Dark shadow FF climax (Page 2)

shahbara Senior Member

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Sweet chapter ! Krishna is so adorable!......loved the canteen scene and his dream Clap....... Looking forward to the next part.........and plz update soon!

shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
It was a very nice chp.I guess they liked each other the minute their eyes met for the first time.It was sweet.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
lovely chap.........ClapClapClap
i liked the shawl scene........LOL
K n P knew eachother n i K is falling for P............Wink so cuteEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Pratigya wears a dark pink salwar Kameez.It is sleeveless.She curled her hair.She puts make up.She wears ear hoops.She looks very stylish.
When she enters the college,all the guys look at her like crazy.She iignores them and looks for Krishna.Suddenly he appears before her.She is happy.
K:You are looking dashing.
She:Thanks.Today there is a music show.Right?
She:Let us go to the auditorium together.
They go the auditorium.It's really crowded.Students are singing.In the crowd she realises that Krish is missing.
Suddenly she hears an announcement:Now we can hear the magical voice of Krishna.
She is surprised:Krishna sings?
He appears on the stage.He sings looking at Heer:Pehli nazar mein...{Race}.
Pratigya blushes.All are clapping hands and jumping with joy..
After the song,she wants to congratulate him.But she does'nt find him.So she is out of the mood.

Krishna reaches home.
A cute young girl runs to him.She has a sweet apple like face.Her straight hair is soft and silky.She has worn a beautiful dark green salwar kameez which has dark pink border.Her long dangling earrings are pretty.
She:You came brother? are important than anything.You are my dearest little sister.
She smiles.
P:How was the music show?
K:I could perform well.
P:I knew that you will rock..because you are my brother.
He smiles and pats her.
K:So let us celebrate your birthday..
All the family members come around.
K:Driver...please take the cake from the car.
P:You bought cake?
K:Yes,your favourite pink cream cake.
Palchan is excited:wow!
The driver brings the big pink cake.
They fix a candle there.She blows out the candle on the birthday cake.
She cuts the cake.She tries to put the cake piece into krishna's mouth.But he puts it into her mouth.

Pratigya at home..
She thinks:I could not congratulate Krishna.He sang so well.Where did he go in between the show?
The next day...
Pratigya waits in the college compound for Krishna.

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
Wow just discovered yr ff. write onSmile
shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 2:16am | IP Logged
It was a very sweet chp.Looks like ther're slowly getting attracted to each other.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
shahbara Senior Member

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 2:19am | IP Logged

Beautiful chapter ! So was a cute scene to see prat blushing when krish was singing! looking forward to their love- story! Plz update as soon as you can!

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Posted: 30 October 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Pratigya can't find Krishna.She goes to her classroom.She is dull.

In the evening,she sees him coming out of the classroom.Her face blossoms like a flower.He smiles.
K:Let us go to a classroom.
They go to an empty classroom.
P:Yesterday why did you leave so early?
K:Yesterday was my sister Palchan's birthday.She is my pet.
She:Wow!You have a sister?Even i have a sister.Meher.She is my twin sister.
He is surprised:So Seeta aur Geeta?
She:No,we are not identical twins.Palchan studies in the engineering college.Very serious.A complete book worm.Very studious.By the way..your song was too good.I never knew that you are a good singer.
K:What i sang is with honesty.I sang those lines for you.Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya..You did some magic and stole my heart at the first sight itself.
She is shocked:what are you saying?
K:Yes,I mean it.
He goes closer to her.He is very close to her.She feels his breath.He feels her odour.
K:I love you .
She raises her eyebrows and looks at him.
K:I will wait for your reply.
He goes away.
Pratigya smiles slowly.

The students go for excursion.

They play Antakshari.Now it is Pratigya's turn.She looks at Krishna.Her eyes glow.

She sings:Pehla pehla pyar hai..{Hum aapke hain kaun}.

Krish smiles.


Pratigya goes to her hostel room.In the dim light she is shocked to see Krishna.

P:Krishna!What are you doing here?Don't you know that it's for girls?

K:Yes,i know.

P:Then why are you here?Go...

K:I will go.But before that i want to hear something from you.You sang the song "Pehla pehla pyar hai..."Does that mean that you have fallen in love for the first time?

She blushes.

He notices it.

K:That means you love me?

She shakes her head with shyness.He smiles.

K:Now i'm happy.I will go before someone catches me.

She smiles.He leaves the room.


Krishna goes to the terrace.He sees Pratigya near him.He smiles.They both dance to the song 'Maula Mere Maula...' from the film 'Anwar'.The rain pours down.The rain pours emotion.Then he realises that it was his imagination.


They all return home after the excursion.

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