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Geet is in unconsciousness''''.

At that time maan saw her'''''

He stared at her beauty''''..

She is so fragle,beautifull'''.he never thought she is so beautifull''''''''.

She is taking his senses''''.

He never blinked ''his eyes'''..

But as soon as he heard the sound''..he came back to the senses and he took geet into his arms''carried away to the back door''and made her to sit on his jeep''''..\

And he sit on the driver seat'..and gave a look to her''.

The hair is locking her beautifull face'''''''she is very beautifull''he looked at her exam paper'..he felt sad''but drove to the other side'..where on the other side armaan is finding for geet.he remembered the person cam e between'..he realized that somebody had taken geet'but who is he'''''

Maan got a call'''''

He answered ''''''.she is safe'''''''.and do not worry''''..

She will be fine'''''''''''

And he is driving''''''..

He remembered that she is the same girl at the  night''''

He had all the details of her''''

But he cannot concentrate'''.as the girl is distracting him'''''''..

He keep on staring at the angel structure lying beside him'

The duppatta is flewing''''..the hair is locking on her face'''''

She is so beautifull'''''..she is like angel'''''''''..

He wants to touch her ''''

He wants to feel her'''''''.

He look at the watch'''''

And with infew minutes he reached a place'''''..where few..people are waiting for them,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

On the other hand,,,,,,armaan is furious'''''.he knows that hehad missed the plan''''.

He need to get her back'''''''''

But he donot know how'''''

And he is wondering how''''''..

Geet had gained consciousness. she opened her eyes'''''.

She is in  jeep'''''''

She rubbed her eyes''''..

Where am i'''.what im I doing here'''''im to be in college''''''..

And she remembered that she is coming out of the class''''..

And she remembered that somethingat the nose''''.

She whispered''''''.

And suddenly she realized that she is kidnapped''''

She wanted to free back'''.

She jumped from the jeep''''''''''.

She started running'''.

Maan came back'''.

His jeep was struck as the radiator had heated up.he gone to get some water''''.

Where the hell she gone''he looked around and shocked''''''

She is running she found a place''where some '''.people are sitting ''''''.

Along with this a boy.saw geet''''..

Oye chintu//////////////jalde se hamare liye chai laa'''..warna tere tandoori''''..karenge hum''''''''..

geet''' did n't realise''..she is hopping''''her breathing is heavy'''''..so her chest is going high and lower'''''.

Her dress is wet,,,,,,,,,,,,,as she is sobbing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The guys looked her weirdly''''''..

One of them reached the spot''''''''.

And tries to catch geet's hand'.and dragged her'''''

Geet is trying to get away from her'''''.

She is so scared.and the trying to free herself from that demon''

The others are simply enjoying'''''''.

And the others dragged her to the shubble place'''''as one of them threw her duppatta '''''''..as he is going to kiss her

Suddenly geet had listened the scream'''''.

As the person who held tightly was on the ground''''

Another scream,''''as the second one got the punch'''

Geet open the eyes to find a hugee''''.strange arms'and body'''''''using his arms as weapns'''''..and kicking them in is style''''''.

His arms curve''''are clearly visible all are on the ground''''''one of them remove the chaku'''''.

And the person turned his hand''.and kickeda t the back''''..

All of them on ground''''.

He turned out and held geet close to him''''..'

Why did u move out of the jeep''''''

What the hell u r thinking'''''..

You cannot get rid of me ok''''
so donotttry to escape'''''.ok''''''''.

And his browny eyes with anger''''.

She is like scared crow'''''''''..

He dragged her to the jeep''''''.and he also drag chintu'..hiding behind the tree''.and he put him on the jeep''..

He came near to geet'''.bend downwards'''..geet grasped''''..hetook her duppatta'.and tied her hands with it to the hanger'''..and he start driving,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,'

He is driving''''.

After some time''''''''''''

He looked at her she closed her eyes''''''''.

 

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Edited by srilu_123 - 09 November 2010 at 7:05am

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Geet had woke up

She find her in a roo,m

The room is dark..yet still there is a window………..

She woke up and reached the window…………

She had see……….a beatifull mountain……………sourrounded by trees

At a moment she enjoyed the beauty.then she suddenly realized geet are u nuts………..you are kidnapped………..and the guy he is more dangerous then…….the guys.then she looked her dress………..as she has no duppatta but a over coat Is there…………

She got angry and threw the coat n the bed………………..

As she is ready to move………….

She saw a person coming to the room………….

She hid behind………….
as she is ready to hit the person….the person hold her by hand………………

She is stopped……………

He is the same…………………

Kyon apna energy waste karthe hooooooo.

Yeha se bhag ne koshish nahii karma………waha cuppord mein tumare kapade hay jalde se fresh hona……….teek hay…….

Geet open the cupboard to find the clothes all of her…………

She is thinking…..

Are waha kitne planning hay……….

Aaj kal kidnappers bhi plan karthe kya……………..

Babajii………aap mere life mein problems ke alawa kuch diya hay kya……..

Pehle…………..us dev ko………….jo college se mere peeche pada tha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Aur muje yeha…………..armaan muje lene ke liye anane wala hay………….lekin who pata nahii kaha gayab ho gayaa…..

Aur yeha yeh dust danav jungla ke haath men dedee……………..

And geet came out of the room……………..

 

She realized that the place is sourrounded by mountains…………..

