Dark shadow FF climax (Page 4)

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Pratigya:You are in love?With whom?Why did'nt you tell dad about it?
Meher:Because my man does'nt want to disclose it now.
P:But you tell me who he is.
M:No Pratigya.I can't.It will hurt him.I don't want that to happen.But i will tell you one thing.I met him during a music concert.
P:Don't worry Meher.You will get your love.

Pratigya meets Krishna.
K:Did the wedding preparations start?
P:No,Meher is not happy about this wedding.She loves someone else.
He is shocked:Oh!
He thinks:I know can't leave your love and marry someone else.

Pratigya presents a chain to Krishna.It has a heart shaped pendant where it's written 'Love'.
He is surprised:Heer!What is this?
P:This is my gift for you.You keep it with you.It will remind you of me always.
K:I don't need this chain to remember you.You are always in my heart.But your gift is lovely.
He wears the chain.
She smiles.
He pulls her closer to him with a smile.She is shy.

Meher meets Preet.
P:I was happy when you called me here.That day i was tensed seeing your face expression.I doubted whether you are not happy about this marriage.
M:Your doubt is true.I'm not happy about this marriage.I love someone.
Preet is shocked.He controls his tears.
P:Good luck.I'm not angry with you.You live with him happily.
Meher's eyes are welled up with tears.
M:That is not possible.Because he was cheating me.I realised it very late.He is in love with my sister now.He wants to avoid me and snatch Pratigya from us.
Preet is shocked.
P:Leave it Meher.You forget him and start a new life.
Meher raises her eyes and looks at him.
P:I still love you.
Meher is surprised.
M:But i can't fall in love again.I'm scared.
Preet smiles:All men are not same.
Preet holds her arms:I will not make you upset.
Meher can't believe it.

Pratigya is reading something in her room.Meher enters the room:Pratigya...i want to tell you something.
P:Tell Meher.
M:I have decided to marry Preet.
She is shocked:Then..what about your lover?
M:He is not a good guy.I escaped from him.
She can't believe it.
M:What you said is true.Dad has chosen a nice guy for me.Preet is very nice.
She smiles:I'm so happy for you...
M:But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.
Pratigya is shocked:What are you saying?
M:He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his he won't get you.
P:Who is he?Tell me..
M:He is..
Their mom:Pratigya...let us go to the shop and buy's urgent.Otherwise no lunch.
P:Ok...Meher...We will do shopping and come back.Are you joining us?
P:Ok..we will come back soon.Then we will talk.

Krishna is walking on the road.His mobile rings.He attends the call.
His mom Nitya:Palchan is in the Lilavati hospital.Very serious.
He is shocked:I'm coming now.
A guy with helmet on the bike comes towards him and snatches his chain.
He is about to run behind the bike.
K:No,i have to go now to the hospital.
He goes to the hospital.When he reaches the hospital,his parents Nitya and Rakesh come towards him.
K:What happened to Palchan?
N:God heard our prayer.Palchan is out of danger now.
Krish is relieved.

Pratigya and her mom come back home.Pratigya enters Meher's room:Meher!
She is shocked to see Meher lying down bathed with blood.Her stomach has been stabbed with knife by someone.
She screams:Meher!
She touches Meher's face:Meher..
Meher breaths.That was her last breath.Pratigyasees a chain with small pendant lying near Meher.Pratigya is shocked:Oh!This is the chain which i gave Krishna.That means Krishna did this.
She cries.

Pratigya thinks of what Meher told her about her boyfriend.
"I met him during a music concert".
"But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his he won't get you".
She thinks:All her dialogues hint that it is Krishna who dated her?This chain proves the truth.

