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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
wow cool good going peeche peeche aagaya kya baat hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
manav am gonna hit u seriously..................hes really being an idiot.................and soniya and swayam both are useless.................aren't soniya and swayam together?????????????cont soon.................
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Hey
Sorry for not replying on previous updates....just finished
coming to this one.
Manav has reached shimla to make Sonia jealous. And Swayam is just uselss.
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Coffee house Part 8





Swayam's fingers move to Soniya's face.
Soniya:What are you doing?
She moves back.
Sw:What happened?I'm your fiance.Very soon we are getting married.
S:But i don't like this.
He becomes angry:Why?Why is this change in the attitude?Oh!After seeing Manav again you changed your mind.You are dreaming about your golden days with Manav?So you don't need me.
S:Stop this nonsense.Control your tongue.
Sw:You called Manav here.Right?Otherwise how Manav landed up here?
S:If there was any bad intention Manav would'nt have come here with his wife.So stop it and get out.
Sw:What?
He gets angry and pushes her down.Then he pulls her towards him.She pushes him and runs out.
She knocks at Manav's door.
M:Who is knocking the door now?
"Manav!"Soniya calls him loudly.
M:Soniya?
Manav opens the door.Gunjan stands behind him.
They are shocked to see Soniya who is scared and sweaty.
M:Soniya!
S:Manav..please save me.Swayam...he tried to...
Swayam reaches there.
Sw:So you reached your destination..Manav's room.Are you not ashamed to romance my fiancee infront of your wife?
Gunjan becomes dull.Manav loses his control and slaps Swayam.All are shocked.It leads to a physical fight.Manav wins.
M:Get lost and don't play with a girl's dignity.
S:I did a big mistake by detting engaged to you by breaking up with Manav.God punished me for that.I'm breaking up with you.I hate you.
All are shocked.
Swayam stares at them and goes away.
S:Thank you so much Manav for saving me from that monster and sorry for everything.I broke your heart.
Manav smiles.
S:Gunjan..you are lucky to get a husband like Manav.
G:No.You are lucky to have a loving man like Manav in your life.
Soniya looks at her with wonder.
S:What?
G:Now also Manav loves you.Our's is just a contract marriage.We have already signed the divorce papers.We pretended to be in love to make you understand how much you love manav now also.
Soniya can't believe it.
G:I came to see you to tell this.But you misunderstood me.
Manav looks at Gunjan with surprise:You went to meet Soniya?
G:Yes.
S:Oh!I'm so sorry Gunjan.
M:Now you tell me Soniya..do you love me?
Soniya blushes:Yes Manav..still i love you.The days i spent with you were the most memorable days in my life.
Manav is happy.
M:We have to thank Gunjan.She helped us a lot.
S:Thanks a lot Gunjan for helping us.
Gunjan smiles:It's my pleasure.
Gunjan thinks:I'm supposed to be happy about reuniting Manav and Soniya.But why i'm depressed?
Her mind sings:
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki...{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.

Manav and Gunjan are in the room.
M:I will submit the divorce papers in the court.
Gunjan's heart is wounded.
M:I will find a nice guy for you.
G:No need.
M:Why?
G:I love someone.I can't marry anyone else when i'm deeply in love with him.
Manav is surprised:You fell in love soon?Who is he?
G:I'm sorry.Please don't ask his name.
M:Ok..but please invite me for your wedding.
She smiles slightly.She thinks:How can i tell Manav that the person i love is none other than him.
G:Can you do a favour for me?
M:Yes..sure..
G:Can you get me a job?
M:Sure.But that's not enough.I will you a some money.Start a small business.
G:Business?No..i can't.
M:You can..i can't simply leave you.

