FF: Kismat ki Kagaz par..- Last Part , pg 107 - Page 3

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Part 4:

Khanak beta'dadi called from downstairs'. And they both came back from their dream world ' khanak was dumbstruck and quickly removed her hands from his chest and ran downstairs to the kitchen '.khanak (thinking with heavy breaths)' yeh main kya kar rahii thi main kasee apna hosh khoo beti 'nain mujey shantanu kay kareeb nahii jana chayiee tha' wo Natasha ji kay honay waley pati hain 'mujey shantanu say door rehna hoo ga.'. After this incident she ignored shantanu the whole day and slept before he came to their room 'shantanu (in his mind): main janata hoo khanak tum mujey shubha waley incident ke waja say avoid kar rahii hoo.. par kab tak khanak kab tak ..he signs

Next day, shantanu went to office when khanak was busy in kitchen without eating anything'arey aaj shantanu ney kuch nain khaya 'wo bina nashatey kay office chelay gay' after khanak didn't feel like eating anything and roamed around the house feeling sad..

At around lunch time'dadi asked khanak to take food for shantanu to the office' khanak didn't wanted to go but seeing dadi all worried made her to go to the office' dadi sent khanak with the driver as khanak is not familiar with the city '.

Office:

Shantanu was shocked to see her in his office and that too with lunch ka dabba '.shantanu: khanak tum yahan kya karrahii hoo'

Khanak: not looking him in the eye: wo mujey dadi ney beja hai app ka khana ..aap ney subha say kuch nain khaya '

Shantanu was pissed at her behavior and in anger said kay mujey nahii khana main theek hoon 'khanak felt tear forming in her eyes quickly left from there' thinking' shayad shantanu bhi mujsey door honey kee koshish kar rahay hain ' lakin wo itna gussey say kyun baat kar rahey the'. Khudee to mujey kaha tha button band karney koo'our ab..khanak was walking in the corridor and heard two ladies talking:

L1: lagata  hai aaj shaan sir ney kuch nahii khaya subha sey

L2: haan yaar main bhi notice kiya 'aaj wo kuch thorey weak bhi lag rahey hai ..haan na ' roj natasha madam kay saath lunch kartee hai'

L1: han yaar aaj Natasha madam office nain ai'.shayad esiee liye sir ney lunch nain kiya

Khanak: shantanu kamzoor (got worried)  .. main aisey kasey wahan se ai gaii mujey un ko khana khela kar ana chayiee tha' khanak went back to his room ' shantanu: abb kya hai 'khanak: kuch nain with a smile '

She started opening lunch box and came towards him and signal him to eat' shantanu turned his face with a no' khanak smiled'bilkul bachee hoo aap' and started feeding him with her own hands' while feeding him khanak's eyes never left shantanu's face' main while shantanu was working and eating at the same time' he smiled to himself and enjoyed being pampered by his wife his khanak'

Suddenly shantanu grabed a file from the table, which caused khanak hand to get dirty with daal ..khanak: kya shantanu app dekh kar kio kaam nain kar saktey 'mere haath ganda  kardiye 'ab app key office main hath kasey saaf karoon ' yaha kio wash room hai kya ' turned to leave '

He grabbed her hand from back' mere pass aik acha idea hai '.khanka: wo kya'.abb hath saaf karney  ka bhi idea hota hia'. Choriye 'shantanu got up from his chair ..Got close to her and brings her hand close to his face'. Khanak main saaf kardeta hoon tumhara haath'.he brings her hand close to his mouth and licked the dhaal from her hand '. Khanak gasped and got shocked by his action'and he also licked her two fingers with she was feeding him '. Shantanu : khanak ho gaya ya abhi our bhi hai '.smiled and stared at her lips 'khanak freed her hand and ran from there'  shantanu signed heavy ..yeh larki mujey pagal karde gii'.

Outside his office'. khanak holding her hand and smiling 'and kissed her hand where shantanu kissed a minute ago'..while walking she spotted Natasha and her smiled vanished '.natasha jii'and remembers her moment in shaan office'walks out of the building and starts walking along the road'.. yeh main neyn kya kiya fir say shantanu koo apne paas aney diya 'agar ..agar Natasha ji yeh sab dekh leteee to kya sochthee mere our shantanu kay baray main '.

Lakin main apne app ko rook kyun nain pa rahee' mujey shantanu ka naam Natasha ji  kay saath jortey howe itneee takleef kyun hotee' kyun main nahi chatee kay shantanu ka naam mere elawa keseee our kay saath na  liya jaye'she kept thinking about shantanu and her moments'in her thought she didn't know where she was walking '.

