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sampar
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hey guyss, my name is Shai and I m thinking of writing a fan fic 'i have never written anything on this forums ever..Fan fic to khabi nain 'drinking coffee and tea before going to bed made me think about shanak all night without any sleep' so I decided to pen down my thoughts and share it with u guys'.
Let me tell u one thing' I m not good at expressing my thoughts but I will definitely try my best and keep u guys hooked to my story'
I will start from Natasha and shaan wedding fisco' tell me if u guys like it and want me to continue.. ' also I will mostly write dialogues in hindi cause I can't think khanak talking in english ..
Soo here is the first part of my story named Kismat ki Kagaz par ' I was listening to sayde kiye han lakhon from khatta metta and from that song I picked up this line ' i think It goes well with the story line'..
Part 1:
In her and shaan's room. Khanak kept thinking about mummy ji's words to leave for Dhulwadi because now there is nothing left for her. (oh btw khanak doesn't know about letter switching and also that shantanu loves her) Shantanu agreed for marriage with Natasha and khanak could do nothing. Tears flowing from her eyes and she doesn't know why she is crying. She kept thinking about all her good moments spent with shantanu. A smiled played on her lips, she wiped her tears and just sat there near the window looking at moon as if sharing her pain with him.
Shantanu in gym doing boxing with rage in his eyes
'Natasha say shadi ..Natasha say shadi kept repeating in his mind.
Shantanu: (in his mind) nahi main aisa nahi kar sakta , main khanak say pyar karta hoon mujay Natasha say baat karni hoo gi. Khanak chahey mujay pyaar karay na karay lakin main us say pyar karta hoon our karta rahoon ga. Main khanak kay janay kay bad us kee memories kay saat jee loon gal lakin main meri khanak kee jaga Natasha ko nahi de sakta. Ab meri zindigi, merey dil, meri dharkhan our meri sansuu per sirf our sirf khanak ka haq hai.
He drops on the ground with tears in his eyes
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So plzzzz comment guys .. let me know how it was .. and if I should continue ..
Cheers 
shai
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