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Tere liye (RTMC ff)(Part 17 in Pg 49) (Page 3)

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pRaTiBhA.1990

wow sheru
beautiful concept
loved it...........
 
continue asapThumbs Up

thanx soooooooooo much Praty.
i'll update soon.
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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 12:42am | IP Logged

Subhankar (with a cheerful smile): "Lijiye aakhir uth hi gaye apke ladle rajkumar. Ab niche bhi aa jao mama ke prince, nasta nehi karna kya?"

 

Adi: "As you say your highness."

 

With these words he just takes his hands off the railings which he was holding to maintain his balance and comes sliding down through the railings making a loud 'wooooooooo' noise.  Aparna, as usual, is frightened with these weird and careless ways of her son and screams: "Adi samhalke beta, chot lag jayegi tumhein."

 

But till then Aditya has already landed on the floor of the dining hall. He comes to his mother and hugs her from back and says: "My sweetest mom. Aap itni fikar kyun karti ho? Kuch nehi hoga mujhe. After all I'm Adi…Aditya Basu. Aur Aditya ko itni asani se koi chot nehi pahucha sakta. So just chill mom. '

 

Aparna : Jab tere bacche honge na tab tujhe pata chalega ki maa baap ko humesha apne bacchon ki kitni fikar lagi rehti hain. 

 

Adi : "Mom ap bhi ajeeb ho. Sab khudko jawan dikhana chahte hain toh apko burhi hone ki itni jaldi kyun hain ? Aap itni beautiful ho toh fir kyun mom kyuuuuuuun?" (Adi gives a feigned look of amazement to his mom who was genuinely taken aback at the sudden change of topic)

 

Aparna (utterly astonished) : "Kya?? Mujhe burhe hone ki jaldi hain? Achanak yeh baat beech mein kahan se aayi aur mujhe kyun jaldi hogi burhe hone ki ?"

 

Adi : Ofcourse hain mom. Aap ne khud hi toh kaha na.

 

Aparna (still confused) : Par maine kab kaha yeh ?

 

Adi (in a very serious tone): Mom abhi toh apne kaha ki mujhe tab samajh aayega jab mere bacche ho jayenge aur aap toh fir unki dadima ban jayengi hain na. Toh dadi ko bhi koi jawan kehta hain kya bhala? Burhi toh kehlayengi na aap. Isliye main keh raha tha ki…."

 

He bursts out into laughter even before finishing and with him both Subhankar and Abhishek too burst out into laughter.

 

Aditya, who has been laughing heartily, feels a pretty hard tug on his ear and shrieks: "Ouuch! mom, main toh sirf majak kar raha tha. Ouch! mera kaan mom."

 

While Subhankar laughs out aloud, Abhishek laughs and cheers his mother: "bilkul mat choriyega mom, acchese kaan khichna iska tab shayad iski sharatein thori kam ho."

 

Adi exclaims in disbelieve: "Bhaaai!! U 2 Brutus!!"

 

Now to his mom he pleads: "Mom, meri pyari si achi si mom, plz mera kaan chor dijiye na. Waise main apne kaan ke bare mein nehi, apke bare mein hi soch raha hu. Isliye yeh keh raha hoon."

 

Aparna, who is quite well aware of these antics of her dearest son, smiles: "Acha toh tum mom ke bare mein soch kar keh rahe ho, hain na? toh kya socha tumne?

 

Adi: "Mom main toh yeh soch raha tha ki agar log apko chirayenge toh main kaise bardasht karunga." (pretending to be very sad)

 

Aparna (now a little confused): "Par log mujhe kyun chirayenge?"

 

Adi: "Ab agar aap aise mere kaan khichogi toh mera kaan toh nikalkar apke haath mein aa hi jayega na aur fir log apko chirayenge bina kaan ke bete ki ma kehkar, hain na?"

 

Aparna is totally dumbstruck at the sudden weird comment while Subhankar and Abhishek burst out laughing.

 

Adi takes full advantage of the moment: "Arey mom yeh dekho mera kaan apke haath mein aa bhi gaya."

