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Aha.. awesome character sketch n great teaser..!! Cant wait for the first epi...Day Dreaming great work dear..Clap

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Hey, the teaser and the CS was very nice!
Loved it..

Please do PM me with the updates :)

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hey guys here it is  ch 1 is up do comment and press the like button  the pm list is add let me know if any one else wants to be add to it .Wink
 
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            Ishq bina kya marna yaaron

Ishq bina kya jeena

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

 Misha di  what are you doing  tum yeh step  phir se wrong  kare   

Pia  dude I  cant do this stupid dance  kyun tum muhje toreture  kar na chate hain haan just tell me why your killing me by making me look like a fool you know I have two left feet

Pia: misha di just calm down  we are doing this cause it our big sister  engagement  tonight and we want to make it rocking ok don't worry we will practice again ok let me show you how it goes  1st song is Ishq Bina(taal) which we both do  then you do By The Way(Aisha) then I do Say na Say na(Bluff Master) ,Then kabir  dances to Prem ki Naiyya (APKGK,) then Kabir and I dance to Billu rani(Goal), then finally  us 3 end with  Desi Girl(dostana)  do you understand misha di ?

Misha:   Kya dude agar  hum sab ghanne abhi kare tho sangeet, mehndi aur shaadi mein  kuch nahin hoga yeah.

Pia:  don't worry misha di thanks to our lovely bollywood industry  there  a lot more songs to dance to  so it's cool, here let me just show you the steps again  then u will   do great

Pia is dancing to Ishq bina kya marna yaaron
Ishq bina kya jeena
Gud se meetha ishq ishq
Imli se khatta ishq ishq
Gud se meetha ishq ishq
Imli se khatta ishq ishqKabir walks  to pia
(puts his hand on  her shoulders and  sings Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Tumne ishq ka naam suna hai
Humne ishq kiya hai

 kabir winks  at pia , pia smiles)

Misha (pushes kabir hand away from pia) oye  kya t um AR Rehman ho  because the last time I checked you were  only loser  kabir so tum na please stop   yeh stupid singing se meri sister  ko impress nahin hoga  ok.

Kabir: kya Misha  please na  anyways I'm not that bad  what say pia?

Pia: um kabir  I agree with misha di  na hi tum akshay  khanna  ho aur mein ashwariya  nain  tho  dont think by flirting with me   I will let  the fact that your late slide we have to practice Panchi di and Daanish jiju's  engagement is tonight  loads of work to be down.

Misha di  I have to go to the store  and pick up few last min things for tonight .

Kabir: pia come  let me take you

Pia: No thanks kabir I have  the car  I'll go  you both stay and practice  I'll be back in a hour .

Pia leaves the store walking to the car in the middle of the rode  she drops a bag bends to pick it up  looks up sees a red car about hit her when out of no where a guy runs at the  speed of light and  pushes her away (just like in the promo she searches for him then a car almost hits her)

Pia   in Abhay arms , Abhay looking at her ,Pia staring in to his deep blue mysterious eyes

Pia just about to thank  him when her cell rings :  hello 

Misha : pia  tum itna time kyun  lag re ho  come fast we have to practice and  get raedy before people start to come  jaldi  aao .

Pia :haan di I'm just coming

She turns to say  thanks to abhay but he's gone .

Abhay see her get in the car and  leaves

Abhay thinking to himself: What just happened  today I can not  belive my eyes , yeh larki tho bilkul  meri  sukriti  ki jaise hai kya yeh sach hai'' no no  it cant be her it's impossible yeh kaise ho sak tha hain ' what the hell is happening  dam it .

Pia back home

Misha :pia why are you so chup  are you ok ?

 Pia  tells misha ,kabir and panchi  about what just happened: where did he come from just out of no where  and sved me aur his eyes itne hypnotic   hai I'm telling you guys it was as if his eyes were trying to tell me something aise  aankhaiyn  I've never seen  they were so spellbinding.

Misha :  haan just like hrithik 's in Krrish right ?

