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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
read it again...LOL

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
how do u come up wid ur amazing diaologues!!!!!! read the whole story today, ur ending terrified me till i read the hilarious update!!!!!

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I honestly don't even know how to pen my feelings right now. This story, your story...I guess what I can say is that I'm really glad I found 'The Gangster's Mistress' since it led to me reading this.
 
I've never been much of a crier but I'll freely admit that the last few chapters (especially the chapter with the first proposal) have had my glasses misting up countless times. I mean, the way you portrayed Maan's pain at Geet's pain was so intense that even I could feel it (and by 'feel', I mean 'sob like a baby because of it'). But what really amazed me was that the emotional rollercoaster cliche really came true for me, especially in this last chapter. One second I'm upset, the next I'm laughing or drooling over John and Arjun.  
 
I loved that you left little clues for readers to pick up throughout the story - alluding to something being wrong with Geet or a house all of a sudden being built on the cliff. It made the story even better. Oh and confession: I avoided reading the final chapter for over an entire day because I had a feeling you might have left it seeming as if Geet had died and that would have been too upsetting!
 
I think all that's left now is this: Clap *non-sarcastic slow clap* Thank you, Samira, for a beautiful gift of a story.

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
lovely  lovely ff...thoroughly enjoyed it..thanks...

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Loved It..Great FF.

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
I must congratulate for writing such a beautifull FF.i loved it so much.thanx for writing .

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
OMG - this FF had me choking with all the posible emotions.

bookmarked for the 3rd thread.

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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
just started reading the ff again..i think it is indeed very interesting...ClapClapClap


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