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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Years spent waiting, just to see
Whether you're the perfect one for me
Years spent thinking that when we reunite
It will be just us, basking in our love's light
Years spent hoping, and hope did me in
It's supposed to be a virtue, but it's worse than a sin
I thought you would love me the way I loved like hell
It wasn't just a moment, it was an infinite spell
It wasn't craziness, I didn't do it for fun
It wasn't a battle where I lost and she won
It was simply my heart rate going up like crazy
It was simply your face making everything else seem hazy
It was simply blushing like mad whenever you appeared
If love is an illness, I'm yet not cured
Can hope fall, or does it keep on rising?
It soon reaches a point where if you collapse, it's not surprising
Your passions pin you down to the point where you can only see
What I'm seeing right now, and the terror enveloping me
That stupid fear that you can never love again
Because your heart has been too destroyed by the pain.

It may sound a bit emo...LOL..lol...but I'm in a poetic craze right now. I'm still an amateur....but one day I hope I can do better. Smile

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 9:30am | IP Logged
It wasn't just a moment, it was an infinite spell
It wasn't craziness, I didn't do it for fun
It wasn't a battle where I lost and she won
It was simply my heart rate going up like crazy
It was simply your face making everything else seem hazy
It was simply blushing like mad whenever you appeared
If love is an illness, I'm yet not cured
Can hope fall, or does it keep on rising?

Day Dreaming

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Lolz..you're in the poetic craze..hmm..sure inspires me!
I love this! Thanks!

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 9:53am | IP Logged

Megha u r superb

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 11:27am | IP Logged
*Edited*

Sweets, this could not have gotten any better. You've done an amazing job, and the poem - struck a chord wimme. Brilliantly written, keep writing!

God bless,
Kankshita


Edited by -Kanky- - 29 October 2010 at 12:15pm
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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
That really was wonderful...Smile


I personally am a terrible poet and whenever I was told to write, I refused to rhyme because it was too "conventional", but here the rhyming works perfectly! Without the cheese Wink

LOVE IT!

Thanks for the PM and please keep writing away Star

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