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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
nice part...................ridhima finally accepted her feelings...................oh i hate that lady......................she always creates problems in eveyones life.................wanna see ashmit and nupur get together and that lady be taught a good lesson..................cont soon.....................

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awesome part sorry for late reply
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Posted: 31 October 2010 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
awesome , great going please contii soon.
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Heal my heart Part 12

Riddhima rings up Nupur:Hi are you?
N:How are you?
R:I'm cool.Hey..i'm coming there.i want to tell you something.A surprise!
N:Even i want to tell you something.

Riddhima goes there.The door is kept open.She goes inside.In the front room only Ashmit is seen.
He is surprised to see her.
R:Hi jeeju..
R:Where is Nupoo?
A:She is in her room.
R:I will go there.
She is about to go to Nupur's room.He holds her hand tightly.Riddhima is shocked.She stares at him.
A:Do you love me?
She is shocked.
R:What are you asking jeeju?
A:Tell me.
R:Why are you asking like this?
A:We heard that you love me.So Nupur is shattered.She thinks that she snatched me from you.So she is keeping a distance from me.I lost Nupur because of you.
She is shocked.
R:Nonsense!Who told you that i love you?
A:Shantha mausi.
R:Santha bhabhi did this purposefull to create a rift between us.It's true that i used to like you a lot.But that was because i really admire you as a person.You are such a well mannered guy.May be i had a crush on you.But defenetly not love.Now you are my brother.I love someone else.
Ashmit is surprised:You are in love?
R:Yes,i love Akash.
Nupur was overhearing their conversation.
Riddhima runs to her.
R:What is this Nupoo?You are such a big fool.You believed someone's lies and you hurt Ashmit jeeju.Too bad.Tell sorry to Ashmit jeeju.He loves you very much.You also love him.I know that.Still there came a gap between you both because of me.I want to solve this problem which is caused because of me.Only then i will get peace of mind.
Nupur goes near Ashmit.Ashmit bends his face.
N:I know that you are angry with me.I hurt you a lot.Sorry.
Ashmit's eyes become wet.
A:You did'nt think once about my mental agony i will have when you move away from me.That's my worry.
Nupur's tears flow down:I'm sorry Ashmit.
He wipes her tears.
A:I love you Nupoo.I don't want to see your tears.
He smiles making her also smile.
Riddhima smiles.
R:I'm so happy to see you both madly in love with each other.
Nupur looks at her.
N:What did you say?You love Akash?Were you joking?
R:No.I'm serious.I love Akash.I got his proposal through Prem and Anjali.Dad is happy.
Nupur is surprised:What?Really?
R:Yes.But Akash does'nt know that i love him.I want to confess my love to him.
Nupur and Ashmit smile.
A:Don't delay to confess your love to him.
Riddhima smiles.

Akash gets a parcel.The violen and the faded flowers he sent to Riddhima.Though the flowers are faded they are not fully damaged as Akash's love for Riddhima is hidden in them.
He feels upset.
A:Riddhima does'nt like me.So she returned me my gifts for her.
He sees a letter inside the cover.He reads it:
I'm sorry.I want the gifts you sent me.But i'm returning them to you.You keep them in your room.Because my life is in your room.So i will come there.So am i supposed to keep them there?
Akash is over excited.
He jumps with joy:Riddhima loves me.
He laughs like hell:Riddhima is mine.
He hugs the violen and flowers.

Akash dances in rain.Surprisingly he sees Riddhima also dancing.They both see each other.They smile at each other.They come closer to each other.
A:I love you RIddhima.
R:i love you too Akash.
He holds her hand and they have a passionate sizzling rain dance singing:
Dhak dhak karne laga,
ho mora jiyara darne laga
saiya baiya chhodna,
kachchi kaliya tod na
dil se dil mil gaya,
mujhase kaisi ye haya
tu hai meri dilaruba
kya lagti hai, va re va
dhak dhak karne laga,
ho mora jiyara darne laga..{Beta}.
It was not Valentine's day.But for Akash and Riddhima that was the real lovers' day.

Ashmit takes Nupur to their compound.
A:I bought a new car.
A:Come Nupoo.Let's have a long drive.
N:Now at night?
A:Ya..that's the thrill.
She smiles and gets inside the car with him.They have a long drive and enjoy a lot.

The end

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 3:46am | IP Logged
the up is really good
toh sab kuch thik ho gaya
nupoor aur ashmit beech mein rift bhi dur ho gaye
aur ridz aur akash bhi ab aapne pyaar mein jur gaye haai
cute_samrah Goldie

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 3:49am | IP Logged
nice part......................
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 6:01am | IP Logged
nice ending.....................liked the story...............many characters but alls well........................liked ashmit and nupur scenes.................
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 6:34am | IP Logged
awesome ending i love it everything come to place wow so sweet thanks a lot for great FF

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