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monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 2:00am | IP Logged
wowowowo raj music teacher great i love to see him ad teacher

Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Oh wow....thats an interesting concept.....Raj playing a music teacher is sumthing new....and sounds sweet as looking forward to the next part....and am glad the marriage was called off....hehe. Pls continue soon!!
pinky901 Goldie

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 9:47am | IP Logged
nice part
the way nupur handels all this matter is grt.she bring the smile on her face jus b'coz of her family..she is such a sweet n nice the way ridzi confronts in front of prem is sensible person but do not wish to go against her mother.akash really wants nupur to be his bhabhi is nice. its a tough phase for all of them but the way family tackle wit the situation is grt.
oh so akash is in love wit riddhima only in first meeting..its interesting to see this now...
well nupur wish to learn music n riddhima arrange a music teacher for her is wit this only ashmit made entry in her house. i have a feeling that ashmit is the person who is made for nupur n they both fall in love only grt concept dear
pls cont so soon...
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 11:18am | IP Logged

Heal my heart Part 3

Music cannot be detached from Nupur.Music and Nupur are one,Ashmit understands it from the music class.Nupur is also pleased with Ashmit's teaching style.
After the music class..
A:Ok..then i'm going Nupoooo.
Nupur is surprised and Tilaka is shocked.Because only the closed ones call her like that.
Tilaka gets irritated:What did you call her?Nupoo?Only the family members call her like that.You are trying to flirt with her.We don't need you anymore.
Nupur and Ashmit are shocked.
A:I'm sorry.I never had any bad intention.When you heard her calling Nupoo i thought it's her real name.Chanda just told me to teach her friend's sister.She had'nt mentioned her name.
T:Her real name is Nupur.
He asks softly:Shall i come tomorrow for the class?
T:Ok,but only to teach her music.
Nupur and Ashmit are relieved.

Gradually Tilaka starts liking Ashmit because of his decent behaviour.

Riddhima comes home.
R:Nupoo,how is your music sir?
N:Very nice.
R:I want to meet him.
Tilaka comes:First you change your tight dress and wear something very Indian.
N:Ridz..listen to dadi.
Riddhima wears a simple salwar kameez.
When Ashmit comes,Nupur introduces her to him.
A:Chanda told me that Riddhima is very tom boyish kind of a girl. is a very traditional girl.
R:Dadi is lying.I don't like Indian clothes.I was forced to wear this today.
Ashmit smiles.Tilaka is embarassed.
A:It's good to have an individual personality.If Riddhima likes modern dresses,what's the point in going against her wish?
Riddhima is impressed by Ashmit as he accepted her personality.

Ashmit is completely engrossed in Nupur's music.
Nupur sees him looking deeply into her eyes.She becomes insecure.
He does'nt move.
She waves her hand before his eyes.He does'nt move.
He says in his mind:Nupur...whatever you do..nothing can stop me from looking at you.I'm addicted to you now.I can't even spend a day without seeing you.
N:What happened?
He looks deeply into her eyes.She blinks her eyes with a smile.
She thinks:Something is there in Ashmit sir which pulls me closer to him.
He thinks:What's happening to me?I feel different when i'm with Nupur.
After the music class the rose flower which Nupur has worn falls down.Ashmit takes it without anyone's knowledge.He admires it's beauty.He loves it's fragrance.He keeps it inside the music book.

Riddhima wears a modern dress next day.
Ashmit:I think salwar kameez suits you more than western clothes.
R:But last day you said...
A:What i meant is we can wear what we like.But sometimes the dress which suits us may not be the one we like.
Riddhima feels that he is right.

Akash sees Riddhima in the Cd shop.
Riddhima does'nt mind him.
A:You did'nt recognise me?
R:Yes,that's why i did'nt speak to you.If i speak to you that won't be a pleasant conversation.
He feels bad.She moves away.
She sees Ashmit there:Hi Ashmitji.
Akash feels insecure when she talks to Ashmit avoiding him.
R:Do you know western music?
Ash:Yes.But no one else in our family likes it.So i could'nt learn it.
They both giggle while talking.
Akash thinks:So Riddhima prefers westen music.
Akash buys a violen and sends it to Riddhima.
She is surprised to get it.
She reads the paper which was attached to it:
To the modern nightingale who loves western music....a music lover's small gift.
She thinks:Ashmitji must have sent it to me.I had told him that i love western music.
She has learnt to play violen in the school.It's her favourite music instrument.She is happy that Ashmit understood it.She plays Violen.
Chanda comes:You played Violen now?
C:How did you get this violen?
R:Somebody sent it to me?
R:I don't know.
C:Who has the guts to do that?Since you are a bold girl guys of our college dare to flirt with you.May be because of your glamour look somebody must have decided to woo you indirectly.

When Ashmit comes Nupur comes downstairs smiling at him.Her leg slips and she is about to fall down.Ashmit runs to her and holds her.They both look into each other's eyes.

Riddhima gets a gift again.Faded flowers.
She reads the paper attached to the cover:When these flowers reach you they must have faded already.But my heart is fresh and is open for you.
C:You have changed a lot Ridz.Usually you burst out when such a sutuation comes.But now...
R:Stop it yaar.

Eshwari calls Prem and Akash.
E:I could'nt conduct Prem's wedding like i wished.But now i have decided to conduct Prem's and Akash's weddings together.I have made the arrangements.I have found sisters for you both.Their father;the rich business man only brought the proposal to us.
Akash is shocked.
A:But what if we don't like them?
E:What are you saying?I'm sure that you both will like them.
A:But i don't want to marry now.My studies are not over.I have no job.
E:You are smart.You will get campus selection soon.The girl's family are confident about that.That's why they fixed the wedding.
Akash is helpless.He is too weak to oppose his mom.His eyes become wet.
Akash goes to his room.He loses peace of mind.

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Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Thats a nice part....a progress from Ashmit n Nupur....and glad to see Tilaka eventually liking Ashmit....but ye Riddhima is liking Ashmit instead of Akash....hope she gets to knw the truth soon....and also Akash manages to stop his own wedding....I want Ashmit's way to be perfectly clear...hehe. Pls continue soon.
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Ashmit should clear all things soon...thx for this part and pm greatpart
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
nice part....................ashmit and nupur like each other but ridhima also is beginning to like ashmit......................cont soon....................
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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
nice part
please continue soon

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