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Posted: 19 October 2010 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Hey manju, shreya and ria!!
I loved the concept alot
awesome..do cont soon!Big smile
n thnx for the pm

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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The concept is Awesome !! I'd like to read futher.

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haya lov da concept!!!! when ar u gunna start??? plz pm me!!!! thankz!!!

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hey guys this is my first attempt on writing a ff.....thnxx 2 manjari n ria...

part 1

it was a bright morning n new beginning 4 a girl.. wearing a plain n simple white churridar n doing aarti...
G- bhagwan ji aaj main apni zindagi ki ek nayi shuruwat kar rahi hun....plzz mera saath dena...aaj pehli baar main di aur jiju se jhooth bolungi..main unse jhooth bolna nahin chaati thi par  
aap jaante ho agar unhe pata chal gaya toh woh muje kabhi karne nahin denge aur mere baare mein chinta karne lagenge...plzz meri madad kar dena....


then a lady shouts at d bak
L-gunjan break fast ready hai
g-aayi di....
then she goes 2 d dinning room...
g-aayi di tum kitna chila ti ho
n she turns...she is none othr than
 MRS NUPUR MAYANK SHARMA wife of  gr8 buisness tycoon n gunjans sis n her support system 
n-kya chila rahi hoon...main tabse tumdono ka intezaar kar rahi hoon...par tum dono ko toh sunayye nahin deta
g-sorry di n she hugs her
n-tu hai ek aur tere jija ji..subha subha utkar kaam main lag gaye hain
g-di..jiju ko kuch mat bolo woh tumhare har baat maante hain
n-oyee tu meri behen hai ya uski...

M-meri...
n thy both turn round...he was MAYANK SHARMA D GR8 BUISNESS TYCOON....
m-hai toh rishte main gunjan meri saali par woh toh meri choti behen jaise hai
aur waise bhi saaliyan aadhi gharwale hote hain...thnk god tumhare saath mujhe gunjan bhi free mein mil gaye warna tumhaare 
saath akele rehkar toh main paagal hojata...
n he gives a hi5 2 gunjan n thy both laugh
nupur gives an angry look 2 majan n thy stop laughing
n-haan haan haso haso aur haso main hi buri hoon na acha hoga agar main chali jaaun n she turns away
majan chukle n thy both give her a hug..G-sorry di main tumhe jaane nahin dungi kyunki main tumse bahut bahut pyaar karte hoon...
m-agar tum chali jaogi toh mere lyf mein toh entertainment hi nahin rahegi...nupz glares at him 
mayank hugs nupur 4rm bak n says sorry...i luv u jaan main toh mazaak kar raha tha...tum hi mere jeene ki wajah ho...
n thy both hv a en eye lock...
g-thinks(di aur jiju kitne lucky hai woh dono ek dusre se itna pyaar  karte aur ek sath kitne khush hai aur main bhi kitni lucky hoon unhone kabhi bhi mujhe maa aur bauji ki kami mehsoos nahin hone di )
 
n thn she finally interupts...AHEM AHEM
mayur break d eye lock n thy become very embarassd gunjan smiles
n-chalo chodo tum dono baatein banana chod do.. maine maaf kiya ok...chalo brkfast karlo
aur gunajn tera aaj mba ka pehla coaching class haina..toh mayank tumhe drop kardega
m-haan gunajn i ll drop u
g-d smile on her face disappears n she immediatly says.. NAHIN DI...mera matlab hai ki jiju ko office ke liye late hojayega
main khud chali jaaungi
n-par gunjan
g-di main koi bachi nahin hon main chali jaaungi
n-par
g-plzz di
gunjan luks at d tym n it was 8 30 n her appointment was at 9
g-oh god di mujhe interview ke liye late horaha hai
n-KYA????
g-i mean.. mba class...
then she goes n hugs nupur a tear escapes 4rm her eye
g-in her mind(sorry di pehli baar koi bada kaam karne se pehle tumhe jhooth bol rahi hoon)
n-kya hua gunjan
g-kuch nahin di woh aaj mera pehla din hai na isliye daar lag raha hai
n-jo gunjan bachpan se har class mein top karti hai usse ek maamoli se mba class se darr lag raha hai...
gunjan gives a fake smile
n-acha ab tu jaa late horahai
g-oh haan bye di bye jiju
m-bye meri pyaari saali

gunjan quickly gets a taxi n reaches her destination
n she was standing in front of D n D.(dying n desining company)d biggest fashion company in india n this was her dream 2 become a designer
n she finally got an appointment their)

she sees d tym n thn  rushes inside n she bumps 2 a guy n falls in his arms.. he caught her by waist thy both hv an eyelock
staring into eachothrs eyes...gunjan realises wat she was doing n straightens herself..
g-yeh kya kiya tumne
guy-kya kiya 
g-dikhaayi nahing deta kya tumhe...mere saare files aur papers gira diya
she starts picking up her files n he helps her
guy-ohh sorry
g-wat sorry waise bhi main late ho rahi hoon aur tum mujhe aur late kar rahe ho...she says angrily
guy-excuse me  maine sorry bola na....
g-haan aur maine itzz not ok bola khush
guy-dekho tum jaanti nahin ki main kaun hoon!!!
g-nahin main nahin jaanti aur jana bhi nahin chaati.. yaahan aise ghum rahe ho jaise khud ka hi office ho..she says n turns
 n was abt 2 leave
guy-hey u..suno miss...MISS CHASHMISH
g-turns bak..wat??kya bulaya tumne??????
guy-CHASHMISH
g-how dare u?
guy-dekho mujhe tumhe kisi bhi naam se pukaar ne koi shauk nahin hai yeh tumhaare kuch papers reh gaye the
gunjan takes it 4rm his hand n their hands touch...both felt something differnt...she immediately withdrew her hand
g-ohk thnxx...n glares at him n goes

guy-wow she is beautiful...oh no sam yeh tu kya soch raha hai (yes he was SAMRAT SHERGILL D GR88 FASHION TYCOON N D OWNER OF D N D COMPANY)
woh chashmish teri hi office mein tujhe se aise baat kar rahi thi...aur tune kuch nahin kaha....chal chod agaru iske baare mein sochne lage ga toh tu late hojaayega aur bro  tujhe  maar
dalega... n he leaves...

gunjan was waiting in d reception..wen a girl  cums n calls MISS GUNJAN BHUSHAN aapka turn hai
g-feels nervous thn she closes her eyes n thinks abt her parents....a tear falls frm her eyes she wipes it n goes inside
g-may i come in sir (she cant see his face bcoz he turning d othr side his bak is facing gunjan
s-yes come in n he turns....

g-TUM??
S-TUM???
 END


so this was d first part of out TRIO ff....next part ria will update...
HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT.....PLZZ DONT 4GET 2 COMMNET.......

lots of love
shreya


Edited by SM_317 - 20 October 2010 at 3:53am

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Posted: 19 October 2010 at 6:46am | IP Logged
RES!
 
Hii Shreya!
You were fab! Seriously koi nahi kahega ki yeh tune pehli baar likha!
Reallyy.. it was superb!
N an awesome start!! Jus lovved it!
N ab Ria ki baari! yay!
btw sab ko pm kardiya na?


Edited by SajanRox11 - 19 October 2010 at 7:55am

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heyyy shreya
amzinggg start
majan were cutee..
n nups seemed 2 b vryy caring
n den d sajans 1st meet..
omggggggg simply amazinggggg
cont sooooooooon guyz..
n
thnx 4 d pm


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nice update luv the way sajan MET LOLdo cont soon 

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