boring lag tha mein ape hatoose kuch banakar……………khata a thi ……….im a good cook………………

They both laughed …………………..she served ahemed.and veera..they als o ate……………..

But she got struck as she need to give to maan………..

But she got up with a plate In hand…….

He is in chair

Without a shirt……………………….

He looked at her………………….

But she didn't look and she kept plate on the table

As she is ready to move he grabbed her at waist……….

Geet shocked……………………

He drag her close .and said.why are udoing this,,,,,,,,,,not necessary……………………..

Geet:didn't answer

Maan:answer………

Geet:an grlyh……………im doingnfor myself…………..

The place is sticks……………………and I cannot eat that boring sandwitches………………….past 2 days………I am dieing of food………'not for u an………..she stopped…….as maan.staringa t her without a blink……………………

On the other hand.the blood dropping on her lip mae him to loose self control.to lick it…………..

He set fre egeeet..

Geet ran towards her room……….

Part ends

The following 30 member(s) liked the above post:

star432lathaaumans22shreya satisharniindia5imli959290860623princesssarahsanjuleesree.maneetmishtibmaansi007doosheekatrishapCutee999puth-shamima--SmexySmile--Veritaserum-ambbihamrk-1--aarthi--rsroopalipreethia..Gurti-Kash..ana56BDayGal-11Janchavvi16dobrevagasmsNeelambari..

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "kismat ka khel updt 05/11 last part (Page 4)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

ambbiha

IF-Rockerz

ambbiha

Joined: 20 August 2010

Posts: 7590

Posted: 18 November 2010 at 5:18am | IP Logged
awesome part
pls pm me ur next updateWinkWinkWinkWinkWink

maansi007

Goldie

maansi007

Joined: 08 August 2010

Posts: 1730

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 1:53am | IP Logged
gr8 part luved it update soon nd
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm us so it would be easy to read ur ff plzzzzzzzzz

Angel.Khushi

Senior Member

Angel.Khushi

Joined: 31 July 2010

Posts: 653

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 3:35am | IP Logged
hey........ this is really good.....awesome....plzz cont...Clap

trishap

Goldie

trishap

Joined: 21 November 2008

Posts: 2183

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 10:11am | IP Logged
nice update ..
plz add me to pm

shah10

IF-Sizzlerz

shah10

Joined: 03 May 2010

Posts: 19448

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 10:19am | IP Logged
awsome..supreb..
do continue plz.
thx

..Gurti-Kash..

IF-Sizzlerz

..Gurti-Kash..

Joined: 19 September 2007

Posts: 14178

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Awesome Updates
Cont Soon

mrk-1

IF-Rockerz

mrk-1

Joined: 30 July 2010

Posts: 8945

Posted: 19 November 2010 at 10:56am | IP Logged
do add me to ur pm list ...

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

barkha_90 1198 439551 05 May 2012 at 3:10am
By TANVI_SEXY
AR love story Part 23 P. 73- LAST PART

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 79 80

..Mira.. 634 261222 17 January 2012 at 1:00am
By chcolaty
khel khel mein...Part 3 on pg 5~~~~~

2 3 4 5 6 7

desiigirl19 55 5454 29 March 2009 at 8:03am
By AngelsHeaven
Khel Khel Main: Last part up: page 67

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 86 87

neha9 695 181909 21 February 2006 at 6:42am
By spoiledbrat
Bewafa-LAST PART(pg.44)2nd to last(pg.43)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

simplyconfused 441 105253 07 February 2006 at 9:12pm
By nabz8888

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.