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mahi06

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IndigoBlues

Years spent waiting, just to see
Whether you're the perfect one for me
Years spent thinking that when we reunite
It will be just us, basking in our love's light
Years spent hoping, and hope did me in
It's supposed to be a virtue, but it's worse than a sin
I thought you would love me the way I loved like hell
It wasn't just a moment, it was an infinite spell
It wasn't craziness, I didn't do it for fun
It wasn't a battle where I lost and she won
It was simply my heart rate going up like crazy
It was simply your face making everything else seem hazy
It was simply blushing like mad whenever you appeared
If love is an illness, I'm yet not cured
Can hope fall, or does it keep on rising?
It soon reaches a point where if you collapse, it's not surprising
Your passions pin you down to the point where you can only see
What I'm seeing right now, and the terror enveloping me
That stupid fear that you can never love again
Because your heart has been too destroyed by the pain.

It may sound a bit emo...LOL..lol...but I'm in a poetic craze right now. I'm still an amateur....but one day I hope I can do better. Smile
 
nice poem yaaar...............really i too write poems.............really gud yaar

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 4:53am | IP Logged
what are you saying that ur an immature???
yaaar it was BEAUTIFUL
hope to read more from you
 
love
Noor

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Edited: Approve

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 3:35am | IP Logged
It was Fab ..really well DoneThumbs Up...touched my heartDay Dreaming

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 7:46am | IP Logged
hawww u didn't infmd me
am Khaffa

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Could it get any better ?
My mind wanders and I re-read the lines...
Feeling the emotions that are now engulfing me !
It captured me truly...and cast a spell on me !!

Beautiful poem...!!... :)

-Fatima



Edited by -shabnoor- - 06 November 2010 at 10:10am

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