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Heal my heart Rajeev Aamna Climax (Page 6)

ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 12:04am | IP Logged
the up is really good
so ram aur chanda beech mein sab thik ho gaya
ram and chanda are going to be parents wow
ab chanda aur ram dono he khush haai aur idher humare love birds yani nupoor aur ashmit ke bhi shaadi ho jaate haai
they are also very happy
ab ridz aur akash ke beech mein bhi sab kuch thik ho jaaye
plz cont soon and pm me

cute_samrah Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 1:28am | IP Logged
all parts were superb..................finally nupur n ashmit got married..............Ridz is getting back what she has done in others life....................
con't soon dear
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 5:31am | IP Logged
everything going well now .
Ashmit & Nupur  married now good
Ridhhima realizing her feelings thank god warna pata nahi aur kya kartii.
dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 11:47am | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 October 2010 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
ashmit and nupur are married without any problem................nice part.........cont soon...............
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 12:46am | IP Logged

Ranveer & Jyothika:Kinshuk & Parul

Heal my heart Part 9

Chanda:You are not the old Ridz.
Riddhima simply smiles.
C:Tell me..who is that guy?
R:Akash who was supposed to get married to Jyothika.
C:Did you meet him?
R:Yes.I told him openly that i don't like him.
C:Then why did you accept his gifts.
Riddhima is silent for a moment.
R:I thought it's someone else.
C:Did you dump his gifts?
C:Usually if you get a gift from the people you hate you destroy it no.Why do you keep those gifts with you now also?
R:I love playing violen.When i play it..that gives me so much of happiness.I can't express it.
C:If the gift given by your enemy gives you happiness that means you love him.
R:When you got gifts from him itself i knew that your heart has started dancing with love.You used to love your secret admirer.Now also you love him.You are backing out only because you know that he is Akash.
R:I hated that family once.
C:So what?Do you know one thing.Once my sister Avni di dreamt about marrying Prem.But it did'nt happen because of his mother.That is fate.
Riddhima is shocked.
C:We can't blame Prem.He is an obedient son.In Nupur bhabhi's case also that is what happened.Even if Prem and his mother have done wtong what is Akash's fault?Will all the sons of a family be same?
R:I must have hated Akash due to some misunderstandings.Now i don't hate him.But i can't love him.
C:You don't see your own mind.That's why you are not getting peace of mind.
Riddhima's eyes get filled up with tears.

Riddhima expresses her desire to do higher studies.
Tilaka:Why should you study again?Inder...Krishnraj's son Akhil is a nice guy.Shall we proceed with that proposal?He liked her eyes very much,they said.
R:No.Drop that proposal.I'm not interested.He liked only my eyes,not me.What if he take my eyes?
Inder smiles.
T:Inder..are you hearing the way she talks.

Riddhima thinks:I'm not bothered about Ashmitji.That was my infatuation.I take it as a joke now.But why i'm not peaceful now?Why i'm upset about Akash?
She can't understand herself.

Anjali goes to a mall.There Nupur and Riddhima do shopping.Nupur goes near her.
N:Anjali..Prem's friend.
Riddhima looks at Anjali carefully.They both go near her. you remember me?
Anjali observes her face carefully.She is excited:Nupur!We are meeting after a long time.
N:Exactly.Meet my sister Riddhima.
A:Hi Riddhima.

