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Amazing story dear...👏
Beautifully written...i loved the writing very much...
your description is too good...
i just fell for ur writing and the story...
i always search for this type of story, where the story revolves around maaneet, with no villian till end torturing them and without high drama...
u have also included the comedy with the perfect emotions at place..and i love that...again i can't read too much of comic parts...and your this story has a perfect combination of everything ..👏👏
i loved every thing...
i loved the way u took the story...u r too good
thank u for this wonderful story
i just cried thinking that geet is dead
i was too sad while reading the last part..
but got my smile back reading the epilogue "vacuum baby"😆
i loved so many dialogues...one such is maan's dialogue during saath phera
Beautifully written...i loved the writing very much...
your description is too good...
i just fell for ur writing and the story...
i always search for this type of story, where the story revolves around maaneet, with no villian till end torturing them and without high drama...
u have also included the comedy with the perfect emotions at place..and i love that...again i can't read too much of comic parts...and your this story has a perfect combination of everything ..👏👏
i loved every thing...
i loved the way u took the story...u r too good
thank u for this wonderful story
i just cried thinking that geet is dead
i was too sad while reading the last part..
but got my smile back reading the epilogue "vacuum baby"😆
i loved so many dialogues...one such is maan's dialogue during saath phera
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