And it is jungle……………..

She can heard the sounds of kukoo…………….she will enjoy it someother times,…but now she is scared………………

She saw few men………………down………..

And a person………..chintu………..who………..is same like her,are yehto who petrol bunk wala…………

She quickly ran down the stairs….she like the scenary…….

At that time she heard the sound of water………….

She forgot everything,…………

And she start playing with water…………..

The guys are searching her round……

Maan realized she is not there………………

He run to find her……….

His eyes were struck………..geet is half in water……She is playing with water…

Suddenly………….his eyes turn wild and he takes his shirt.,

All his followers are looking him shock including…….chintu………..

He jumped into water………………….and lifted into arms……….

And get back to land……………..

Geet was shocked………

She start struggling……………….let me go monster,………………….

Maan …………saw her……………

He bent down.and geet closed her eye.s………..

He took a knife from her pant……..

Geet suddenly screamed……….

As maan………took the creature which is circled around her leg……………………

He killed that ……………and threw it on water……………….

He carried her to the room……………

As he realized that there is bite in her leg……………..

He was shocked…………

He bent his head……………….he cut the wound………spilled the blood……..and take a cloth and wrapped down…..

And ordered his strangers……….to call the docter………..as he know the creature stick geet is deadly dangerous snake speicies,,,,,,,,,,,,rarely find in waters…………………..

 

His eyes re suddenly teary when he see geet…………

He is enjoying when she is playing in water,……….

But when he saw something is moving in water……………….

And coming towards geet…….he jumped to save her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Doctor came to them…………….

Mr maan………………..

Bahut dino ke baad……………

And he examined the geet,,,,,,,,,,

Darne ke baat nahii hay.acchaa huwa maan  aap ne pehle se first aid kardiya………….nahii toh baaat bikad sakthi hahy…………

Lekin isee araam ke jarorat hay…………………….'

Khayal rakana inka………….

Teek hay……………………………………..

Maan teek hay sir…………………

Ahmed cam e in………..Boss apse jarori baat karne hay,,,,,,,,,,,,

Boss kabar milee hay.ke rana ke log jungle mein hay……..aur who ham par hamla karne ke liye….yeha aa sakthe hay,,,,,,,,haame yeha se bagna hoga………..

Maan  looked at geet………………..

And told ahmed to be quiet………….

As it disturbing geet……………….

He Came back…………………

He rememebered the doctor's words about gee t health….

And he cannot risk geet life………..

As before that everything is profession for him………

But geet case it is different………………..

He said I donot want to change plan………

Ahmed I know rana wants that .he wants us to come out.then he can attack us………..

But im  not to succeded rana's plan…….

So make sure u guys be carefull…………

And he move from there

Ahmed……yesa pehle baar huwa hay,,,,,,,,,,,,ke maan ne ………….apna pla n badla……………….

He came back to geet…………

He called ganapat………..to bring some food from the village……………..

Yeh ladki bhinaa ajeeb hay…………..

And he is near geet's bed………..

And he closed his eyes on the couch…………….

Dream…….he is sourrounded by many people shooting guns…….and suddenly he saw a hand and a girl in white dress…………

She is like angel..she dragged her to a place where full of flowers,,,,,,,,,,and smiling………..

She turned her face smiling at him…………..

Geet……………………………

He open the eyes and say geet…………….

He turned to look at geeet sleeping peacefully………

 Wind is blowing……………

He saw it is cold……………..

And it isnmoon light……………….

Her face is glowing…………….

Her hand ison her stomach…………….

Due to breathing……..the high and lowers of her chest………….

She is smiling like ababy…………

He is wondering…………………….

How beautifull she is…………

He smiled and said…………

I don't know might be frmthis day…………I cannot sleep……………….

Then he heard a song…………\

As some village people…………………..

Raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai
Uski naram kirnon ki roshni mein tumko dekhta hoon to dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai

Meri is tanhaai mein mere is veerane mein
Meri is tanhaai mein mere is veerane mein
Rang leke tum aayi 
Phir bhi sochta hoon main
Kya yahan tum sachmuch ho
Ya ho sirf parchhaai
Khwaab jaisa banta hai aur toot jaata hai

Raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai
Uski naram kirnon ki roshni mein tumko dekhta hoon to dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai raat ki hatheli par chaand jagmagaata hai 
he felt the moment……………

'he told to himself…………

Yeh kya ho raha hay muje……….

Kya hay iss ladki mein………….

Jo muje pagal karne mei n lagee hay…………

He rememebered …………..

His dream………..his ambition……..of being a army officer………..

Special officer………………..

Of his grand father……………

Thrown down………..

He hate his father………..as he didn';t care his wife……….maan's mother…………………………

But still m aan cares for his family………..

But he stays away from them………..

 

 

Precap:rana……………..tume kya lagtha ……..pata hay..kisse pangaa lerahe hoo…………..maan singh khurana……………

Chalta phirta volcano……….

Dimak………….chainikya ka…..

Taakat………….andazaa nahii laga sakthe hoooooooo…………

Agar sari …………….veertha ek insaan hay…..toh woh hay maan singh khurana……………woh agar plan karthahay naa.toh hazare hoo criminals……….yeh police wali…..yeh miltary wale bhi .uke samne kuch nahii samje……..

Samaj gayaa……….aramaan looking at rana…………..

 

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