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wow manav and gunjan now married finally..................but what happened to chandini??????????????cont soon.................

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Coffee house Part 12



Gunjan opens her eyes.
Manav sees it.
M:You did'nt sleep yet?
G:No.
M:Why?What desturbs you?
G:My friend Chandni is heading for divorce.

Gunjan,Chandni and Devyani meet at the Coffee house.
D:I just can't believe that a romantic girl like you is divorcing your husband.What all romantic things you both were doing.
C:What you said is true.After marriage everything goes wrong.Romance vanishes completely.
D:But i was wrong.Romance will be there.But not much.But the love after marriage is deeper.
C:You are talking like this Devyani?What did you tell before?
D:I was wrong.My opinion has changed.
C:After living together only i understood that Adi has no cleanliness.He throws his clothes and shoes whereever he wants.Not at all neat.Like a traditional narrow minded husband he wants me to cook for him.He does'nt have any sense in keeping the furniture on right position.
D:Because of such silly things you both decided to have a split.Too bad.
These are silly things Chandni.You both are childish.That's why..if you guys divorce it will be a blunder.
G:Think well..do you love Adi?
Chandni's eyes become wet:I don't know.But i'm angry with him.
G:Think about a life without him.Can you imagine that?
She bursts into tears:No.
Devyani and Gunjan become upset.They try to console her.

Gunjan and Manav meet Aditya.
A:Chandni is arrogant and stubborn.She is a nagging wife.
M:And you?Are you a perfect husband?
Adi is silent.
M:Tell.
A:I tried my level best to be a good husband.
M:That is what Chandni also says.She tried to be a good wife.But both of you are not satisfied with each other.We both broke up.So we are experienced.So we are advising you both.If you both divorce now..later that will be a reason to regret.You both will cry thinking about that blunder.You both will lose peace of mind forever.We know that still you both love each other.Don't let your love go that easily.
Adi is confused.
A:We don't love each like before.
M:That is what you think.It's your misunderstanding.
A:How do you know what i feel for Chandni?I know myself better.
M:You don't know yourself.That's why you are taking a wrong step.Got married only recently.Divorcing so soon?If you have mixed feelings for cHandni close your eyes and check what you see.
Adi closes his eyes.He sees the smiling face of Chandni and the romantic moments they spent together.Adi opens his eyes.His eyes are wet.Gunjan and Manav smile as they understood what Adi saw.
M:You both should not do the mistake we did.Our divorce was a big mistake.A blunder.

Aditya and Chandni have been asked to sign the divorce papers.
Adi and Chandni seem to be hesitant.Adi looks at cHandni.Her eyes are wet.
A:You sign.
C:You sign first.
A:No you first.
C:You always want to come first.Right?So you sign.
A:I can't.
C:Why?
A:Because i don't want to divorce you.
Chandni can't believe it.
A:I need you Chandni.Life without you is impossible.Think Chandni..married life without fights is so boring.
Chandni smiles with tears in her eyes:Yes.We should fight for fun.We can fight.But in the next moment we should always unite.
A:Yes.I love you Chandni.
C:I love you too Adi.

Manav is dressing up in the room.Gunjan runs to the room with a smile:Happy news..Chandni and Adi cancelled the divorce petition.I'm so happy.
M:So our counselling worked.
G:Yes.I became so upset when they decided to split.Now i'm relieved.Manav...we should throw a party in our Coffee house to celebrate our wedding and Adi-Chandni's reunion.
M:Sure.I will make arrangements tonight.
Unexpectedly he holds her hip and pulls her towards him:We will celebrate our marriage at the coffee house.But there will be no privacy there.Let us celebrate our marriage in private also.
She blushes.He smiles.

The end

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Posted: 20 October 2010 at 8:46am | IP Logged
hi
the up is really nice
so gunjan aur manav ke samjhane par adi aur chandni dono he mann jaate haai
they all r happy now
 
 
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Posted: 20 October 2010 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Nice part
Manav aur Gunjan ke samjane par Adi aur chandini ab divorce nahi lenge.
Gunjan is very happy for her friend.
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Posted: 21 October 2010 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Manav aur Gunjan ke samjane par Adi aur chandini ab divorce nahi lenge.kya baat hai dono ke paas apna dimaag nahi hai thank god maanav and gunjan ne inki life bacha li.

Thank you very much for this part great sucche dost ka role nibhaya gunjan aur manav ne.
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Posted: 21 October 2010 at 9:00am | IP Logged
nice ending dear.................manav and gunjan understood and also helped their friends........................
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Posted: 22 October 2010 at 3:58am | IP Logged
That was a nice story altogether.....so Manav got to realize his feelings eventually....am glad Sonia was there to make him see wat he was not able to see for so long....again his sis was a nice help.....and finally he confessed and cud see Gunjan's love for him as well....that was really sweet!!

And the way they made Adi n Chandni realize their mistake....and forbade them from doing the same mistake as them....that was really gr8!! A happy ending in the end.....always lovely!!

Thanks for such a sweet story!!
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wowww....................
 
such a nice and short story........................

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