STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom - Page 7

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

Abhi back in danger again. .  twist after twist. Loving it

Is smiley ka kya matlab hai???? It looks like some professor looking at someone copying in an exam.

Originally posted by: visrom

Is smiley ka kya matlab hai???? It looks like some professor looking at someone copying in an exam.

Originally posted by: visrom

Is smiley ka kya matlab hai???? It looks like some professor looking at someone copying in an exam.

🤣 . good one
 Abhijeet jumps into danger quickly. I know situations demanded such and he did right thing it was most appropriate action at that time but  so smoothly without any  handwork Abhijeet always land himself in danger (my reaction was to just this). It was just a casual reaction don't take it too seriously.

Your story is going awesome way. 

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

 Abhijeet jumps into danger quickly.  

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

visrom I loved the below lines

I feel that there are certain unexpressed things which are better when not explicitly mentioned. I am glad prettywomen, you could catch that. 😊 

What a scene that would be I can actually see Daya Sir act that out. It touched my heart. Yaar why can't these people give us such simple joys, it is so easy to please us, one logical reaction, one logical detection, one correct dialog and we are sorted but no they will go to paris but not give us a decent story. Edited by prabha. - 13 years ago

nice story!! very touching!!

Chalo everyone...please read and comment. Those who have missed, I have added one more scene -some action. I'll continue when I get time.

I've not read it 😔 !! Haven't read a single comment so that I continue from the boyish grin without knowing anything !!! Will start now 😃