Pia  throws a pillow at her : just shut up I'm not joking

Misha :ok ok chill just calm down ab  tum na  stop thinking about your Krrish  and get ready .

Mrs. Dobriyal : Misha, Pia  tum dono ready nahin ho  kya  Kare itni late kyun ho jaldi karo , everyone is here aur haan misha  papa ke new business associates  bhi aaj  yeh party mein  hai tho I want all 3 of my beautiful  daughters  to look pretty and Panchi especially  you since it's your day.  

Pia and Misha are helping  serving guest

Mr. Dobriyal : Pia Misha tum dono come here

Pia and Misha: ji papa

Mr. Dobriyal : I'd like you to meet my new business associate Mr.Raichand  and his son Abhay

Pia Turns shocked to see him

Pia Misha :hi how are you?

Abhay :fine thank s

Mr. Dobriyal : tum youngsters  baat karo ,Mr.Raichand  would you like another  drink  come join me .

Pia: excuse us will just come pia grabs Misha hand di he the one I was telling you about today

Misha: what him you never mentioned he was good looking  .

Pia :di chup  I didn't get a chance to thank him so I will  go now where did he go ?

Little while later dances start

Kabir on the microphone  :ladies and gentalmen may I have your attention please 1st  of all  I 'd like to thank all of you for joining us on  my bro's and best friend  uff Daanish and Panchi's  enagement tonight we have loads of  entertainment for you all first up Pia and Misha with the song  Ishq bina

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Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Gud se meetha ishq ishq
Imli se khatta ishq ishq
Vaada ya pakka ishq ishq
Dhaaga ye kachcha ishq ishq
O...
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
 

Abhay turns right when the song starts says to him self: what ishq bina that was sukrti's fav song  this cant be  happening.

Kabir up next we have Misha

Misha :panchi this one is for u always be like this

By The Way Lyrics

Tumse kehdenge hum saari baatein
Yeehhh'..
Kaise hain apne din kaisi raatein heeyy'
Koi na koi hulchul rehti hai dil mein
Harpal' log hai kehte paaal' humko oohhoo

Here we goo!!!
By the way on the way
Humko jo mili hai zindagi
Gaati hai hasti hai pagli si hai zara
Ruthe bhi maane bhi har lamha nayi
Hai zindaggi.. moody hai ziddi hai
Kya kare kya pata

Rukhte hain kahaan hum rok isse
Chalte hain hawa ke jhoke se apni to
Aisi hai zindagi yahi apni ada hai
Kya karein koi bura jo mane kya karein
Humse to hain khafa ab sabhi
Jaane do chodo bhi

Dhadkan jo kahani
Hai khul ke ab to sunaani hai bhool
Nahi sakta hai isko hain jisne suna
Kya chese yeh jawani hai
Jo baath hai dewaani hai
Sochoge toh jaanoge yeh rastha kyu hum ne chunaa

Sunne mein ye suhaani hai jazbaat
Ki rawaani hai sunoge to janoge ye
Rastaan kyo humne chuna
By The Way On The Way
Jab dilse hui thi dosti
Humne bhi dil ne bhi tha yeh vaada karliya
Job hi ho humko to darna hi nahi hai ab kabhi jab

Hamein jo lagaa hune vahi kehdiya
Rukhte hain kahaan hum rokese
Chalte hain hawa ke jhoke se apni
To aisi hai zindagi yahi apni ada hai
Kya karein koi bura jo mane kya
Karein humse to hain khafa ab sabhi
Jaane do chodo bhi

Misha:  up next is pia With  

say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na) - 2
 
seer te duppatta lehriya
nachye pind de kudi de naal shehriya
te dhol wajda ho kudiyo dhol wajda
Gora chitta rang gala gooriya
sadi rab ne bana di jodiyan
ke dhol wajda ho mundiyo dhol wajda
(say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na) - 2
 
all of you thigh girls in the house
if you feeling what i am saying then shout it out
say dhol wajda oh kudiyo dhol wajda
all of you desi boys in the house 
just put your hands up and join the crowd
say dhol wajda oh mundiyo dhol wajda
say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na
say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
oh oi oi
oi oi oi
oi oi
oi oi oi
 
