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Posted: 04 November 2010 at 2:01am | IP Logged
gud work nandu......he he..nyc ud........

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Posted: 04 November 2010 at 7:56am | IP Logged

sorry im late...

but woowww maza agaya...

that was simply amazing....i can really imagine rajat doing this..

yaar plzz go n ask ekta to make u the head writer..

n bring this up in rajat's character...

just adorable...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 04 November 2010 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pRaTiBhA.1990

gud work nandu......he he..nyc ud........

thanx soooooooo much praty. Wink

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Posted: 04 November 2010 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

sorry im late...

but woowww maza agaya...

that was simply amazing....i can really imagine rajat doing this..

yaar plzz go n ask ekta to make u the head writer..

n bring this up in rajat's character...

just adorable...

thnx for the pm...


its ok dear.
Thanx soooooooo much.
Actually i wanna c Rajat doing all these 2 n at the tym I was thinking about Veer.
Ok u give me her contact number LOL LOL LOL
Thanx sooooooooo much.

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 2:44am | IP Logged
hey wonderful storylineClap
pata nahi serial walo ko aise ideas kyu nahi aate RTMC ko lekkarConfused
liked intro part its just wonderful!!!Big smile
liked all character except mauliDead
woh gc yaha bhi!!!Unhappy
how she dare toAngry
liked entry of adi
and RT is always lucky with mothers then it prc or dv Smile
and adi ko manana ekdam easy hai only make desertTongue
toh paromita ko yeh banana aata hai kyaEmbarrassed
or she is very reverse of thatWink
waiting for her entry nowDay Dreaming
will soon read next part n comment
thanks once again for starting rtmc ficHug

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Posted: 05 November 2010 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

hey wonderful storylineClap
pata nahi serial walo ko aise ideas kyu nahi aate RTMC ko lekkarConfused
liked intro part its just wonderful!!!Big smile
liked all character except mauliDead
woh gc yaha bhi!!!Unhappy
how she dare toAngry
liked entry of adi
and RT is always lucky with mothers then it prc or dv Smile
and adi ko manana ekdam easy hai only make desertTongue
toh paromita ko yeh banana aata hai kyaEmbarrassed
or she is very reverse of thatWink
waiting for her entry nowDay Dreaming
will soon read next part n comment
thanks once again for starting rtmc ficHug


thanx sooooooooo much Shruja dear.
Arey yaar kisiko toh villain banana hoga na.
And I hate mouli so much ki uske alawa aur koi villain nehi sujha.
ofcourse our RT is such a pampered child with mothers, humesha moms' ka fav.
veer ki tarah hain, remember his fancy for kheer.
Paromita ko? well pata nehi. yeh toh uske aane ke baad hi pata chalega.
Paromita ki entry bhi ho jayegi. But not very soon.
Will b w8ing fr ur comnt.
u r most welcum.

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Adi (rubbing his left arm with great annoyance): "Kaun hain yaar? Dikhayi nehi deta kya? (But as he looks up his annoyance changes into great joy and his lips split into the smile which always have the hypnotic effect on everyone) Hey tum ho, mujhe laga pata nehi kaun hain. (with a slight bow) Good morning. (And then turning back) Oh no bhai, mujhe bhai se bacha lo plz."

 

Standing there on the exit is none else than Arpita, the would be wife of Abhishek and the sister in law of Aditya, who immediately understands the situation as she knows Aditya pretty well who is as dearest to her as her own younger brother. She immediately gestures him to hide behind her and goes in front of him. Meanwhile Abhishek also reaches the spot but he comes to an abrupt halt as he finds Arpita standing in front of him.

 

Abhishek: "Arey Arpita tum?"

 

Arpita (with fake anger): "Haan main, aur yeh kya kyun tum mere pyare bhai ko tang kar rahein ho?"

 

Abhishek (in a sarcastic tone): "Oye hoi, tumhara pyara sa bhai toh ekdum seedha sa hain na ke sab uske peeche pare rahenge aur usko tang karenge. Ise koi tang nehi kar sakta Arpita, balki yeh akela hi kaafi hain puri duniya ko tang karne ke liye."

 

With this he tries again, though in vain, to reach his brother who is standing safely behind Arpita, grinning naughtily and showing him thumbs down, but before he can reach him Arpita stretches both of her arms on both sides blocking Abhishek's way completely.

 

Arpita: "Arey tum bhi na! Accha thik hain main manti hu isne ki hogi koi shararat par shararat yeh nehi karega toh aur kaun karega bhala. Agar Adi shararat nehi karega toh ghar mein raunak kaise rahegi (turning to her would be mother in law) maine sahi kaha na kakima?"

