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MAANEET - GENTLE WHISPERS! THREAD 1 (Page 2)

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                               GENTLE WHISPERS - PART 2


"Who….mein…..Sir….aa…aap…yahan…itni raat…kisi bhi ladki ko jo akele rehti ho…use darr to lagega hi na Sir", stammered Geet. At this Maan broke into a fit of anger…he looked at her with his beautiful yet scary eyes and started moving towards her!!! Geet didn't understand as to why Maan got angry at such a small thing! She had also started moving backwards, involuntarily!!!!

                        "Geet…..Maine tummhe kitni baar kaha hai ki don't call me sir! But you never understand anything easily do you??"

Geet's back hit the wall…Maan only a few inches away from her….she was cornered!!!!!!!

"woh…….woh…mein…kaise…."

"shut up Geet …call me Maan and not Sir…do you get it???"

"yes sir!"

"Maan….only Maan!"

"Ji….Maan sir!"

Maan could not say further as he knew she couldn't do it….she was so much acquainted with calling him "sir" that now it has become nearly impossible for her to change! He noticed Geet feeling a bit uncomfortable. She was looking down…her big eyelashes covered her innocent brown eyes and at once Maan was so smitten by her simplicity that he forgot all his anger!!!

              He held her chin gently with his long fingers! Geet tried to avert her eyes but Maan had lifted her head enough to make her look directly into his eyes! And once again he fell in love with her eyes…..the innocence that flowed from them……her serenity!!

"Tum poochogi nahi Geet ki mein iss waqt yahan kyun aaya hoon??", Maan asked her with a gentle whisper.

" Ji…??" Geet was so lost in his eyes that she was completely clueless about the question thrown at her.

Maan's other hand that rested on one of her shoulders gently slid downwards…..making her feel a soothing current gushing right from her shoulders…..down her arms….to her hands….and finally entwining around her fingers!!! Maan's eyes waited for her reaction…….but Geet, this was making her body hot enough!!! She couldn't do anything but to respond in positive. Her fingers slowly started to entwine Maan's fingers….her body was getting even hotter!!!!!

        


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hey nice update.. thanx a lot for the pm... do continue soon

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like ur FF....
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sound interesting
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