Coffee house:Gurmeet Drashti ff climax pg22 - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
ohk...interesting story line
continue soon!
Posted: 13 years ago
Part 2
 
Gunjan,Devyani and Chandni chat and enjoy in the coffee house.
C:This coffee house has become our meeting place.
G:Ya..
D:How fast we became friends.We share happiness and sorrows with each other.
G:I feel nice.I was always alone in my life.Now i feel i have some people who care for me.
C:Our friendship will always remain the same.
They smile.
A car reaches.
C:Adi has come.
A cool guy comes out of the car with a smile.
A:Hi honey.
He runs towards Chandni.They both stand close to each other.
Adi looks at Gunjan and Devyani:So they are your new friends.Nice to meet you all.By the way..i'm Adi.
G:No need of any introduction.Chandni always talks about you.
A:Really?
Adi winks at Chandni.Chandni blushes.
A:Chandni always talks about Gunjan and Devyani.Anyways...today is my birthday.
G:Really?Chandni did'nt tell us.
C:I thought of giving a surprise.The surprise is that Adi wants to invite you both for tonight's birthday party.
A:Yes,not only you both.Devyani's husband Dr.Druv is also invited for the party.
Gunjan and Devyani smile.
A:You both will come.Right?
G:We will come for the party.
D:Yes,it's our pleasure.
A:Don't forget.Black is the dress code.Be dressed in black.

Druv comes back home.
Dev:Druv..good thing that you came back home.I told you about Chandni.
D:Chandni?Who is she?
Dev:You forgot her so fast.Oh!My new friend whom i met at the Coffee house.
D:Oh!What happened to her?
Dev:Her fiancee Adi has invited us for his birthday party.
D:That's nice.But i'm sorry.I can't accompany you.
Dev:Why?Why are you not showing interest in me?
D:Nothing like that Devyani.There is an operation.I have to leave now itself.
Dev:Then why did you come back home?You could have stayed in the hospital itself.
D:I came to freshen up.That's all.
Druv goes inside the bathroom to freshen up.
Devyani wears a black saree and silver ornaments.Druv comes out dressed in his suit.
D:Ok bye Devyani.I'm leaving.
Dev:Ok.
Druv steps out of the room.He turns back.
D:Have a nice time.
Devyani tries to smile.
Druv goes.
She thinks:He could have atleast tried to give me a compliment.After all i dressed well.

Party...
Adi is cool in his black outfit.Chandni looks stylish in her black frock.Gunjan has worn a black frock which has blue work on it.Her blue earrings look amazing on her.Devyani comes.
D:I'm sorry..i'm late.
Adi:tHat's fine.Where is Dr.Druv?
D:Sorry..he could'nt come.
A:That's not fair.Anyways enjoy the party.
Adi cuts the cake and puts the piece into Chandni's mouth.Chandni puts a piece into Adi's mouth.Then she puts the cream all over his face.Everyone laughs.

'Hey what's with you baby
I never never never never never felt this way before
Hey come a little closer
Baby, baby baby wanna steal your heart away

Are gore gore mukhde, chand ke tukde
Kaali kaali zulfein, neeli neeli aankhen
Are gore gore mukhde (be my love), chand ke tukde (be my love)
Kaali kaali zulfein (be my love), neeli neeli aankhen (be my love)
Khwaab dikhaade raah bhula de, hosh uda de sab ke
Chain mita de, tan sulga de, mann mein de masti ghol
Rock and roll soniye, dole yeh man tere liye
Rock and roll my darling, my heart dances for you
Rock and roll soniye, kabhi tu bhi toh mere sang dol
Rock and roll my darling, why don't you dance with me too..'{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.

The song is getting louder and louder.All are dancing.
Devyani imagines dancing with Druv.
"Can i dance with you?"
Somebody asks Gunjan.She looks at him.He is a serious handsome young man.
"Me..Manav Garewel",he says.
Gunjan smiles sweetly.He also smiles.He holds her hand and leads her to the dance floor.
The song which is heard in the background:
'Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale..'{Kites}.
Gunjan and Manav are lost in each other while dancing.The lyrics of the song were expressing their feelings.
Suddenly the electricity goes.When it comes back,Gunjan does'nt find Manav there.She is out of mood.

That night Gunjan thinks about Manav without sleeping.
Posted: 13 years ago
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool update.. am really enjoying it.. do continue soon
Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update!
finally gunjan n manav met! :D
n i feel bad for devyani
dhruv shud take out sum tome for her!

Posted: 13 years ago
luvly part............add me 2 ur pm list plzz
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...gotta admit getting used to the new names is kinda hard...i am so used to maan and geet lol...tht it is kinda hard to comprehend the names lol...but i lvoe the concept and the story so far lol
Posted: 13 years ago
wowwww..
nice update
loved
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

hiii

awesome update
loved it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff.. can you add me to your pm list plz???

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