marjaan
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..MissLonely..
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he is uch a brat......he ruined meher n palchin's life............
good that he doesn't got chance to ruin pratz life......coz krish saved her..........n im so happy that pratz finally knows the truth........




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while Pratigya has worn a grand pink salwar kameez with a white shawl.
Pratigya is finding it difficult to face Krish.He can't take his eyes off her.But he controls himself and turns off his face.
Palchan goes to Pratigya:Thanks for coming.
She gives a box to her:My birthday gift.I made halwa specially for you.
P:O!Thank you.
She opens the box and tastes it:So tasty.
She goes to Krish:You eat Pratigya's halwa.It is so tasty.
Slowly he takes halwa and eats it.He looks at pratigya:It is very nice.
She smiles.
Palchan cuts the cake.
All are busy at the party.Krish avoids pratigya completely.She becomes upset.She feels lonely.Palchan understands that.
P:Pratigya...can you please sing a song?
Pr:I'm not an expert in singing.My sister Meher was better than me in singing.
P:It is ok.You please sing...
Prati looks at Krish and sings:
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha...{Yes Boss].
Her tears are rolling down.Krish is very upset.Palchan also feels sad for her.
P:Bhaiyya...she regrets everything.She loves you now.Please go back to her.Don't hurt her.Because you love her deeply.
Krish goes to Pratigya.She stops singing.
Pra:Krishna!
He wipes her tears and holds her arms.Then they dance together.They both sing the same song together.Everyone smiles.
Kriya goes to a beautiful beach in the evening.They enjoy the beauty of the waves.They draw a heart on the sand and smile at each other.
The end
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jz lubd the ending!!!!!!!!!awsome work!!!!!!!!!!!!but i feel rlllllly sad that it was ovr so soooooooon.......finally KriYa united!!!!!!!i want more!!!!!!!!it was a very good work........plzzzzzzzzz do write more FFs........n dont forget to inform me also........
marjaan
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Brillant !! You are a superb writer Jasmine!
and i am so happy for Kriya! Thank you!![]()
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