Dark shadow FF climax (Page 3)

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 4:46am | IP Logged
wow yaar. Itna mast likha.. waiting for the next part..

shahbara Senior Member

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Lub you Jasmine for the kriya scenes!! Star Mindblowing! Clap Keep it up!
shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Ooh!! That was a sweet chp with some romantic KriYa scenesEmbarrassedLooking forward to the next chpSmile
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Pratigya goes to Krishna.
P:Tonight my dad has arranged a party at home.I don't know the reason.Anyways you should also come for the party.

Pratigya has worn a decorated maroon choli with matching ornaments.
Meher has worn a cream colour saree with pearl ornaments.She looks simple and beautiful.
Krishna enters the party hall.He has worn a grand light maroon shervani.
Pratigya goes near him.
He can't take his eyes off her:You look like a princess.Gorgeous.
P:You look like prince.
They both smile.
P:I will show my sister to you.
She brings Meher to him.
P:This is my dearest sister Meher.This is Krishna...
M:Krishna?Who is...?
She doesn't know what to say.
K:Why are you hiding it from Meher?Meher...i will tell you who i am.I'm Heer's senior in the college.We love each other.
Meher is surprised:Pratigya!
She is embarassed.
M:I knew that you are in love.From your face i could make have chosen a nice guy.I know krishna before itself.
She is surprised.
M:Like krishna i'm also a music lover.Right?We met each other during a music concert.We are quite good friends also.
P:That's a real surprise.
K:I did'nt know that pratigya is your sister Meher.
They smile.

Meher sings the song 'Aye Ho Meri Zindagi Me Tum Bahar Banke..'{Raja Hindustani}.
K:Beautiful sang so beautifully.
M:Thanks krish.

Their dad Vinayak announces:This party is to inform everyone that I have fixed my daughter Meher's marriage with the successful business man Preet.
Meher and pratigya are shocked.
V:Preet..please come forward.
From the crowd a cheerful fair guy comes forward.He is Preet. come here.
Slowly slowly Meher goes and stands near Preet.Preet smiles at her.But Meher can't smile.Preet feels awkward.

After the party....
Meher to Vinayak: Without asking me,why did you fix my marriage?You announced it before others also.
V:If i ask you,you will tell that you can't marry now,because you want to study.
M:Why do you want me to marry so soon?
V:The astrologer told me that your wedding should be done immediately.As a father,it's my responsibility to conduct your wedding.
Meher looks upset.

Meher is sitting alone.Pratigya goes near her:Trust our dad.He has found a good guy for you.You can study after marriage also.
M:That is not the only problem.
M:I'm in love.
Pratigya is shocked:Are you joking?I can't believe that a studious girl like you can fall in love.Don't try to fool me.I know you very well.
Pratigya is giggling.
M:No,i'm serious.I'm in love.
She can't believe it.

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shahbara Senior Member

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Posts: 561

Posted: 30 October 2010 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Wow..... nice twist! So Meher is in love ! I guess the lucky guy is krish! Great !! waiting eagerly for the next update!
mushiroxx IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9370

Posted: 30 October 2010 at 9:21am | IP Logged
awwww............sooooooooooooooooooooo cccccccccccccuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeDay Dreaming
rain dance sequence.........Embarrassed
i loved it................awesome n superb chaps jasmine...............ClapClapClap
hey new twist in chap 6...........hope that guy is not krish......Embarrassed

Edited by mushirox - 30 October 2010 at 9:29am
shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 11:25am | IP Logged
It was a very nice chp.Oh!Poor Meher,so what if she would've refused,her father should've still asked her.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
..CountingStars IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 31 March 2009
Posts: 27812

Posted: 30 October 2010 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Greatt!! Hmmm Wonderr What Exactlyy Happend Between KriYa..
Update Soon x

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