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Coffee house:Rajeev Aamna FF climax (Page 6)

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Posted: 16 October 2010 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
amazing part

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 12:09am | IP Logged

Coffee house Part 7

Manav runs to Gunjan:Gunjan,pack your luggages.We are going to Shimla now.
M:Yes.Soniya and Swayam are going to Shimla for two days.A business trip.We need to stay in the hotel they stay.Let Soniya see that i'm not alone.
Gunjan thinks:Even a tour is planned to make Soniya jealous.manav is always thinking of Soniya.

Manav and Gunjan stay in the hotel Soniya and Swayam stay.
Gunjan is sleeping.Manav goes out.Soniya is also on her walk on their hotel compound.
Manav and Soniya bump into each other.Soniya is surprised.
Soniya is surprised:Manav!
M:Hi Soniya.
S:You are alone?
M:No,i came with my wife here.
Soniya's face becomes dull.
M:To have our honeymoon.
S:Honeymoon?So late?
M:Actually because of my busy schedule i did'nt get time to go for honeymoon.
S:Why did'nt you go abroad for honeymoon?
M:I wanted to go abroad.But Gunjan loves Shimla.She wants to spend time here.
Manav observes her cute face.Soniya understands that.
S:What happened Manav?
M:Are you coming with me for a walk?
Suddenly she sees Swayam watching them.
Soniya smiles:Have a nice time.Enjoy.Bye.
Soniya goes to Swayam.Manav becomes dull when she rushes to Swayam avoiding him.
Sw:How come Manav here?What were you discussing with Manav?
S:Manav and his wife have come here for honeymoon.He was just telling me that.
Sw:Honeymoon?So funny.His business is going well.A successful business man like Manav having honeymoon in Shimla?He is rich enough to go abroad.

Manav and Gunjan walk on the snow.Gunjan shivers.Manav removes his coat and gives it to her.
G:No thanks.You will feel cold.
M:Don't think about me.I'm used to this climate.I keep coming here for meetings and all.So it will not affect me.But you need it now.
Gunjan hesitates to take it.Manav makes her wear it with his hand.Gunjan's eyes roll at him.
Soniya sees it and gets jealous.Swayam comes to her:Honey..let's do skating.
Swayam and Soniya skat on the snow.
When Soniya gets tired she sits on the snow.Swayam continues skating with full energy.Soniya watches many couples passing by with a smile.Manav sees Soniya sitting on the snow.He smiles.
He thinks:Soniya looks so cute.
He puts his arms around Gunjan's shoulders.Gunjan looks at him with surprise.
Gunjan sees Soniya.
Manav and Gunjan walk like a romantic couple.
Soniya sees them and becomes jealous.
Soniya thinks:Manav is my past.Swayam is my present.Then why i feel bad when i see him with Gunjan?
Manav whispers to Gunjan's ears:Soniya is jealous of you now.Look at her face.
Gunjan looks at Soniya.Soniya bends her face.
M:Seeing me whispering to your ears,she must have thought that i'm trying to be naughty with you.
He grins.

Gunjan in her room..
She thinks:Yes,Soniya is feeling bad when she sees me with Manav.She seems to be very upset.I have to tell her that there is no relation between me and Manav.
Gunjan knocks at Soniya's room.She opens the door.
S:Gunjan?Come inside.
Gunjan goes inside.
S:What's the matter Gunjan?
G:I came here to discuss an important matter with you.
Soniya looks at her curiously.
G:Are you happy with Swayam?
Soniya is shocked.
S:What are you asking?
G:I feel that you are not happy with him.
S:Nothing like that.I'm very happy with him.
G:Don't you feel bad when you see me with Manav?
Soniya is shocked.
She thinks:How did Gunjan understand it?
S:So this is your problem?You suspect whether i'm seeing Manav now also.You feel insecure.Right?
G:Soniya...what i want to tell you is...
Soniya becomes rough in her tone:Then please Mrs.Gunjan Manav Garewal..let me tell you that i'm very happy with Swayam and i don't regret breaking up with Manav.I'm not interested in your husband.So you please leave the room.
Gunjan leaves the room disappointed.
Gunjan thinks:soniya overeacted.She misunderstood me.The way she reacted proves that she is missing Manav very badly.She got angry as i found out her feelings for Manav.
Soniya thinks:I think i overreacted.I should not have talked like that to Gunjan.

Somebody knocks Soniya's door.She opens the door.That is Swayam.
S:Swayam!Why are you here now?It's almost midnight.
Sw:I missed you.
Swayam goes inside and locks the door.
Soniya is shocked.
S:Why did you lock the door?
He smiles in a naughty way and puts his arm on her shoulder.She is shocked.

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 12:35am | IP Logged
hi Smile
both the ups are niceSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
yeh manav toh soniya ko jealous feel karane ke liye kya kya kar raha haai OuchOuchOuchkabhie yeh gunjan ke liye saree leekar aata haaiLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL toh kabhie uske saath party dance karta LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLaur toh aur he takes her to shimla WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkjust to make soniya realise i just hate this manav AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryyeh sirf aapne khushi ke baare hamesha sochta raheta haai AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
isse kya koi farak nahin parta ke in sab mein woh gunjan jisne bhi kaaye sapne dekhne honge uske baare soche OuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuch
plz cont soon and do pm me Smile
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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 1:51am | IP Logged ab Manav Shimla tak chala make Soniya jealous....well.....this is at least keeping MG 2gether....however Swayam is a useless creature....for sure....w8ing to knw wat happens next....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 2:06am | IP Logged
wow cool good going peeche peeche aagaya kya baat hai
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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:28am | IP Logged
manav am gonna hit u seriously..................hes really being an idiot.................and soniya and swayam both are useless.................aren't soniya and swayam together?????????????cont soon.................
dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Sorry for not replying on previous updates....just finished
coming to this one.
Manav has reached shimla to make Sonia jealous. And Swayam is just uselss.
please continue soon
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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 8:23am | IP Logged

