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Tere liye (RTMC ff)(Part 17 in Pg 49) (Page 7)

coolsudeshna Groupbie

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Posted: 08 November 2010 at 8:09am | IP Logged
really nice story di

Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 November 2010 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolsudeshna

really nice story di

Thanx soooooooo much Shona.
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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 6:58am | IP Logged

Here in the dining hall all the others are laughing. It is nothing new to them. They always fight like this and then within no time they settle down all their disputes. It's a real danger 2 side with any 1 against the other coz when they will settle their disputes, which they do in almost an instant, they become one again. After all they are the best of friends.


Aparna (grinning broadly): " Yeh dono bhi na, kabhie nahi sudharne wale."


Arpita: "Bilkul kakima. Humesha larte jhagarte rahenge par ek doosre ke khilaf kabhie nahi jayenge. Ek roothta hain toh dusre use bas chutkiyon mein mana leta hain."


Pranab: " Aakhir ho bhi kyun na. Yeh dono best friends jo thehre."


Abhishek: "Wo toh hain aur ab tak toh Adi ne Mouli ko mana bhi liya hoga."



(Aditya's bedroom)


The door of the room is thrust open and enters Adi running away from Mouli who is chasing after him.


Mouli calling out after him: "ruk ja Adi ke bacche, aaj main tujhe nahi chorungi. Aaj toh tujhe mar hi dalungi kasam se."

Adi (making faces): "Mou ki bacchi pehle pakar toh le, choregi toh tab na. Tu agar mera khoon karegi toh main bhoot banke aaunga tujhse badla lene, samjhi."


And he jumps up on his bed and then turns around to face Mouli.


Adi : "Mou ki bacchi ab dekh tu!"


Saying this he immediately bends down and picks up a pillow from the bed. He throws the pillow which hits an unprepared Mouli right on the head, ruffling her hair. This unannounced attack caught her by surprise but that's only for a split second. She bends down and picks up the pillow…no she doesn't throw it to him as she knows that his reflexes are very fast and he can easily avoid it. Instead she jumped up on the bed 2. Now she, having him within her domain, engages herself in avenging herself on him to her heart's fill.  She hits him with the pillow and goes on hitting the poor guy who is now using his arms as shields to protect himself.


Adi: "Okay okay sorry mou sorry. Tu mars ki creature nehin hain aur English wali fool bhi nehin hain. Tu toh bahut pyari hain, acchi hain, sacchi hain. Plz yaar ab aur mat maar. Bacche ki jaan legi kya?


Mouli: "Nehin nehi bol main aur kya kya hu bol. (hitting him non stop with the pillow) Aaj tujhko toh main mar mar ke mar hi dalungi. Baccha haan? Tere jaise shaitaan bacche ke saath na aisa hi karna chahiye. (And she continues hitting him)


Abruptly, in order to save himself from the violent blows of a revengeful Mouli, Aditya grabs her wrists and pulls her and due to this strong tug she loses her balance and falls on top of him. They look into each other's eyes n for a moment, as if under a trance, Mouli gets lost in the depth of the pair of handsome, dark brown eyes. However, Aditya, on the other hand, reacts normally, if one can call his abnormal ways 'normal'. He grins naughtily for a moment and then………………………




With a start, mouli comes back to her senses. She was about to have a heart attack with this loud and startling noise. Heart hammering loudly, she gets up and angrily asks: "Yeh kya tha?"

Aditya (raising his eyebrows and imitating her tone): "Woh kya tha?


Mouli is taken aback: "Woh? Kya woh?"


Adi now sits up on the bed and meets her gaze: "Woh jo abhi hua. Aankhein khuli rakhke so gayi thi kya? Kahan kho gayi thi? Tujhe jagane ke liye hi toh mujhe chillana para."


Mouli (a little embarrassed now): "Main……nehi….matlab…..woh…..haan….ahh…nehi…"


She's cut in between by Aditya: "Haan matlab nehi aur nehi matlab haan, hain na? Pagal ho gayi kya? (And then, without noticing her embarrassed expression, goes on in his as usual I'm-so-cool manner) Waise ab tu bhi kya karegi? Aakhir tu hain toh larki hi na aur sari larkiyan Adi ko dekhte hi pagal ho jaati hain, toh isme bechare Adi ki kya kasoor."