 

These words at the moment do not fail to produce the desired effect as he has anticipated. On an instinct, Aparna instantly let go of his ear and he sprinted immediately to the other direction and within no moments he is standing on the other side of the table.

 

Subhankar, who is still laughing, shakes his head: "Jane do Aparna, tum bhi janti ho is larke se koi nehi jeet sakta. Aur sach kahu toh yeh tumhare hi laad pyar ka natiza hain jo iski sharatein din ba din barti hi ja rahi hain."

 

Aparna now smiles : "Hmm…..janti hu. Tabhi toh main iske liye ek aisi larki laungi jo iska datkar samna bhi karein aur ise hara bhi sakein. Mere sher ke liye ek sherni."

 

Adi: "Oh common mom, aisa koi kahin nehi hain jo Adi ko hara sakein."

 

Aparna smiles: "Har kisi ke liye kahi na kahi koi na koi jarur hota hain aur waqt aane par mil bhi jaata hain. So my dear son, you just wait and watch."

 

Adi: "Ya, whatever."

 

He comes and sits on the other side of his father and suddenly his gaze falls on Abhishek who is now again silently having his breakfast and a naughty glint crosses Adi's eyes.

 

He smirks: "Waise mom apko kuch khali kahli sa mehsoos nehi ho raha kya? Kyun dad?"

 

Subhankar and Aparna both are clueless about what he is trying to say and they both look at him with a little confusion.

 

Adi: "Wo……bhabhi ab tak dikhi nehi na dat's why. Waise humse jyada toh bhai ko khali khali sa lag raha hain. Hain na bhai? Ya I can understand."

 

Abhishek, who is at the moment drinking his juice, chocks over it at this sudden and unexpected attack.  

 

Abhishek (utterly bewildered): "kya??? Main….aisa kuch nehi hain mom…..Adi!! I'll kill u!!"

 

Aditya (chuckling): "Acha, aisa kuch nehi hain, hain na? Phir shayad mere kaan baj rahe the jab kal raat maine kisiko kehte hue suna 'Arpita kya kar rahi thi, ya main bhi tumhe bahut miss kar raha hoon, haan sach, toh kal subah aa rahi ho na…..' Waise mujhe chori chupe logon ki baat sunne ki aadat toh hain nehi, isliye wahan se katipatang ho gaya aur baki ke baat nehi suna jo ki shayad aur bhi interesting tha..." (And bursts into laughter)

 

Subhankar and Aparna both, though tried really hard this time to control themselves, terribly failed and burst out into laughter.

 

Abhishek, who is utterly shocked and is blushing terribly, looks helplessly towards his parents both of whom are shaking with laughter and then to his naughtiest brother, who, too is enjoying his embarrassment to the extreme and is laughing to his heart's fill.

 

Observing the shocked look over his brother's face, Adi leaves a fake sigh: "Agar 'private' baatein karni hain toh pehle check toh kar liya karo darwaza aur khirki kahin khuli toh nehi chori tumne. Koi bhi sun sakta hain na bhai! Kitni laparwah ho tum! (And again starts chuckling)

 

Abhishek already had enough of it and cannot tolerate anymore. He gets up: "Adi tujhe aaj mein chorunga nehi."

 

With these words, he chases Adi who has already got up and sprints towards the exit of the room.

 

Adi: "AAaaaa…….nehiiiii …..bachao."

 

Abhishek (still chasing him): "Aaj tujhe koi nehi bacha payega mujhse shaitaan larka."

 

As Adi is about to get out of the hall through the exit someone enters and he collides with the person.

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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 1:30am | IP Logged
thank u for starting new rtmc ff Big smile
will soon read n comment
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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

thank u for starting new rtmc ff Big smile
will soon read n comment

Thanx so much fr cumng here Shruja.
Will b w8ing fr ur comnt.
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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 2:42am | IP Logged
wow new ff. jus awesum di
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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 2:50am | IP Logged

wwwwwwwoooowwwww nandini

awesome yaaaar

mazaa a gayaClap

our real hero deserves such story line

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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 4:36am | IP Logged
awesome, amazing part. loved it.
 update soon dear.
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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 6:47am | IP Logged
awesome part dear...nice dialogs..
update soon...ClapClapClap

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