On the other hand, shantanu went out to look for khanak 'he asked the lady at the front desk'she told him that she saw khanak walking out of the building ' shantanu; lagat hai khanak ghar chalee gayee hai 'chaloo kio baat nain ghar ja kay baat kar loon ga.. smiled 'suddenly he spotted the driver 'khanak to driver kay saath thi 'lakin driver yahan kya kar raha hai ..our khanak'.panic struck him ..he ran towards the driver and asked him about khanak 'khanak kahan ja sakte hai 'bina kessi ko batiye ' plz khanak be safe' tumey to ais city kay baray main kuch nain pata 'oh god khanak kahan hoo tum '.. went out to look for her' he spotted her walking on road' shit khanak road kay beach main kaya kar rahee hai '.

Shantanu grabed her with force'khanak came out of her thoughts' shantanu app yahan kya kar raheen hain .. app ko tu office main ..shaan cuts her in between

Shantanu: main yahan kya kar raha hooo.n ..yeh to mujey tum sey sawal karna chaiee'tum beach sarak main kya kar rahee hoo 'our agar tumey kuch hoo jata too'tum ney mere baray main socha' khanak kabii tu mere baray main soch liye karoo ..kabhi too

Khanak (she get flaskbak of what happened in the office and then Natasha): she pushes him away'nahi main nahii soch saktee app kay baray main 'mujey kio haq nahii hai kio haq nain... Nahi soch sakteee main..nahi with sobs'.and faints in shantanu's arm'.

Part 5:

Later 'khanak is on the bed sleeping and shantanu setting on the sofa looking at khanak' achanak khanak ko kya howa jo ais taran roo rahi thi ' kya office main kio baat 'nahi office main koi baat nain hoiee tu fir ' he comes out of his thoughts .when he heard khanak saying something in her sleep' shantanu run to her bed and holds her hand'she was mumbling shantanu's name in her sleep'.

After a while khanak got up but shantanu was not in the room ' she goes and sit by the window '.shantanu comes in the room and sees khanak sitting by the window ' shantanu: khanak tum theek nahi hoo tumey aram karna chayiee..chaloo he holds her by her arm'khanak removed his hand from her arm' main theek hoon '.

Shantanu who was still feeling the fear of losing khanak from the morning incident'. got angry at khanak's behavior 'held khanak tightly by her arms and pushed her against the wall'. Kya problem kya hai tumharee 'han'kyun tum mujsey aise behave kar rahii hoo. Kyun mujsey door bagthee hoo bolo' jo tum feel kartee hoo mere liye wo tumharee ankhoon main dekta hai ..tu fir bol kyun nain date'bolo '.shakes her hard '

Khanak: main kuch nain mehsoos kartee kuch nain .. mujey kio haq nahii hai  kuch mehsoos karney ka 'mujey kio haq nain hai khush honey ka ' kio haq nahii ' slides down against the wall crying '.

Shantanu : in anger '.to theek hai ab main tumey nain rukoon ga ' tumey jo sochna hai sochoo ..jo karna hai karoo 'ab sey main bhi kuch nain sochoon ga kuch nain mehsus karoon ga samjee tum ' kuch nain ' in anger leave from there'. and doesn't come back to his room all night '

Next morning

Khanak is looking for shantanu but didn't see him anywhere 'but not dared to ask anyone ' at the table ' sunil tell akshay that shantanu went out of town for two days for some deal ..khanak was shocked hearing this and left from there '

Khanak in kitchen: shantanu kaam say bhar chalee gaye' mujsey miley bina .. mujey bataya bhi nain 'hey bhagwan'wo buhat gussey main tey kal raat ' lakin shantanu itna gusse main kyun they .. wo mujey kya bolney ko kah raheey the '

Later in the day ..She goes to her room to get some rest'but feels restless and keeps thinking about shantanu' she feeling thirsty 'gets up to get some water form kitchen'and heard Khusboo bhabhi and mummy ji talking '

Kushboo: mom lagta hai hamara plan kaam kar raha hai' main tu dargayee thi kay ye plan fail hoo jayee ga ..but mom its woking' shaan ko lagata hai kay us gawar ney natasha ko beeja tha ..lakin wo nain janta kay yeh sab hamaree planning thi '

Madhvi: han ab hamara plan kaam kar rahaaa hai ' lakin jis tera shaan khanak ko us din ghar le kar aya our us kay liye worried tha ..mujey laga hamara plan fail ho gaye 'lakin kal raat main ney shaan ko gussey say apne room sey atay howe dekha '

Kushboo: han mom ..main ney bhi dekha tha kal raat wo buhat gusse main tha .. lakin mere samj main yeh nain aya kay shaan itney dinoo say normal kyun behave kar raha tha'.na khanak per gussa tha'.