Mouli is relaxed a bit that he has taken it so casually and she's herself again and retorts back: "Oh hello, bahut bari galatfaimi paal rakhi hain samjha na. Main unme se nehi hu samjha!"


Aditya (feigning amazement): "Kya baat kar rahi hain Mouli? Tu larki nehi hain? Mujhe toh pata hi nehi tha!" (And burst out laughing)


Mouli's mouth fell open at this sudden and weird retort, but soon she gets hold of herself and retorts back: "Adi tujhe marne ki jaldi hain kya? Sach keh rahi hu main tujhe mar dalungi, uske baad toh mujhe fasi bhi manjur hain. Mera matlab tha main un pagal larkiyon ki tarah nehi hu."


Adi (feigning innocent look): "Toh fir waise bolna tha na. Ab agar adhi baat bolegi toh log galat hi samjhenge na."


Mouli (finally giving up): "Tujhse toh baat karna hi bekar hain. Ja mujhe tujhse baat hi nehi karni." (And she turns her back to him)


But when Aditya decides to make up for something no one can remain angry with him for long.


All of a sudden a cute teddy emerges in front of her eyes out of nowhere. Now a voice comes from the teddy, rather from behind the teddy, a sweet, innocent and pleading voice: "Hi! main hu apki pyari teddy. Apko teddy pasand hain na, isiliye toh main aaya hu. Aap mujhse dosti karogi na? Aapko pata hain mujhe kaun laya? Apke best friend ne, kyunki aap toh uski best friend ho na! Mana ki who thora, accha baba thora jyada hi shaitaan hain, par apko toh pata hain na ki uske liye aap kitni important ho. Use bilkul aacha nehi lagta jab aap usse baat nehi karte ho. Plzzzzzzzz uspar gussa mat hona, plzzzzzzzzzzz. Waise aapko kisine bataya hain pehle kya ki aap gussa hoti ho toh aur bhi jyada khoobsurat lagti ho, lekin jab hasti ho aur khush rehti ho tab sabse jyada khoobsurat lagti ho."


Mouli can no longer control herself and can no longer maintain her angry expression. Finally a sweet grin crosses her lips. After all no one can deny the strong effect that Aditya's cute n sweet antics always produce.


Mouli smiles and takes the teddy from Aditya's hands: "Adi tu bhi na, tujhse toh koi gussa bhi nehi ho sakta."


Aditya (smiling sweetly): "Kisi aur ka chor, agar tu mujhse naaraj hona chahegi bhi toh main hone nehi dunga. Arey ek hi toh best friend hain meri, agar wo bhi muh fulake baith gayi toh kaise chalega!"


And both of them start laughing.


Mouli: "tu kabhi nehi sudhrega. Chal ab neeche chalte hain. College nehi jana hain kya."


As if her words came as a bolt from the blue, Adi jumps: "Oh shit! Mar gaya. Aaj toh project submit karma hain mujhe. Arey yaar main toh aaram se sab bhulke baitha hu."


Mouli: "Dimag mein sharartein itna jyada hain ki kisi aur cheez ko yaad rakhne ke liye jagah hi nehi bachi. (Then thinking something) Waise tujhe aaj project kyun submit karna hain. I mean deadline toh do hafte baad ki hain na. Meri toh project abhi suru bhi nehi hui aur teri khatam bhi ho gayi?"


Adi ( with a feigned air of smugness): " That is the difference girl between Adi and everybody. Log jab tak kuch karne ka soch rahe hote hain Adi tab tak wo kar bhi leta hain, samjhi!"


Mouli makes face at him and in a mocking tone she replies: "Ya ya Adi the supercool dude n all. Khud apni muh miya mitthu banna toh koi tujhse sikhe. Apni tariff karte karte thak nehi jaata kya?"


Adi smiles and making a saintly face: "Nadaan bacchi tujhe nehi samajh aayega meri ma…..mah……mahat….."


