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sonali_22 Goldie

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 3:28am | IP Logged

Hi that's my second FF'.read and pls share your opinion'I am not sure if I should continue'so comments pls'.thx


I love you, I hate you
But your always on my mind

I hate the way you smile
As beautiful as it may be

I hate the way you walk
And I hate the way you talk

I hate the way you smell
And I hate the way you feel

I hate the way you hair shines
And waves in the breeze

But most of all I hate the way
You make me feel

How your always on my mine
The way I see you but your never there

I hate it when I look at another girl
And all I see is you

I especially hate how much I love you
And everything you do

I hate how I can never have you
Or how my heart is not breaking over you

But shattering inside
With each piece of my heart

Contains a tiny fragment of memories I've confined
Memories of you I've held deep in side
Never letting go

I hate the way I feel when I miss you
And I want to break down and cry

I hate the pain that's burning inside
w/t thoughts of how much I love you
that I could never hide

I hate, it and I hate you
But know matter how much I say it
I'll still always love you deep down in side



I'm tearing in two

And I'm not sure what to do

My heart is screaming I love him

My mind saying I hate him

What do I do

I love him, but I hate him?

I love everything about him

I love how he smiles

I love how he can make me smile

I love how no matter what is going on.

I love how he will always be there


But all the same

I hate him

I hate everything he means for

I hate how he can make me smile

No matter how hard I try not to

I hate how he can make me cry

I hate how he can make me sad

I hate how he can make me feel

I hate how he looks at me with his eyes so kind

I hate how all of this makes me love him even more

I hate how I can't hate him

Most of all I hate myself

I hate myself because

I can never hate you



It was dark in the room. The moon light shimmered through the room. Two strangers stood there.

"I hate you he" he said and moved a step closer

"I hate you more" she said and took a step forward

"I hate you the most! No one can hate you like i do" their body were only inches away from each other
"I will always hate you 2 times more" his breath was tickling her

"Every time when i see your face i can throw up" looked deep in her eyes

"And your presence makes me sick" she breathed heavily

"Really?" moved his lips toward her lips

"Really!" closed the gap between their lips.

It was a passionate kiss...breathtaking... no words to describe how they felt...He pulled her closer to his body...she gave in... She never felt something like that before...he forcefully played with her tongue...she moaned in pleasure'

After a long time they broke apart'

"I still hate you" he whispered

"I still hate you more" she whispered

"Good then sign the papers" he said ready to leave the room

"In six months we are strangers again" she whispered.

He wasn't sure but he felt something pierced his heart. Without a word he left the room.

She sat on her bed. Tears began to flow. She never felt such a pain in her life. It felt like her life and soul left her.

But what should she do? They hated each other na?


Part 1 PG 2

Part 2 PG 6

Part 3 PG 9

Part 4 PG 14

Part 5 PG 17

Part 6 PG 22

Part 7 PG 26

Part 8 PG 32

Part 9 PG 39

Part 10 PG 47

Part 11 PG 56

Part 12 PG 63

Part 13 PG 68

Part 14: PG 75

Part 15: PG 82

Part 16: PG 90

Part 17: PG 98

Part 18: PG 109

Part 19: PG 120

Part 20: PG 133

Edited by sonnal_17 - 12 June 2011 at 6:05am

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pushpi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Interesting :-) Write further
-Purple_Rain- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:32am | IP Logged
interesting do continue and pm me too


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Rohini20 Goldie

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
hmmmm...sounds interesting..continue soon...:P
-DamnedDrooler- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 17740

Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:43am | IP Logged
hey dear....really that is jsut so keep writing...
i am so loving it.....great update.....and do add me 2 ur pm list
kyphfanz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:59am | IP Logged
nice.update soon.
taanni Senior Member

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:23am | IP Logged

amazing n interesting.

do continue

shivangi783 Goldie

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Posts: 2125

Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Continue soon.
Add me to the PM list for this FF tooSmile

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