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FF:Kheenche Mujhe KoiDor Teri Ore ch18,19 up pg 40 (Page 5)

Armu4eva Coolbie

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Posted: 08 November 2010 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Real nice update...always enjoy Abhay-Kabir interactions..!! Rocking stuff dear...Hug

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 12:05am | IP Logged
awesome part luv it......update soon

topsyturvy23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 November 2010 at 6:56am | IP Logged
hey mind blowing start loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
Fiza28 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 November 2010 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by roseflower_07

very nice...continue soon
thank u will update soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 November 2010 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by topsyturvy23

hey mind blowing start loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
Thank u Smile glad u enjoyed  itLOL sure will add u to the pm list will update soonBig smile
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Posted: 14 November 2010 at 8:55am | IP Logged
 Abhay walks over to kabir and whispers:  have you never heard the pharse Don't count your chickens before they hatch,
I don't think so, kyun ki agar tum yeh   kabhi  sunna  hai, you would know
better, cause the fact is  that the night is still young it aint over yet dude so beware anything can happen .
Kabir: oh you are so on  I gusse these means war.
Abhay: What do u think ki mein daar gaya yeah right  anyways   what fun is it if we end this now ,you might have started it  but I will end it in my own way and time but end mein pia  sirf aur sirf mere saath hogi so you better watch out .
Kabir is so fuming  that he  bangs his  hurt hand on the  table: Shit yaar  ouch!
Pia: kabir  tum phir se yeh haath ko hurt kya
Is it really that painful?
Kabir mumbles to himself: no not as much as the  thought of losing you to someone else
Pia: kya  tum ne kuch kaha kya ?
Kabir: no  kuch nahin.
Later that night the girls are getting ready for bed
Panchi looking at her ring and smiling and pia looking out the window at the moon  lost in Abhay's thoughts
Misha:  What is this yaa Panchi tum Daanish jiju ki  thoughts mein lost ho, understandable  laken pia I'm sure ki  tum woh  Abhay  ko yaad mein hain na ?
Panchi: Oh  I know why
Panchi:  humare Pia abhay kay hypnotic  eyes mein lost hai(panchi high-fives Misha) pia could it be love at first sight?  I mean just think about it maybe   it's destiny   
Misha: haha  yeah  pia  kuch tho hai kyun ki yeh pehle baar tum mille usko aur
Pia:  aur? aur kya tum dono na please I'm just tired lets sleep (she offs the light)
Misha (on's the light again and pulls the covers off her): oh no no dear not so fast mein tum ko itne aasaan se nahin sone  dogi understand right panchi
Panchi (sitting next to misha with hand folded) yup I'm with misha hear us out
Pia: Panchi  di tum bhi
Panchi: haan  like I said aaj tere zindigi mein  aise koi aye hai jo  tumse   itne flimy  romantic way mille  hai nay eh destiney hi hai pai  listen to me  he saved u  from almost getting hit by a car  then  you  meet him again at our party  papa's  business associate's son    then again he saved u from falling on the dance floor and  making  fool of yourself then he danced with you  then lastly and most important sign thaey proves it's destiny  your dupaata got stuck in his watch again very flimy but what I'm trying to explain is that things happen for a reason maybe he's the one ?
Misha: exactly aur jis tarha u cant stop smiling, talking  and thinking about him itself shows that  u like him
Pia : what are u guys even saying I just meet him aur
Misha : yes kyun ki agar abhi  yeh teri haal aise hai tho  phir   very soon you fall in love with him completely  
Pia: love haha  kya koi tere drink mein kuch mix kare kya ? kya baak baak you both  I don't  believe in love that only happens in books n movies
Panchi: I fell in love and am getting married pia  and u still say this?
Pia :yes di papa mama will pick who I marry  and I'm fine with it
Panchi:You know What Misha  just wait and see when are pia falls in love it will be a very special  love story that people will talk about
Misha : oh wow kya thought hai
People will say  Romeo Juliet , heer ranhja , lalaa mujnoo ,and now i  AbhiYa
Panchi and Pia: AbhiYa
Misha: don't look so stupid AbhiYa  I mean Abhay and Pia couple name  how is it ?
Pia very irrated throws pillows at them
Pillow fight starts then fially they stop
Pia: good night pulls covers over her head 
 Pia close's her eyes and tries to fall asleep but can't stop thinking  about what her sisters said about  abhay could it really be destiny  please help me god
That's it for now do comment
Precap: Pia abhay paired up as husband wife for a physiology class assignment

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Akankshaa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Aww, the chap was SO adorable! Embarrassed I'd love to see Panchi and Misha teasing Pia when she actually falls in love with Abhay! Embarrassed

Thanks for the PM. Hug
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Posted: 14 November 2010 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Lovely Chap's dear..
I read them all..n they'r pretty impressive..can't wait for the next..

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