Mouli: "Mehetya, matlab importance. Rehne de Adi tera hindi kuch jyada hi strong hain aur hum sabko yeh pata hain."


Adi (frowning): "Accha accha thik hain. Jyada bhav khane ki jarurat nehi."


Mouli giggles and that brings smile to Adi's face too.


Adi: "Chalein!"


Mouli: "Chalo."


And the two friends head towards the door and within the next moment disappear behind the door.


(Dining hall)


Everybody else is busy talking with each other. Arpita, who has been serving breakfast, is the first person to see both Adi and Mouli coming downstairs together and she immediately understands that they both have made it up. She smiles at their childish behaviour.


Arpita: "yeh dono aa bhi gaye. Kyun saare jhagre khatam ho gaye na? chalo ab tum dono aake nasta kar lo."


Adi with a broad smile : "Ofcourse bhavs. Aakhir Adi se koi jyada der tak gussa hoke reh sakta hain kya? But bhavs abhi no naasta, mujhe…..matlab humein… jana hain. Ek project submit karna hain."


Aparna (in a concerned tone): "Arey par kuch toh kha lo."


Adi (in his usual careless tone): "Don't worry mom. Hum canteen mein kha lenge. (Then turning to mouli) Oye car bahar nikal, par drive main hi karunga, ok! (Throws the keys to her) Main bas 2 min. mein ready hoke aata hu. Bye every1."


But as he is about to mount the stairs he turns back.


Adi (gesturing Arpita to come to him): "Bhavs jara idhar toh aana, kuch important baat hain."


Every1 looks at him with curiosity and Abhishek with suspicion as he knows his brother pretty well.


Arpita goes to him and he whispers sumthng in her ears and she smiles and nods. Adi shows a thumb up to Arpita and she responds in the same way.


Abhishek calls out: " Yeh kya ho raha hain wahan. Kis baat ki secret discussion chal rahi hain."


Adi smiles: "Secret hain toh kaise bata sakte hain bhai. Waise don't worry aapko jald hi pata chal jayega."


With this he waves a bye to every1 present there and runs upstairs. Within 2 min. he returns fully dressed in a blue jeans and white hi-neck t-shirt, carrying his assignment bag alongwith him. He looks as dashing and handsome as ever. No wonder almost all the girls in his college are crazy for him.


Waving and muttering a hasty bye, he runs towards the door and within no time disappears behind it.


When he comes to the lawn outside, there is his favourite black car already waiting for him. He runs towards it and throws his bag on the backseat. And then he unlocks the front door and seats on the driver's seat.


Now he sighs and turns to face Mouli who is sitting by his side: "So right within 2 min."


Mouli: "Yes sir" (And salutes).


And both start laughing.


Adi: "Lets start then. St.john's here we cum."


With this he starts the car and it shoots out of the place in super jet speed.

 Precap: College masti. Entry of Paromita. First meeting.......

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megha01 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 10:45am | IP Logged
hey nandu.......................gr8 yaaaaaaaaaaaarClapClap

hw cute........specially adi-mauli scene.

rajjy ko imagine kar kar ke main pagal ho rahi hun as adi............aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

update soon

dying 4 d 1st meeting
Janakivallav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged
nice, lovely part. loved it.
update soon.
moonlight44 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
awesome job dear sry for late reply!!!
anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 3:33pm | IP Logged

oh my my...

that was simply superb...

loved adi - mouli friendship....n that teddy scene was soo sweet...

adi ka dieing to know...

hayyee...imagining rajjjy blue jeans...white high neck shirt...kya lage ga yaar...

waiting for paromita entry...

thnx for the pm.........

Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 November 2010 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by megha01

hey nandu.......................gr8 yaaaaaaaaaaaarClapClap

hw cute........specially adi-mauli scene.

rajjy ko imagine kar kar ke main pagal ho rahi hun as adi............aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

update soon

dying 4 d 1st meeting

thanx  sooooooooooo much Megha.
Arey arey dont worry hum sab tumhein samhalne aa rahe hain.
i'll try 2 update soon yaar.

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