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Ash1991 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 10:38am | IP Logged
lovely update....
plz add me 2 ur pm list

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Posted: 24 October 2010 at 11:13am | IP Logged
loved da update do continue
it was amazing

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kawaii_geet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 9:54am | IP Logged
                                     GENTLE WHISPERS PART 4

It was the rustling sound of the tree leaves that awoken them!.slowly parting from each other.....lost in each other.......a strand of hair covered Geet's eyes disturbing her........and at once she could feel his fingers gently caressing them and moving them away!
" Geet, kal se humari adhoori sagai aur shaadi ki taiyaariyan shuru hone wali hain aur mujhe aur tumhe office ki haalat ko bhi sudharna padega! Is wajah se hum don bahut busy rahenge aur ghar par dadi tumhe ya mujhe akela nahi chodengi......isi liye aaj mein tumhare liye kuch laya hoon!"

Saying these words, that pink stained Geet's cheeks, Maan put his fingers in his pocket and took out a small leaflet.....neatly folded and sealed!!!

" Yeh kya hai??", asked Geet raising her brows !

" Iss tab kholna jab tum bilkul akele raho.....tumhe sab kuch samajh  mein aa jayega!", whispered Maan .

At this Geet immediately retorted, " kyun mein ise abhi kyun nahi khol sakti??"

" Geet......tumhe shaayad hindi samajh mein nahi aati?", teased Maan with a smirk!

" samajh mein to aati hai par isme aisa kya hai jo aap nahi chahte ki mein yeh aapke saamne kholoon?", Geet teased back!

Hearing such open defiance brought out the old angry MK.

" Geet.....", he shouted, " woh cheez mujhe wapas karo , abhi isi waqt!!!" He tried to snatch  it away but Geet was too quick. She pulled  it back and ran. Maan ran behind her.......

Soon their bet changed into a game of " chor-police" by little kids.......both laughed and giggled like first standards. Finally, Maan's long arms were able to get hold of Geet's hands and he pulled her close with a sudden jerk . before she could realize anything Maan gently lifted her in his arms and walked towards the swing!!!

He seated her on the swing as gently as a feather and sat beside her. Geet held his arm tighter and placed her head on his shoulder gently. Maan could still feel her fear of losing him! It was as if all her emotions were flowing into him through this small touch!  He gently held her hands.....Geet's eyes were closed....the beauty of this innocent lady held his eyes!   

" I swear Geet....I swear that I'll never ever leave you alone...... ever...... even if it means death!" whispered Maan.

Geet's silence startled him.....he was relieved to find that she was just asleep, her hands still holding his arms tightly!

Such innocence.....such serenity....such loveliness....his lady love had all those charms that could lead a man to lose his control!!!

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Maan's eyes opened slowly, only to find traces of dawn in the sky. It was still dark. Later did  he realize that he too had fallen asleep on the swing! He found Geets still sleeping......the night was cold.....She cuddled towards him! His eyes fell  on his wrist watch - 4:30 in the morning.

He slowly lifted her in his gently that she was not at all disturbed and walked towards her bedroom. He made her sleep on bed as comfortably as he could and turned to leave!! But he was stopped by Geet's hands holding his! She did  it in her sleep.....she was still holding that leaflet he had given her earlier! A sweet smile covered his manly face.......he slowly made her hand unheld his and placed the leaflet beside her pillow.

Before leaving for the Khurana Mansion, he gently placed a kiss on her forheadof his ladylove....who even enjoyed it in her sleep by smiling slowly!!!

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It was 7:00 in the morning when Geet's eyes opened slowly with the flashbacks of last night's BOSSY ROMANCE!

She blushed and smiled......a shine on her face.......afer so many days of pain and separation. She took a long time to take a bath.....washing every inch of her skin......every fold her body.....every strand of her hair! Her love had come back to her safe and sound......she needed to erase all the past memories of pain, hurt and sorrow.....from her mind as well as her body! She must look her best.......not for herself but for her love!!!

As she bathed she thought of Maan......the way he holds her......the way he calls out her name......the way her whispers in her ears. His thoughts made her body hot.....every inch......every fold of her curvaceous body craving for him.....longing for him!! Her desires overtaking herself!!!!

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next : overflowing desires???Wink

Edited by kawaii_geet - 25 October 2010 at 10:01am

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreamingawesome partDay Dreamingsend next part soon

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-MaanEetLover- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 11:23am | IP Logged
This is realy great.
I really enjoy it Smile

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pushpi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Wow. Update soon and PM me too please :-D LOVELY part

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
wow lovely update.. very romantic.. do continue soon

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Posted: 25 October 2010 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
so dreamy...cnt dear...

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