Madivi : han main bhi yeh soch rahtee thi ..kay shantanu normal kasee behave kar sakta hai ' lakin wo khanak sey pyaar karta hai ..i don't believe this 'fir bhi wo normal hai ' lakin abb mujey lagata hai kay shaan ko pata chal gaya hai kay sirf Natasha he us ki life partner hai'

Khanak was dumbstruck after hearing everything 'quietly walked to her room 'tear flowing on her cheeks.. kya shantanu mujse mujse pyaar kartee hai ' wo sab mere liye tha' ab main samjee kay itna gusse main kyun the ' lakin mummy ji ney asaa kiye .. wo bhi apne bte kay saath mujay vishwas nain ho raha ..lakin aik ma apne bte kii khushiya kasey cheen saktee hai .. agar wo mujse pyaar karte hain tu fir Natasha ji sey shadi ke liye han kyun kiya .. mere kuch samj main nahi ai raha 'aik taraf mujse pyaar to dosree taraf Natasha ji say shadi ' uff main pagal ho jaioo gee' but she kept smiling all day to herself ' at night  in her room by the window'shantanu plz app wapas ai jaiyeee..app key beggar yeh do din buhat bharii lag rahey hain ' kitni burdthal hoon main ' mujse yeh do din nehii kat rahey our main apni pori zindgi shantanu kay bagar soch rehii thii'smiling  nahii main sab theek kardoon gee. Hamaray beach kee har galtfahmee ko katham kar doon gee' har dhoori ko meta doon geee. Bas app jaldee say ghar ai jayee'kal subha jab shantanu ghar ain gay phelay main un see sorry bolongee our phir main apne dost..nain dost nain apne pati apne pyaar (she blushed ) ko manaloon gee' she slept thinking about shantanu with huge smile on her face'.

here goes part 4 and 5 .....enjoy and plz do comment.😊..thanks

shai
Edited by sampar - 13 years ago

sampar superb awesome mindblowing killer n totally breadthe taking
 omg that daal licking scene just killed badly sooooooooooooooooooooo romantic man u have got brilliant ideas superb......................cant wait fr wat khanak does next pls pls upload soon im dying 2 read it

Hey tht was so good please update date soon :) can you also pm too

Great stuff Shai!!

aww sweet update loved the original ideas that you have its a sweet love story and just cant wait to see how khanak tries manofie shaan now and then let the romance begin lool anywyas update soon 😊

dear smpar!!!

aweosme updtes both were sweet and simple .loved it.. do continue as and when u can.. Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago

Thanks shanakforever, ZaraK18,  FebruaryFlower, shamima, and sshriyaa84.....😊

Part 6:

New Day and a new Khanak :

A smiling khanak was humming a song while working in the kitchen. She was making shantanu's favourite dish ..kheer…. app kheer ko dekh kar to mujey maaf kar hee dengaye…hmmm…kheer tu tayar abb kya …. she heard car honk… lagta hai shantanu ai gaye … kya karoon …main bahar jaioon kay na …..her heart was beating really fast …

She heard everyone talking at the dining table …ada was asking shaan about his project..... shaan excused himself from everyone as he was very tired from last two days… suddently khanak was infront of shantanu when he turned to go..he looked at her without any expression and ignored her smile and climbed the stairs … khanak saw pain in his eyes and her smiled disappeared as he passed by her … shaan slept most of the day and khanak knew he was tired she didn't disturbed him … shaan woke up around evening… and came downstairs… khanak saw him …. Khanak: shantanu ney subha sey kuch nain khaya …. Un ko khaney kay liye bolatee hoon … shantanu..heard khanak calling him …he turned  to her….khanak: wo app ney kuch khaya nahi hai ..kuch khah legiye …app table per jaioo main khana latee hoon… shantanu: nahi mujey bookh nain hai ..main baad main khah loonga … shantanu walked out  to poolside ….

Shantanu: khanak ab bhi normal behave kar rahii hai…usey kuch farak nain parta main kahan tha do din ..us ney mujsey poucha nain kay main kahan tha ..Usey to koi farak nain parta mere honey na honey sey …main hee pagal tha uss kay pechay …lakin ais dil ka kya karoon…he puts his hand on his heart and heavly signs ….

Khanak (at the poolside with a bowl of kheer): shantanu …shantanu ..

