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Geet open her eyes

She is trembled under bed sheet,………..

It is morning………..

She open her eyes fully .then suddenly remembered that she is playing with water///////////

And she suddenly looked at her feet…………

Suddenly she felt dizzy…..and surprised as she remembered lightly maan………….sucking her blood and touching her feet……………….

And tieing with cloth………….

Her senses had flesed up……………..'

He touched me again……………………..

First he lift me into his arms………carried me ………..now he literally touched me………….

By that time she heard………….a sound………….

At the door……

Doctor came in…………..

Hello sweet girl……how r u….u had fight with your death and successfully defeated……..

U know the creature which bite u was one of the dangerous snake speicies……….

Be careful dear it is hardcore jungle……

Her mind flashed…suddenly…she want to ask the questions….as the lip is struck on seeing maan…………………

She rememebered maan lifting her in his arms, sucking blood……………

What ;s wrong with me…….why im supposing to do………..

Yeh insaan muje college se utakar yaha layaa………………lekin muje bachaya kyon…………….

But cannot say  a Word…………on seeing maan………..

Because he is not looking a ther…………

he went with doctor……………..

on the other hand………

the doctor….well mr maan…………………I will take a leave……..

I think ur enough to take care of her………

See u bye…..

Thanks doctor.maan replied……..

Name is maan…………….

Ahmed came in………….

Sir everything is ready……………..

Maan looked back to his men……….

They shook their head…………….

It is to keep an eye on geet……………

He board to his jeep……to see the window……..where geet is looking at him…..

He looked at geet………..

Geet moved from there……..

Kya hay iss insaan main…ajeeeb hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,lekin why im dare staring at him…

SHe came down with…..where chintu.is there………..

All men are watching them…..

Chintu bhayaa………….

Chintu shocked……………………

And smiled….chintu bhayaa…..never dare to think about her…

'warna who bijali ban kart ere par giregea………he remembered maan's punching shots..

Nahii……….

Dekho……….muje yeha se bahar jaana hay……………………

He said how…………

geet and chintu manager to escape………

but suddenly maan sensed the danger…………………..

he saw a weird man……..following in the disguise of beggar……………..

he saw him,…at the time when he crossed his home………….

Ahmed and other are shocked as maan………………..stopped the jeep………….

With the surprise….he looked at veera…..who is his assistant…………..

Maan……….i will be back………..

And suddenly the beggar felt where maan had gone………

He didn't see maan is behind him…..and hit him hard……….

Before he could run away……

Maan got hold of him……tell me where are ur followers……….agar seedi bataya………toh bach sak the hoo,,,,,,warna apne jaan se haat d o betoogiiiiiiiiiiii…….

He signled to the left…….maan ordered his followers…………

Suddenly he remembered .then he droke back to the cottage………

Geet is very happy……….as she is free out……..

And she is doing some shopping with chintu…………….

And maan came back with a flew////////////he saw the place…………….

Which is messed////////// he looked at the window.and find geet is not there…………his blood was boiled…………………….a unknown fear stuck him………………kahi…….rana ke adami ne use utakar legayaa hay kya……….as the other 4 people are dead……….

First time maan singh khurana worried of someone………..

Lot of pain in his eyes………

He suddenly see geet is coming on other direction with some plastic bag………….chintiu along with her…they are laughing on some jokes……………….

Maan got very angry………..and with surprise he grab her hand……….and gave a tight slap on her face…………………..with that she fell on ground……and blood is on her lips…………..

And chitu was horrified…………………..

As ahmed……….tum log kaha hoo….tum log ke befakoofi kewajah se .hamere kitne log mare gayee pata hay……………

And he is fuming on him………..

But geet lifted her up………….she didn't react she got inside the room………………….

As she entered into the kitchen………………………..

Maan…….realised a minute.what I have done………….i should feel happy……if she didn't gone of the house eithere she should get kidnapped or killed…………….

Now whata………..

He moved to the room…….he realized that she is in kitchen….he taught that she is doing to herself……………

Something……….

The whole incident he was shocked…….

As he saw that the room………..is very neat it is just looking lik e a kitchen…….

And geeet.is arranging something on the shelf………..she cleaned…………….

The entire thing………………..

He surprised tha t how can she do all these work

She taken some alloo and atta ….and busy in preparing…………..stuff…………

She is completely busy…………….

He thught she would be crying……….

But he felt bad when he saw blood still coming from her lips……………

He turned away….

After sometime she came with plates in hand……………….

Ahmed looked at surprise.even chintu too…………..

Chintu bhaiyya……..aeelle lijeeye..garam garam.paratha………….shudd ghee ke……………………aap ke lie………..

Such mein mein is mein jeher  nahii milee….agar shaq hay…toh mein khaatee hoo.

And she take a bite.waha geet wah……….kya khana banayaa.pata jab bhi muje hostelke khane boring lag tha mein ape hatoose kuch banakar……………khata a thi ……….im a good cook………………

They both laughed …………………..she served ahemed.and veera..they als o ate……………..

But she got struck as she need to give to maan………..

But she got up with a plate In hand…….

He is in chair

Without a shirt……………………….

He looked at her………………….

But she didn't look and she kept plate on the table

As she is ready to move he grabbed her at waist……….

Geet shocked……………………

He drag her close .and said.why are udoing this,,,,,,,,,,not necessary……………………..

Geet:didn't answer

Maan:answer………

Geet:an grlyh……………im doingnfor myself…………..

The place is sticks……………………and I cannot eat that boring sandwitches………………….past 2 days………I am dieing of food………'not for u an………..she stopped…….as maan.staringa t her without a blink……………………

On the other hand.the blood dropping on her lip mae him to loose self control.to lick it…………..

He set fre egeeet..

Geet ran towards her room……….

Part ends

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Posted: 13 years ago
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