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IndigoBlues

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:03am | IP Logged
It's a complex process
I wish you all the best
It involves first of all
Calming down your fury
It involves wiping away those tears
But not laughing, that's perjury
It involves sitting down
And thinking on what went wrong
But don't blame it on yourself
I know that takes very long
It involves coming to the conclusion
That what's done is done
In the end you've lost
But hatred has not won
It's a lengthy battle
You're screaming freaking death
But you have to compose yourself
And take a deep breath

It could be anything
But you shouldn't allow it to linger
If you keep it with you
It becomes a painful stinger
You need to toss it off
You're better than that
It could be someone broke your heart
Or called you selfish, ugly or fat
But you know your worth
And you know the value of your mirth
Someone is waiting
For your celebrating
Your heart is slowly turning twisted
Envy is making your chest a bit misted
But you need to wipe it away
Like a car's window
There's no pain to hide
But no pain to show

Forgiving and forgetting
Is like scaling a never-ending hill
You still want to end it all
You want time to still
But time is very stubborn
And at times very cruel
You need to show it
That hey, you're cool
You've got over it
And if not, one day you will
Till then keep living
And hey, just chill

Remember someone loves you
And even if no one does
You always have nature for company
Sit among the doves
In the park
Admist the trees
Admiring their serenity
And hoping
That maybe
It will pass on to me
You're God's child
And he will always be mild
Send a small prayer
And then comes that breathtaking feeling 
That makes you a bit breathless
That leaves you feeling selfless

It's over
For once and for all
Just the way in autumn
The decaying leaves fall
Onto the dust
To be stamped on if they must

Please comment if you have the time. Smile It will help to keep this thread active and will thus attract more criticisers-oops, readers. LOL


Edited by IndigoBlues - 23 October 2010 at 10:07am

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Kya baat hai yaar?
Itna accha kaise likh liya tune?
This is so divine
Simply great
Good Job

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:11am | IP Logged
awsome yaar
do write more
loved it

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:12am | IP Logged
megzy- that was breathtaking!!

HugHugHug

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Gr88888888.
Nice one.

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:24am | IP Logged
*Edited*

I am super-duper bad at making the real meaning out of poems and writings. Sometimes, I fail to understand my own. Anyway - I take it, this is one really very inspiring poem that I've read in days. Beautiful expression, friend. Keep up the good work! Clap

P.S. What is your name?



-Kankshita


Edited by -Kanky- - 23 October 2010 at 11:39pm

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Meg Hug ZABARDUST!! *10 stars* Keep writing & delighting :)
 
Please send this to An as well :)

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 11:32am | IP Logged
nice , lovely poem dear.
keep it up dear.

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