(say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na) ' 2
 
 
 
Pia and kabir  dance to billo rani
Aaaahhahhh
 
Shaher mein dusri koi
Nahin tujsi hai Billo
Billo Bolle Billo Billo
Jho bhi Dekhh yehi pooche
hain yeh kiski Billo
wahh
 
Har aadha teri jagathi hain qayamat kho
Har Kadam par thu girathi chale bijli Billo
 
Aha Aha Aha
Hoe Hoe
 
(Ishq karke tujse deewana
Bethab hua barbaad hua
Bhool gaya aapna bhi naam
Jab naam tera isse yaad hua)2
 
Yeh hain jho majnu hayee
Innhe kya mein Samjho tauba
Roz hoojathe yeh hain kisse na kisse pe fida
Arre haannn
Aaj iss ke peeche hae
Kal uske peeche Tauba
Kya theekana hain inka kab hojaye kab lapatha
Inki mohabat resham ka jaal hain haiiii
Deewangi bhi inki eak chal hain
 
Abhay seeing them dance together:  why am I getting upset seeing her dance with someone , she not even sukriti  so what difference does it make.
Some one spilled some  drink on  the floor  and pia slipped  but Abhay caught her hand pulled her up and  danced with her and acted as if it was part of the dance
Hoo billo rani
Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon
Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon
Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon
Billo rani kahon tho abhi jaaan dedon
Abhay  dancing around  and going side  to side of her
Lachakti bahon ke iss gulshan mein
Pholon jaise iss thaan mein
Hon pagal hie karde iysi khusboo hain
Chamakthi aankhon ke inn tharoo mein
Hooton ke inn gulzarro mein
Ohh deewana karde aisa jadoo hain
 
Song ends with pia in the middle of kabir and abhay
Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon
Billo rani kahon tho abhi jaaan dedon
 
Kabir: Misha what the hell  who is he to even come and but in our dance
Pia:  come on kabir he helped again and tum ho ki irrated pia  is about to walk away from kabir
 
Abhay:Pia sorry ki main tumhare dance mein interfere  kara laken I didn't want you to  fall and embarrass yourself in front of everyone on your sister engagement  so  I thought if I acted as if it was part of the dance it will be ok sorry if I ruined it for u .
Pia: Abhay please don't say sorry in fact thank you once again mein  aap ko thanks bol ne wale thi laken phir tum suddenly  left  and I must say  your are a very nice dancer  I mean you didn't even know are routine and you danced just too good really you really made my sister's  day even more special
Panchi: yes Abhay thanks for not letting my sister embarrass herself aur pia is right chaar chand laga liye   
Abhay: whispers to kabir  hope  no hard feelings dude
Kabir whispers back: you might have won this round but b4 the end of tonight  I will have won  so back off  got it.
 
Pia was leaving when her pink duppatta  got suck to abhays watch (eye locking session)
Just then kabir is so  pissed and breaks a glass in his hand
Pia sees kabir is hurt: no Kabir  itna khoon  hai( she yanks her dupatta   from his watch and rips it and  wraps in kabirs hand )  kabir just keep it like this for now  Misha go get the first aid box fast.
 
Misha: ok fine she runs  
Pia :Kabir  how did the glass break
Kabir: it was craked
Misha brings the box  Pia takes out her piece of duppatta   and puts the cream and  bandage  on kabirs hand.
Kabir:Ouch!
Pia: Kabir is hurting a lot? (blowing on it so it ease's the pain)
Here take this pain killer it will help but first eat some dinner gives him a plate to eat
Kabir tries to eat but he can't cause he hurt his hand so  pia  takes the food and feeds him kabir looks up at abhay and  gives him the  look that  see I  won  so back off .
That's it for now don't for get to comment  and press the like button.   Percap: Misha : kya yaa panchi tum daanish ke thoughtsmein lost ho understandable laken pia tum kyun woh abhay kayhypnotic eyes mein lost ho kya chaker hai?
 
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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