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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 9:50am | IP Logged
hi Smile
the up is really niceSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
soniya ke uper swayam char jaata aur soniya kissi tara se bhaagte hue manav ke pass aa jaate and manav saves her from him Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
ab soniya finally confess that she loves manav aur manav woh toh pahele se he pyaar mein thaAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
par yaar yeh manav ka ek bar bhi nahin socha gunjanb ke dil pe kya bech rahe hogeAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
yeh aacha hua ke adi aur chandni ke shaadi ho gayeBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile par how is manav related to adiConfused
plz cont soon and pm me

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OMG manav and soniya are together??????????????thats unfair...............now what is he doing coming back to gunjan????????????cont soon...................

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Oh I so wanna knw wat happened that Manav is now bak to Gunjan....however I hope Devyani and Druv's relationship improves a bit....pls continue soon.

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Coffee house Part 9






Devyani's mother becomes alright.
Devyani is relieved:Thanks a lot Druv.If you had'nt come on time i don't know what would have happened to my mom.
Druv:Now you understood that doctors have to be there in the hospital.Otherwise patients can't be saved.
D:Yes,i understand that now.I used to get angry when you go to the hospital always.But now i understand everything.I'm prowd of you Druv.I will never be a nagging wife.You must save lives.I'm happy for you.
Druv smiles.

Druv is driving the car.He is thinking of Devyani's words:Why are you not showing interest in me?
He says in his mind:I love you a lot Devyani.But because of my busy schedule i could'nt express my love for you.

Devyani enters the house after coming back from school.
She is surprised to see the decoration.
Druv comes with a smile:Happy Navratri.
Dev:Happy Navratri.How are you here?
D:Luckily today i got some free time.I thought i will give you a surprise.How is it?
Dev:Very sweet.
Druv holds her arms:I'm sorry Devyani.I could'nt spare time for you.
Dev:Don't say like that.It's for a good thing no?You had time for poor patients.That's a great thing.I have no complaint.Even i could'nt spare time for you.
D:But trust me.Even though i was busy my love for you never changed.Still i love you like before.
Devyani can't express her happiness:This is more than enough for me.Hearing from you that you love me.I'm so lucky.Now i forgot that i have no child.Though i have no child i have you.I'm happy.I love you.I feel that our old romantic days have come back.It proves that after marriage also the depth of love does'nt get reduced among couples.
They look at each other eyes' deeply.
Their eyes sing romantically:
'Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Tere Naam
La La La
Tere Naam
La La La La
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam..
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Gulshan Bhi To Ab Veerana Lagta Hai
Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai
Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai
Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai
Tere Bina Tere Bina
Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam...'
{Tere naam}.

D:There is one more surprise.I have bought a dandiya costume for you.Let's play dandiya.
Devyani is surprised again.
Devyani wears the blue dandiya costume.
D:Wow!You look cute.
Dev:After a long time you are giving me a compliment.So it's precious.Thank you Druv.
D:Let's play dandiya.
They play dandiya.The sticks fall down.They dance without sticks also.

Manav rings up Gunjan:Hi Gunjan.i'm Manav.
She is excited:Hi...
M:Would you like to join me for a small picnic?
G:Sure.

Manav and Gunjan are on a drive.
G:Can i ask you something?
M:Ya.
G:Why did'nt you marry Soniya?
M:I could'nt marry her.
G:Why?Where is she now?
Manav stops the car:We have reached the destination.
They get out of the car.It is a beautiful green place.There is a pond near by.
G:Wow!Beautiful place.
M:I knew that you will like this place.
G:How?
M:I know your likings.
G:I don't think you know my likings completely.
He smiles and looks at her eyes deeply.
M:I did'nt know what you like before.But now i know what you like.I know what i like also.
Gunjan smiles happily.
They sit near the pond.Gunjan takes a flask and cups from the bag.
G:I brought hot soup.
She pours soup into the cups from the flask.
She gives one cup to Manav.He tastes it.
M:Your cooking style has'nt changed.Still it's good.Too good.
G:Thank you.Manav..you did'nt tell me what happened after i left.
Manav is silent.
G:You can't go away from me now.You can't hide it anymore.Why did'nt you marry Soniya?Why did you come back to me?I don't think this time you came to me to make soniya jealous.
M:You are right.I don't want to make anyone jealous.I came back to you for my happiness.Because you are my happiness.I realized it very late.
Gunjan's eyes shine due to the tears formed by Manav's confession of love.
They look at each other's eyes.
Their hearts sing:
'Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Saath Hum Denge Tera
Saath Hum Denge Tera Tujhse Vaada Hai Baki..'{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.

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Posted: 18 October 2010 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Awee.....that was a sweet 'confession' on Manav's part.....however I really hope to knw wat actually happened that made him realize his love for Gunjan....again wat happened to Gunjan....and yeadh gud to see Druv n Devyani together!! Pls continue soon....thnx for the PM.

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Posted: 18 October 2010 at 10:52am | IP Logged
last 2 parts were superb......................
 
i hope manav confess his love to gunjan

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Posted: 18 October 2010 at 11:28am | IP Logged
nice part
Manav finally confesses his love for Gunjan.
please continue soon

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Posted: 18 October 2010 at 11:33am | IP Logged
hi Smile
the up is really sweetttSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
devyani ko ab realise hote haai ke dr first duty is to attend his patients Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
druv also makes decoration and preparations for devyani Smile
they played dandiya i loved it
but the scene which i loved the most ie
manav confession for gunjan ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
plz cont soon

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