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PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Jasmine... ur a ROCKSTAR. So beautiful story.. PART 6 and PART 7 were good. Wonder wat Pratigya vl do now... poor Krishna.
shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Chp 7 was awesome.But poor Meher.I guess Krishna was being trapped and he wasn't the one who did it although whatever Meher said kinda pointed out to him.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 8:00am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!jasmine dr,
it ws mindblowing............jz caught up wit ur update n finished reading all chaps in one go...............full of suspense n kriYa lubstory is soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!im jzzzzzzzzz lubing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nw im much  more excited to know hu is Meher,s luv n wat made Prats to hate krishna..i dont think he is a he?neways plzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!
Aziya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 8:23am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!Jasmine dr..........
it ws awsomm!!!!!!!!!jz caught up with ur new FF n read all chaps in one go...........wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!its full of twists n suspenses!!!!!!!!!No,Krishna wont be the murderer,he cant............!!!!!!!!i hope so..........plzzzzzzzz update soooooon!!!!!!!!!im dying to read the rest!!!!!!excellent,mindblowing work........Keep going!!!!!!!!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
..CountingStars IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Omgg So Someone's Framed Krishna! Hmm Wonder Who It Was..
Update Soon x
shahbara Senior Member

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 12:26pm | IP Logged

Brillant Chapter!... Now i'm pretty sure Krishna is innocent ! Someone is trying to trap him!!!!!! maybe Meher's boy-friend bcoz yes.. looks like Meher loves someone else! and he is a very posessive lover! in order to seek revenge against  Meher for breaking off their relationship he killed herShocked..... guess it's the guy on the bike! Poor Prat misunderstanding Krishna! Anyway looking forward to the next part!StarStarStarStarStar

Edited by shefads - 31 October 2010 at 12:26pm
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 2:22am | IP Logged
part 8
After a few days...
Pratigya goes to collegeKrishna runs to her:Pratigya!
She stares at him.
K:I missed you a lot.I came to know about Meher.I was shocked.
She is rough:Shock?Why?As if you don't know anything.
K:Pratigya..why are you talking like this?
She:Where is the chain i gave you?Your neck is empty.
K:I'm sorry .On the way,somebody snatched it from my neck.I could'nt go behind him as i was in a hurry to go.
She:You are good at cooking stories.
She:I know everything.I found the chain near Meher's body.
She took the chain from her bag and throws it at his face.It falls down.
He is shocked:How did it reach there?
She:You are acting as if you don't know anything.
K:What are you saying?
P:Poor Meher.She forgot her past and decided to start a new life with Preet.But..but you killed her.
He is shocked:What?
P:You only killed Meher.While attacking Meher,your chain fell down.God did that purposefully so that the killer will be exposed.
He is shocked:Are you crazy?You are out of sense.
P:I'm in my sense.I know the truth.You are the killer.
K:Why should i kill Meher?
P:Because you were scared whether Meher will expose you.If you get exposed you won't get me.
K:What are you saying?
Pr:You were Meher's boyfriend.
He is shocked:Me?What nonsense!
P:She had told me that she met her boyfriend during a music concert.She was scared whether her boyfriend will kill her.I found your chain near her body.It proves that you were her boyfriend.He is...
K:No...she met her boyfriend during my music concert.But it's not me.
P:No,i don't want to hear any tall tales from you.Enough.I can file a case against you.But i'm not doing that now,because my parents are depressed.Case and court will make them more weaker.Now onwards there is no relation between us.
He is shocked.
He pulls her towards him.
K:Look at my eyes.Do you think that i killed Meher?
She looks at his eyes.She becomes weak.Tears fall down.She moves back.
P:No more drama krishna..
K:Pratigya!Please try to understand me.
She:Get lost.
She goes away...He weeps.He takes the chain from the floor.

After a few months...
The phone is ringing.Pratigya picks up the phone.
"Pratigya ..i'm krishna!"
P:Krishna?Why did you call me?Why do you want to desturb me?
He:I heard that you are engaged to Swayam Garewal.
He:Please don't get married to him.Please don't leave me.
P:Stop it .I will marry him.
He:You are doing a mistake by marrying him.
P:That mistake will not be worse than loving you.I will marry Swayam.
He:I will not allow this wedding to take place.
He is determined.

Pratigya gets married to swayam.
She is sitting on the bed as a bride.Her husband Swayam enters the room and sits besides her.He looks at her with romantic eyes.Suddenly somebody knocks at the door.
Swayam gets irritated:Who has come to desturb us?
He opens the door.That was Krishna.Swayam and pratigya are shocked.
S:Krishna?Why are you here?
Krishna beats him heavily.Pratigya cries loudly.

The flashback is over.

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