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aishu ji!plz update this and "never forget me".
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started writing again .. huh lets see .. if i can do justice !

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Originally posted by aishwaryagayen

started writing again .. huh lets see .. if i can do justice !
you have to justice...Angry warna mae aage ki story soch ke soch ke pagal ho jaoungi Cry 
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Chapter 20

It has been two weeks since that engagement day. Two weeks since she touched prem, looked him in the eye, saw his eyes light up with laughter. Everything was gone, the prem she loved was gone. Heer stood infront of the mirror looking at herself. Gone was the mehendi which decorated her hands instead of that a pale faint color remained which reminded her of what she has lost. Deep hollows marred under her eyes. Without giving much thought to her appearance she put on her dupatta and took up her bag. It was time for her to leave home and go to maya's place so that they both can go to college. It was a routine for her since last two days , she woke up early and left before anyone could track her down and came home late making excuses about projects and internal exams and it was all because he didn't want to see her anymore. Didn't want her face tormenting him anymore because prem juneja didn't want to look at her and feel guilty so he has asked her to stay away from him.

 

The words still echoed in her ears, "heer this can't go on, I am so sorry but  I need some space. You need to stop being around me , expecting something from me. I can feel the disappointment roll from you and its depressing"

 

Heer didn't know how the love shared between them changed into disappointment from his side. All she was asking was a chance but he wasn't ready to give her. It was as if she was running after him and he did his best to avoid her. So she has now decided to give him his peace and space. He didn't need to see her face if that tormented him.

 

The nightmare that she has fallen into is not ending. It began from that day in hospital and she is trapped just trapped the coldness won't leave her and has been surrounding her like a mist since that awful day

3 days since the engagement and everything was in chaos in heer's life. The tension and panic she felt seeing her past on the engagement day was nothing compared to the sickness which has consumed her core. Sitting on the chair outside prem's hospital room for those 1 hour was the toughest thing she had done. One side of her urged to go barging into his room, shaking him till he spell her name and the other part wanted to just curl down and let the time pass. She could feel the tension vibrating through preet sitting beside her, he thought it was his fault but she knew it wasn't. there was no reason for preet to beat himself up just because prem took off for the business meeting instead of him and met with this fate. 

It was preet who has to go for a two hour conference to Delhi the day before hers and prems marriage but preet being preet didn't want to leave the ceremony and fun and prem being the more reasonable person took the work on his shoulder and promised to be back in the evening. She was reluctant to let him go but there was no other option and she knew preet was even scared of handling the job so there was no need of pushing him.

She could still feel the warmth of his hug while he came to let her know that he has to leave for few hours and will be back as soon as possible. She could still feel his laughter while he nuzzled her and asked her not to miss him too much.

It didn't take few hours for him to return. within 45 minutes of him leaving the place the phone at their residence rang bringing the ominous news. A signal mishap has caused prem's car to topple over and he was heavily injured. The police at the scene has called their number from prem's cell and asked them to reach the nearby hospital as soon as possible. It was meher who took the call and the everything erupted around them. The house that was busy preparing for the details of marriage was locked. Everyone was pacing the hospital floors. While the doctors informed them that there wasn't much injury on his body but still they haven't let anyone speak to him yet so they were waiting.she saw her father , prem's dad and nihaal sharma to whom she was introduced at the engagement as prem's friend and business partner were all talking to the team of doctors. She saw her maa and gayatri maa huddled outside prem's room looking at him through glass and veera desperately trying to listen  to what the men were talking about prem while meher and maya sipped the cup of coffees Harman brought for them. It was only her and preet sitting at the corner silently.

She finally put a hand over his shoulder trying to break his stiff posture and then murmured softly to him,"it's ok preet he is going to be fine, just relax" and the next instant she was embraced in a warm bone jarring hug by him and yes the little juneja was shaking badly and crying. It was as if a 5 year old was hugging and whimpering infront of her and she felt bad for him so she put her hands around him.

She lost the track of time they were there and after what felt like eternity the doctor gave the permission to a few of them to go and meet him. yes, he was conscious and nothing serious, it's just that the marriage was off for now but heer didn't care as long as he was fine nothing else mattered. She dragged preet with her to his room when he refused to go because of his guilt. She followed gayatri maa, her dad and prem's dad  to the room and a sigh of relief escaped her. Prem was sitting on the bed a butterfly bandage slapped on his forehead and a cast in his right hand. Other than that he looked fine.

Heer stayed back while gayatri hugged his son and prem being prem told her mom that he was fine. It looked the opposite case as if gayatri maa was injured and prem was pacifying her. She heard his smooth voice and relief washed through her. She stood back and listened him speaking softly to his mother,"it's just a broken wrist maa" and while he cooed over his mother she saw preet relax a bit but the relief wasn't for long it took exactly five more minutes for prem to look at heer and another minute for him to get that unsettling look in his eyes and it was time for heer's world to tilt. The man she was about to marry didn't know her anymore, couldn't remember her anymore, wouldn't look at her anymore. She was just a stranger for him not his about to be bride. There was no marriage going to happen and there was no love left from him side. the doctor's report claimed partial amnesia. His mind was shutting down the recent past. He could remember everything from his former life but he was miscalculating the date, the place and her.

And it had all come crashing down on her to the point where prem didn't want to see her anymore.

That's' all !!

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Originally posted by kiran_28

Originally posted by aishwaryagayen

started writing again .. huh lets see .. if i can do justice !
you have to justice...Angry warna mae aage ki story soch ke soch ke pagal ho jaoungi Cry 
oh mera baccha .. dont die on me plzz oh mera baccha .. dont die on me plzz 

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