 

Aparna, who has been enjoying the amusing bickering between Abhishek and Arpita, smiles. She is now quite used to it. It happens every time, whenever Abhishek runs after Aditya being annoyed to the root by the latter's one prank or other, Arpita always comes to Adi's rescue. Aparna as well as everyone else knows that Arpita loves Adi as her own younger brother and will listen nothing against him, let alone going against him, even if the most solid proof of his mischief is presented in front of her.

 

But before Aparna can reply a voice coming from the doorway replies: "Bilkul sahi kaha tumne Arpita. Arey iski shaitaniyon se hi toh yeh saara raunak hain, varna in dono baap bete ko toh kaam se hi fursat nehi milta, hasi majak kya khaak karenge."

 

All of them turn to see Pranab Ganguly standing behind Adi with a broad and naughty grin.

 

Adi (grinning naughtily and cheerfully): " Dekha bhai, ek tumhare aur dad ke alawa sabko mera importance pata hain. (Then turning to pranab) kaka

ab aap hi samjhaiye apne honewale damad ko, (with a wink) apne sasurji ki baat bhai toh jaroor maan lenge. Warna unki honewali her highness se joote jo parenge. (And burst out laughing)."

 

With him evry1 else burst out laughing, including Arpita, who is, though trying her best to keep her face straight, is being unable to do so.

 

Abhishek looks at Arpita with an incredulous expression and his mouth slightly open.

 

Abhishek: "Arpita tum bhi???"

 

Before Arpita could reply, its Adi who replies: "kyun bhavi ko apna patnibrat dharm nibhana chahiye tha kya? Tumhare saath muh mein rosogolla (a kind of round shaped sweet) dalke huffff(blowing both of his cheeks) karke muh fulake rakhna tha kya?" (And sniggers even more)

 

Abhishek: "Adiiiiiii!!! Dekha apne dad?"

 

Subhankar, who has been laughing till now and enjoying the moment to the fullest limit, tries hard to make a straight face and replies: "Haan bilkul. (Then turning to Aditya) Adi bas ab aur mat pareshaan karo apne bhai ko. Chalo kaan pakar lo."

 

Adi (making a very innocent and surprised face): "Yeh aap kya keh rahein hain dad! Bhai ki umar ka toh sochiye, wo bare hain mujhse."

 

Subhankar (totally confused): "Haan toh?"

 

Adi (making an even more innocent face): "Toh main unka kaan kaise pakar sakta hu, aap bhi na dad kuch bhi kehte hain (shaking his head in mock frustration)."

 

Again a fountain of laughter springs up. And Subhankar, as usual, gives up.

 

Subhankar (Turning to his elder son): "Abhi beta mujhe toh tu maaf hi kar, is bandar ko samhalna mere bas mein nehi hain. Aur mere toh kya mere saat pushton ki bas mein bhi nehi hain shayad."

 

"Aur yeh apne bilkul sahi kaha unkle. Is Adi ko samhalna toh kisi ki bas mein nehi."

 

Adi: "Yeh lo bas iski hi kami thi. Lijiye dad mere against apke group ka most imp. Member bhi hajir hain. (Turning to the newcomer) U r most welcum, Miss. Mouli Ganguly."

 

The sweet and beautiful girl comes forward and stands in front of him.

 

Mouli: "Aur kya? Tujhe kya lagta hain saari larkiyan tere inhi attitude mein fida hain? Galatfaimi hain janab, main un larkiyon mein se nahi hu."

 

Adi smirks: "Uske liye is dharti ki larki hone ki jarurat hain, tere tarah Mars ki creature nahi."

 

Mouli (pinches hard on Adi's left arm): "Accha main Mars se hu hain na? Aur is dharti ki kaun si larkiyan hain, wo jo teri aage peeche ghumti rehti hain ? Ek kadam gaya nahi ki dus samne aa jati hain aur tu har ek ko phool deta firta hain."

 

Adi smiles sweetly: "Par tu bhi toh ek pyari si phool hain."

 

Mouli is suddenly taken aback at this sweet yet sudden complement and her anger melts at an instant.

 

Mouli smiles: "So sweet of u."

 

Adi (smiling naughtily): "Sweet toh main hu hi, sab kehte hain. Par tu ne meri poori baat nehi suni."

 

Mouli: "Accha aur wo kya?"

 

Adi: " Tu ek pyari si 'fool' hain. Hindi wali nehi, English wali."

 

Mouli's mouth fell open and being no longer able to tolerate his nonsence, she runs after him, who is running at a top speed to save his neck and the duo cross the rest of them with Adi running for his dear life and Mouli chasing him to avenge herself. They reach the stairs and start mounting it and within no time they are out of sight.

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Posted: 08 November 2010 at 12:29am | IP Logged

hey nandu

gr8 as always

very cute moments specially mouli's blushing reaction wen adi says tu bhi to ek phool hai

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