Coffee house Part 8

Swayam's fingers move to Soniya's face.
Soniya:What are you doing?
She moves back.
Sw:What happened?I'm your fiance.Very soon we are getting married.
S:But i don't like this.
He becomes angry:Why?Why is this change in the attitude?Oh!After seeing Manav again you changed your mind.You are dreaming about your golden days with Manav?So you don't need me.
S:Stop this nonsense.Control your tongue.
Sw:You called Manav here.Right?Otherwise how Manav landed up here?
S:If there was any bad intention Manav would'nt have come here with his wife.So stop it and get out.
He gets angry and pushes her down.Then he pulls her towards him.She pushes him and runs out.
She knocks at Manav's door.
M:Who is knocking the door now?
"Manav!"Soniya calls him loudly.
Manav opens the door.Gunjan stands behind him.
They are shocked to see Soniya who is scared and sweaty.
S:Manav..please save me.Swayam...he tried to...
Swayam reaches there.
Sw:So you reached your destination..Manav's room.Are you not ashamed to romance my fiancee infront of your wife?
Gunjan becomes dull.Manav loses his control and slaps Swayam.All are shocked.It leads to a physical fight.Manav wins.
M:Get lost and don't play with a girl's dignity.
S:I did a big mistake by detting engaged to you by breaking up with Manav.God punished me for that.I'm breaking up with you.I hate you.
All are shocked.
Swayam stares at them and goes away.
S:Thank you so much Manav for saving me from that monster and sorry for everything.I broke your heart.
Manav smiles. are lucky to get a husband like Manav.
G:No.You are lucky to have a loving man like Manav in your life.
Soniya looks at her with wonder.
G:Now also Manav loves you.Our's is just a contract marriage.We have already signed the divorce papers.We pretended to be in love to make you understand how much you love manav now also.
Soniya can't believe it.
G:I came to see you to tell this.But you misunderstood me.
Manav looks at Gunjan with surprise:You went to meet Soniya?
S:Oh!I'm so sorry Gunjan.
M:Now you tell me you love me?
Soniya blushes:Yes Manav..still i love you.The days i spent with you were the most memorable days in my life.
Manav is happy.
M:We have to thank Gunjan.She helped us a lot.
S:Thanks a lot Gunjan for helping us.
Gunjan smiles:It's my pleasure.
Gunjan thinks:I'm supposed to be happy about reuniting Manav and Soniya.But why i'm depressed?
Her mind sings:
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki...{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.

Manav and Gunjan are in the room.
M:I will submit the divorce papers in the court.
Gunjan's heart is wounded.
M:I will find a nice guy for you.
G:No need.
G:I love someone.I can't marry anyone else when i'm deeply in love with him.
Manav is surprised:You fell in love soon?Who is he?
G:I'm sorry.Please don't ask his name.
M:Ok..but please invite me for your wedding.
She smiles slightly.She thinks:How can i tell Manav that the person i love is none other than him.
G:Can you do a favour for me?
G:Can you get me a job?
M:Sure.But that's not enough.I will you a some money.Start a small business.
G:Business?No..i can't.
M:You can..i can't simply leave you.

Gunjan tells Chandni and Devyani:Manav helped me a lot.That's how i became successful in my small business.
Chandni:i can't believe this.So sad.
Devyani:He used you for his victory.He dumped you.
G:Please don't say like that.He is good hearted.If he had'nt helped me i would'nt have reached this level.
D:He must be repenting.That must be the reason why he is back.
C:Exactly.He must be loving you.After Soniya entered his life he must have realized that he started loving you.You should have confessed your love to him before leaving him.
Gunjan smiles.
G:I don't know what happened between Manav and Soniya.But i feel that God made him come back to me.I love him.I crave for his love.Now i feel that he loves me.I don't know.
C:Ok also Adi will come to pick me up to give you both a surprise.
Aditya comes.
C:Adi has come.
Aditya smiles:Hi buddies.There is a surprise for both of you.
He gives a card.
A:We decided to get married.
Adi and Chandni blush.
A:Ok guys..see you.We are going to beach.
Gunjan and Devyani:Bye..
After Adi and Chandni goes,Dev:Let them enjoy in the beach.After marriage they get busy unknowingly and there won't be any time left for them to have romance.

Gunjan and Devyani dresses Chandni.Chandni looks very pretty in her red bridal attire.Gunjan's eyes search for Manav.Finally she sees him.They both smile at each other.When Adi ties mangalsuthra around Chandni's neck everyone showers flowers on them.Manav and Gunjan shower flowers on them smiling at each other.
Manav and Gunjan come together.His eyes are hooked to Gunjan.He observes her.Gunjan looks gorgeous in her grand orange saree and matching accessories.
M:As usual you are beautiful.No one can beat you in beauty.Anybody will go crazy if they see your beauty.
She smiles.

Devyani's mother is very sick.She takes her to the hospital.The doctor is not available.
Devyani bursts out:The doctors are appointed for patients.Where is the doctor?Having fun with their partners?
A nurse comes:You are lucky.Dr.Druv has come back after the operation.He can look after your mother.He is a magician.Your mother will be normal soon.
Devyani is relieved.
Druv comes and is shocked to see them:Mummiji..?
Dev:Druv..please save my mom.She is very weak due to high BP.

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