Shantanu: hmm (came out of his thoughts) ..hmm kya howa.. and saw kheer in her hand…

Khanak: app ney kuch nain khaya..acha yeh kheer hee kha legiyee…shantanu saw concern in her eyes…nain mujey nahi kheer khaniii…tum jaioo yahan sey main akelay rehna chata hoo kuch waqt…and tuned to other side …while turning his elbow hits the  bowl…and hot kheer fell on khanak's hand and feet…ahhhhhh…khanak cried out in pain … shantanu quickely turned …. (hahaha I know guys kheer is suppose to be tandi but anyways)..

Shantanu : omg … khanak tum theek hoo…I m so sorry… tum theek tho hoo… buhat dard ho raha ha..oh god yeh jal gaye ab kya karoon ….he quickely drags khanak near the pool and splashes water on her hand and feet ..in the process khanak was all wet… chaloo khanak room main ja kay ointment laga deeta hoon …. Chalooo…

In room… khanak haath agey karoo…shantanu held her hand and applied ointment on her burn and blows air on her hand… khanak felt his warm breath and  some sensation passed through her body..she grabbed onto the bed sheet with her other hand….shantanu noticed her action and smiled slightly...khanak was staring at shantanu and felt her pain going away … ahhhh…shantanu: kya howa khanak …she bends down to look at her feet …shantanu : oh sorry tumharay pear ka main bhool gaya .. lao upper karoo… khanak was hesitating …khanak pear upper karoo….he applied ointment on her feet also....he got up to go but bends closer to her face wipes her tear and wishper in her ear..aglee bar kheer tandi lana ..agar algee bar kuch our jal gaye too..Winked at her ..our han I m sorry … he laughed out loud and turned …khanak was amazed at his laughter … han han theek hai...wasey mujey chot lagi hai ..ketni jalan ho rahee hhai app kee waja sey our app hass rahey hoo burthal…app buhat buree hoo….(in her mind) app ke ik  hasii kay liye kuch bhi shantanu …app ke hasii dekh kar yeh dard ab mehsoos nain hota … our main wada kartii hoon kay app ko kabhi dukhii nain honey doon gee .. abb to jeena app ke liye our merna bhi app kay liye …

Shantanu left and was standing by the balcony … thinking … khanak shayad tum mujsey door jana chatee hoo.. agar aisa hai to theek hai …mere waja sey tum ney buhat kuch saha hai abb our nahii..agar tum mujsey door hokar khush hoo to theek hai… lakin main tumey dard main nain dekh sakta . lakin ais dil ka kya karoon jo abb sirf tumharey liye dharaktha hai. Meri sansoo main sirf tum hoo sirf tum …main ney buhat koshish ki yeh janey ke kay shayad tum bhi mere liye kuch feel kartee..lakin main haar gaya khanak main haar gaya … a tear droped from his eye …

Next morning khanak was standing in front of dressing table ….she was trying very hard to tie the dhori at the back ..but her hand was in pain ..she was having hard time with the dhori..shantanu in trouser..water dripping from his hair… came out from washroom and saw her struggling with the dhori..he put the towel on the bed and moved closer to her and moved her hand from her back …startled khanak saw him in the mirror..he signal kay main kar detha hoon …. Slowly he put his hand on the dhori and tied it together..khanak felt his skin against her skin and her heart skipped a beat …shantanu was losing to khanak …water  from his hairs drops on her shoulder ….shantanu saw water droplet on her shoulder…slowly bends down and wiped the water with his lips….khanak gasped loudly with her eyes closed …shantanu removed her hairs from the side and plants a kiss on her neck….his hands sliding down on her arms … shantanu's hand reached her hand …ahhhh…she screamed and both came out of the world ….shantanu saw her burned  hand in his hand and quickly let it go…and moves his hand though his hair … oh shit yeh main …I m sorry khanak … and again enters washroom … khanak felt good by his touch but  his sorry made her sad…she knew shantanu was feeling guilty soo she quietly left the room…

When shantanu goes down … gets to know that they are invited to a business party..he wasn't in the mood of party but sunil tell him that its important party soo we all have to goo… shaan agreed … later that day shantanu called home from office  to talk to khanak.

Khanak: jee boliye …

Shantanu: han wo khanak main batana tha kay ajj sham ko hamey aik party per jana hai …tu tum tayar rehna main tumey pick karloo ga sham ko 7 bajey ….

