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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 October 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged
oh feel like screaming at ridhima..............and eashwari is a crazy woman..................she makes and breaks relations like some toy..........hope prem and anjali get together..............and nupur and ashmit confess before misunderstandings happen.................cont soon.................

ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 October 2010 at 8:13am | IP Logged
the up is really sweet
i love ashmit nad nuppor chemistry
plz comnt soon and pm me
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 October 2010 at 11:29am | IP Logged
I hope all come along with each other and nupur and ashmit confess before misunderstandings come in ti their life ..
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Heal my heart part 6

Prem comes back.
P:Where is Anjali?She is not here?
Akash is silent.
P:If she was here she would have come to receieve me.
Eshwari:Don't enquire about Anjali.Just forget her.She is not good.
Prem is shocked.
Eshwari tells everything.
A:Prem bhaiyya..i'm sure that the letter is somebody's game.Anjali bhabhi is innocent. you disbelieve me?
P:No,but i won't leave Anjali.For you i sacrificed Avni also.But now i can't desert Anjali for you.
Eshwari gets upset:I did it for your good.
P:I know.If Anjali had a past i don't care.Because even i had an affair.If you don't want Anjali here we will shift to another house.
Eshwari is shocked.She feels chest pain and faints.She gets admitted to the hospital.
The weak Eshwari holds Prem's hand:I'm not against your wish.I pray for your happy married life.
Eshwari closes her eyes forever.
Anjali and her family come there hearing the sad news.
Anjali cries:Because of me only mummiji had heart attack.She is angry with me.
Prem consoles her with tears:She is not angry with yiu Anjali.She went away with prayers for us.

Nupur is surprised to see Ashmit at the verandah.
N:Sir..i doubted whether you will visit us.
A:I can't resist coming here.I told you no.
She smiles:Come inside.
A:Where are others?
N:They have gone out.
A:I showed your photo to my family members.They liked you very much.
She smiles:Why did you show my photo to them?
Ashmit has no answer.
He looks at her face.She becomes shy.She folds her hands.
A:Did you miss me?
A:I mean did you ever think of me after i left?
Nupur thinks:hOw can i tell him that every moment reminded me of him.
He says in his mind:I know that you can never avoid thinking of me.

Chanda's husband Ram is over possessive.He closes her inside the room when guests come as he feels that no one else should see her beauty.Though he loves her like crazy he becomes violent fast.The way he stares at her gives her fear.He can't understand why she is scared of him as does'nt torture her physically.He behaves abnormally.Her only relief is Ram's sister Padmini.Padmini puts mehendi on Chanda's hands.
Once Chanda and Padmini go for a film and come back late.Ram gets angry.
He holds her hand tight:Where were you?
She is hurt.
C:We went for a movie.
R:No,you are lying.There is no difference between you and Damayanti.
He goes away.
Chanda cries.Padmini tries to console her.
P:Please don't hate my brother.
C:No.But i want to know one thing.Who is Damyanti?
She is silent.
P:If i tell will you be able to tolerate it?
C:Now i'm tolerating a lot.I will tolerate in future also.There is no other option.
Padmini goes and brings a photo:This id Damyanti.
Chanda looks at the photo where Damayanti is with Ram.
P:She was a good dancer.Fate was cruel.So Ram bhaiyya became like this.
Chanda thinks:Damayanti must have been Ram's girl friend.She must have cheated him.May be because of that Ram is suspicious.
P:We were poorer than your family.Bhaiyya used to do part time job while studying to make money for his education.He has suffered a lot in his life.
Chanda can't believe it.

Ram locks Chanda inside the room as he does'nt want her to go out.
Padmini:Why are you doing this to Chanda bhabhi?If you behave like this like Damyanthi she will also go.
Ram stares at her.Padmini gets scared and goes away.

Nupur avoids all the proposals she gets.
Tilaka tells Inder:I think she is avoiding all the proposals for Ashmit.
Inder is shocked:What?
T:It's my doubt.
I:If it's true also i don't have any problem.

Inder goes to Nupur's room.
She is humming:Pehla nasha...
I:Good.Ashmit has turned you into a good singer.What is your opinion about him?
N:He is a very sincere teacher.
I:Only that much?Don't you feel more about him?
I:i liked him very much.What about you?
N:What are you saying dad?
I:Is it for Ashmit you are avoiding proposals?
She is shocked.She has no answer.
I:Tell Nupoo.
N:I don't know dad.I can't understand anything.
Inder smiles:I will speak to Ashmit's family.I will be happy if he becomes my son in law.
Nupur is surprised.She blushes.

Edited by jasminerahul - 26 October 2010 at 11:09pm

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 October 2010 at 12:25am | IP Logged
the up is good
prem understands anjali that"s good
ashmit came bach to nupoor
but yeh kya why ram is doing like this to chanda
he is a psyco i think
plz cont soon and pm me

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 27 October 2010 at 4:11am
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 October 2010 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Great part prem look good with his act
Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 October 2010 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Nice parts.....but its sad that Ashmit will not cum to teach Nupur again....however their equation has progressed a lot....and am glad to knw Inder is thinking abt Ashmit-Nupur's marriage!!!

Eshwari is seriously crazy....needs a psychiatrist....and hope Ridhhima gets sum sense soon!!
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 27 October 2010 at 7:48am | IP Logged
nice part....................good that prem believes anjali........................and nupur's family like ashmit too................cont soon...............

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