Anjali comes back from shopping.
Prem notices her happiness.
P:You look very happy today.
A:Yes,i'm very happy.Today i met my friend Nupur after a long time.Met her sister Riddhima also.
Prem is shocked.
P:Nupur is your friend?
A:Yes.You know her?
He tells her everything.
Anjali's face becomes dull.
P:Good thing that Nupur got a good husband now.
Anjali smiles.
P:One more thing.Akash loves Riddhima.
Anjali is in shock again.
P:Yes.Once Akash had told me that he loves Riddhima.
A:Riddhima is a nice girl.Her eyes are very attractive.
P:But i doubt whether Riddhima loves Akash sincerely.She hates our family that much.
A:She must have hatred towards this family.But don't think that her love for Akash is fake.I know Nupur very well.She is very sweet.Nupur's sister can't be that different from her.
P:Riddhima is exactly opposite to Nupur.She is very smart and clever.
A:May be.Nupur used to tell me a lot about Riddhima.She used to tell that however naughty Riddhima is she is good at heart.She can't fool Akash.I'm sure.
P:I want Akash to have a happy married life with Riddhima.Shall we speak to her father about Akash?
P:Are you not upset?
P:Akash was supposed to marry your sister Jyothika no.
A:But that wedding got cancelled long ago.
P:Will Jyothika be upset?
Suddenly they hear the calling bell ringing.They open the door.
There they see Jyothika and a guy.
Anjali and Prem are shocked:Jyothika!What a surprise!
They hug each other.
P:We were talking about you.Come inside.
They enter inside.
Anjali looks at that guy:Is this Ranveer?
He smiles:Yes.
A:Jyothika has told a lot about you.But i could recognise you.
J:There is a happy news.Dad agreed to conduct our wedding.
Anjali is surprised:Really?
J:Dad has changed a lot.
Prem thinks:Jyothika and Ranveer are getting married?
J:Prem jeeju...please forgive me.Please tell Akash to forgive me.
P:But why?
A:I hid something from you Prem.Jyothika was in love with Ranveer when her marriage got fixed with Akash.Our dad forced her to agree to marry Akash.She did'nt have the courage to go against dad's wish.But now dad is not against her wish.So Jyothika and Ranveer got reunited.Jyothika is tensed whether you and Akash will be angry with her for this.
P:Hey...even i have undergone the same sutuation.So i understand Jyothika.Jyothika was always cheerful.So i can't believe that she had hidden pain in her mind when her marriage got fixed with Akash.
A:Jyothika is like this.She always smiles.Even worries cannot wipe her smile.
R:Actually we are thankful to Prem jeeju's mom for cancelling Jyothika's marriage with Akash.Otherwise we would not have been able to reunite.
Ranveer holds Jyothika closer to him.
They smile.

Ashmit closes Nupur's eyes with his arms and takes her to a room.
N:Where are you taking me to?
He removes his arms from her eyes.
She is surprised to see candle light on the table.Dinner is also kept on the table.
Ashmit holds her hands and makes her sit on the chair.He also sits.
They both look at each other.
A:In this dim light also you are so beautiful.
She blushes.
A:I can't believe that you are mine now.I feel it's a dream.
N:Even i feel it's a dream.But it's not a dream.
Suddenly his face becomes dull.
A:I'm scared whether i will lose you.
N:No,never.I will never leave you.I can't live without you.
She holds his hand.They both hold hands together with a smile.
N:Ashmit..look at my eyes.My eyes speak my love for you.My eyes sing how much i love you.
He smiles looking into her eyes.
N:You surprised me with a lovely candle light dinner.I will surprise you with a romantic song specially dedicated to you.
He smiles.
She stands up and sings:
Chupke Se Sun, Is Pal Ki Dhun
Is Pal Mein Jeevan Saara
Sapnon Ki Hai Duniya Yehi
Meri Aankhon Se Dekho Zara
Chupke Se Sun, Is Pal Ki Dhun
Is Pal Mein Jeevan Saara
Sapnon Ki Hai Duniya Yehi..{Mission Kashmir}.
Ashmit forgets everything listening to her lovely song.He goes close to her and carries her in his arms.

Prem and Anjali go to Inder's house.Inder is surprised to see them.Prem finds it difficult to face him.He is tense about his reaction.But Inder is friendly with them.
I:Come inside.
Prem and Anjali are relieved.
They go inside.
A:Where is Riddhima?
I:she has gone out.
A:Her marriage..?
I:Her marriage is not fixed.She is not interested in it.She is rejecting all the proposals.
P:Uncle..why we came here is...we know why Riddhima is rejecting all the proposals.She loves my brother Akash.
Inder is shocked.

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 12:58am | IP Logged
the up is nice
ashmit aur nupoor candle light dinner karte haai
wow romantic but yeh kya there pasrt is really very small
plz yaar ashmit aur nupoor ke romance ke baare likhna
so plz cont soon and pm me
Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 October 2010 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Oh wow....nice part. Ashmit n Nupur's romantic Prem & Anjali talk abt Ridhhima n Akash and finally it seems everything is gonna be okay!! Even Jyothika is happy wid her Ranveer.....very very cool.....loving it. Pls continue soon.

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