Khanak: party ..lakin main party main kasey ….wo main…

Shantanu: (cuts her)…main janata hoon tum aisee party main pehlee baar ja rahii hoo..lakin yeh aik important party hai …..our wasey bhi main hoon na tumharey saath …khanak smiled

Around six in the evening … khanak was getting nervous and in her nervousness couldn't decide what to wear… hmmm kya pehnoo mujey tu kuch samj main nain ai raha ….hmm yeh theek hai ..laal sari…

She came out from washroom wearing laal sari… goes infront of mirror and put her jewellary…she wasn't wearing too much jewellary still she looked simple and elegant …she curled  her hair slightly … removes her hair to side and ties the dhori of her blouse… sets her palu and looks at her refelction in the mirror…lowered her eyes shyly …she looked like a newly wedded bride..beautiful and blushing … shantanu came home and went to his room to get ready … in hurry didn't notice khanak ..Grabs his clothes that were laid on the bed by khanak ..and quickly enter the washroom …shantanu comes out and says khanak tum…..he was dumbstruck when he saw khanak in sari after a long time …khanak saw him in the mirror and lowered her eyes ….she could feel his eye all over her body …he stared at her from head to toe… her slightly curled hair ..Simple but little longer earrings..his eyes moved to her neck… a simple necklace with her mangalsutar…looks at bangles matching with her sari and finally down at her sari ..  in this get up khanak was looking breathtaking to his eyes… he comes out of his world..and walks toward dressing to make his hair and to apply some perfume…khanak turned to walk away..her arm brushed against his arm…sending current to their body…. Khanak felt pull on her palu(stuck onto shantanu's watch) …which caused pin from her shoulder to come off and her paluu flys away …shantanu turns and looks at her without her paluu.. I m sorry khanak and turns aways…. Khanak was having difficult to pin her paluu again..Shantanu saw her through the mirror …khanak main help kar doo… she slightly nodes her head …shantanu moved closer to her and help her to pin her paluu ..and he wraps her paluu around her other shoulder and wishper in ear tum buhat koobsurat lagrahii hoo eis sari main…. Shantanu was wearing red shirt with black suit looking dashing and handsome as always …

At the party …khanak was getting nervous but shantanu told her to relax main hoon na… in between the party he left khanak alone khanak heard mummy ji talking to some other lady…

Mrs mehta: arey mrs khandelwal app ney apne bte ki shadi aik gaon ki larki say kar dii. Are wo larki to biilkul gawar hai ….usey to ais party main ana hee nahi chayee tha

Madhvii: I know mrs Mehta … wo kuch dinoo main mere bte ko chor de gee… arey mere beta tu Natasha sey pyaar karta hai..or  un dono kee shadi ki date bhi fix hoo gayee hai … wo khush hai ais shadi ko lay kar…buhat excited be… yeh KFD to chalee jaye gee hamesha hamesha kay liye ..

Khanak felt tear flowing from her eyes..turned around to leave but saw shantanu and natasha standing together and laughing … she felt pain in her heart ….she quickly leave and goes to garden…mummy ji bilkul theek thi .. main shantanu ka kabil nain hoon … main kyun yahan aii …agar wo mujsey pyaar karte hain to fir yeh shadi…nain mujey kio galtfehmee houii hai .. wo mujsey pyaar kyun karan gee…wo to hemesha ssey Natasha ji say pyar karty hain our shadi bhi Natasha ji sey…her voice break down…cries out loud ..kyun main un say pyar karney lagee kyun main khud ko rok nahi payee…kyun wo meri zindigi main aye jab kay wo mere thay he nain … kyun ..fell down on her knees sobbing ….suddenly she feel something flying towards her near her knee.. she pick it up and it's the 10 rupee ka note….and finds her and shantanu's name on it….out loud…main ney kismet ka kagaz samj kar yeh us bache ko diya tha….lakin mere kismet main yeh sab nahi hai … sab jhoot hai yeh sab jhoot hai ….meri kismet ki kagaz per shantanu ka naam tu kabhi tha hee nain our na khabi hoo ga…she gets up to leave still holding on to the note and ask the driver to drop her home..

shai

hahah u guys must be thinking ..she is really fast at updating  ....well that is because i already have half of the story typed up😉.....soo enjoy and do let me know how it was and also if u get bored of reading really long parts😆......plz ignore spelling and grammar mistakes .....

next: a big confrontation and maybe a confession 😳

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 damn sampar wat should i say to u ur every scene makes me go numb n i crave fr more evrytime...........superb dear ur writing n imaginationsis just tooooooooooooooooooooooo good
 awesome n i love u fr updating sooooo fast
 superb scenes gosh i  eagerly wwait fr the time u update cause i know every scene is gonna b rocking
 just tooooooooooooooooooooo good awesome

Great update Shai!!

Woop Woop loved the update and atleast you incoorpratee he note in your story I hope rbo haven't forgotten about it bcaue I want a scene with the signed rupee anyways back to your ff too many misunderstandings that I feel like screaming you both love each other lool but yeh waiting for you next update as you said big confrontation so yeh update soon 😃