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IndigoBlues

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:03am | IP Logged

It's a complex process

I wish you all the best

It involves first of all

Calming down your fury

It involves wiping away those tears

But not laughing, that's perjury

It involves sitting down

And thinking on what went wrong

But don't blame it on yourself

I know that takes very long

It involves coming to the conclusion

That what's done is done

In the end you've lost

But hatred has not won

It's a lengthy battle

You're screaming freaking death

But you have to compose yourself

And take a deep breath

It could be anything

But you shouldn't allow it to linger

If you keep it with you

It becomes a painful stinger

You need to toss it off

You're better than that

It could be someone broke your heart

Or called you selfish, ugly or fat

But you know your worth

And you know the value of your mirth

Someone is waiting

For your celebrating

Your heart is slowly turning twisted

Envy is making your chest a bit misted

But you need to wipe it away

Like a car's window

There's no pain to hide

But no pain to show

Forgiving and forgetting

Is like scaling a never-ending hill

You still want to end it all

You want time to still

But time is very stubborn

And at times very cruel

You need to show it

That hey, you're cool

You've got over it

And if not, one day you will

Till then keep living

And hey, just chill

Remember someone loves you

And even if no one does

You always have nature for company

Sit among the doves

In the park

Admist the trees

Admiring their serenity

And hoping

That maybe

It will pass on to me

You're God's child

And he will always be mild

Send a small prayer

And then comes that breathtaking feeling

That makes you a bit breathless

That leaves you feeling selfless

It's over

For once and for all

Just the way in autumn

The decaying leaves fall

Onto the dust

To be stamped on if they must

Please comment if you have the time. It will help to keep this thread active and will thus attract more criticisers-oops, readers.

Edited by IndigoBlues - 23 October 2010 at 10:07am

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:08am | IP Logged

Kya baat hai yaar?

Itna accha kaise likh liya tune?

This is so divine

Simply great

Good Job

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:11am | IP Logged

awsome yaar

do write more

loved it

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:12am | IP Logged

megzy- that was breathtaking!!

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged

Gr88888888.

Nice one.

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 10:24am | IP Logged

*Edited*

I am super-duper bad at making the real meaning out of poems and writings. Sometimes, I fail to understand my own. Anyway - I take it, this is one really very inspiring poem that I've read in days. Beautiful expression, friend. Keep up the good work! Clap

P.S. What is your name?

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 23 October 2010 at 11:39pm

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 11:15am | IP Logged

Meg

ZABARDUST!! *10 stars* Keep writing & delighting :)

Please send this to An as well :)

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Posted: 23 October 2010 at 11:32am | IP Logged

nice , lovely poem dear.
keep it up dear.

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