Present...
Gunjan tells Chandni and Devyani:Manav helped me a lot.That's how i became successful in my small business.
Chandni:i can't believe this.So sad.
Devyani:He used you for his victory.He dumped you.
G:Please don't say like that.He is good hearted.If he had'nt helped me i would'nt have reached this level.
D:He must be repenting.That must be the reason why he is back.
C:Exactly.He must be loving you.After Soniya entered his life he must have realized that he started loving you.You should have confessed your love to him before leaving him.
Gunjan smiles.
G:I don't know what happened between Manav and Soniya.But i feel that God made him come back to me.I love him.I crave for his love.Now i feel that he loves me.I don't know.
C:Ok guys...today also Adi will come to pick me up to give you both a surprise.
Aditya comes.
C:Adi has come.
Aditya smiles:Hi buddies.There is a surprise for both of you.
He gives a card.
A:We decided to get married.
G:Really?Surprise!
Adi and Chandni blush.
A:Ok guys..see you.We are going to beach.
Gunjan and Devyani:Bye..
After Adi and Chandni goes,Dev:Let them enjoy in the beach.After marriage they get busy unknowingly and there won't be any time left for them to have romance.

Gunjan and Devyani dresses Chandni.Chandni looks very pretty in her red bridal attire.Gunjan's eyes search for Manav.Finally she sees him.They both smile at each other.When Adi ties mangalsuthra around Chandni's neck everyone showers flowers on them.Manav and Gunjan shower flowers on them smiling at each other.
Manav and Gunjan come together.His eyes are hooked to Gunjan.He observes her.Gunjan looks gorgeous in her grand orange saree and matching accessories.
M:As usual you are beautiful.No one can beat you in beauty.Anybody will go crazy if they see your beauty.
She smiles.

Devyani's mother is very sick.She takes her to the hospital.The doctor is not available.
Devyani bursts out:The doctors are appointed for patients.Where is the doctor?Having fun with their partners?
A nurse comes:You are lucky.Dr.Druv has come back after the operation.He can look after your mother.He is a magician.Your mother will be normal soon.
Devyani is relieved.
Druv comes and is shocked to see them:Mummiji..?
Dev:Druv..please save my mom.She is very weak due to high BP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
hi 😊
the up is really nice😊😊😊😊😊
soniya ke uper swayam char jaata aur soniya kissi tara se bhaagte hue manav ke pass aa jaate and manav saves her from him πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
ab soniya finally confess that she loves manav aur manav woh toh pahele se he pyaar mein tha😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
par yaar yeh manav ka ek bar bhi nahin socha gunjanb ke dil pe kya bech rahe hoge😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
yeh aacha hua ke adi aur chandni ke shaadi ho gayeπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ par how is manav related to adiπŸ˜•
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
OMG manav and soniya are together??????????????thats unfair...............now what is he doing coming back to gunjan????????????cont soon...................
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh I so wanna knw wat happened that Manav is now bak to Gunjan....however I hope Devyani and Druv's relationship improves a bit....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Coffee house Part 9






Devyani's mother becomes alright.
Devyani is relieved:Thanks a lot Druv.If you had'nt come on time i don't know what would have happened to my mom.
Druv:Now you understood that doctors have to be there in the hospital.Otherwise patients can't be saved.
D:Yes,i understand that now.I used to get angry when you go to the hospital always.But now i understand everything.I'm prowd of you Druv.I will never be a nagging wife.You must save lives.I'm happy for you.
Druv smiles.

Druv is driving the car.He is thinking of Devyani's words:Why are you not showing interest in me?
He says in his mind:I love you a lot Devyani.But because of my busy schedule i could'nt express my love for you.

Devyani enters the house after coming back from school.
She is surprised to see the decoration.
Druv comes with a smile:Happy Navratri.
Dev:Happy Navratri.How are you here?
D:Luckily today i got some free time.I thought i will give you a surprise.How is it?
Dev:Very sweet.
Druv holds her arms:I'm sorry Devyani.I could'nt spare time for you.
Dev:Don't say like that.It's for a good thing no?You had time for poor patients.That's a great thing.I have no complaint.Even i could'nt spare time for you.
D:But trust me.Even though i was busy my love for you never changed.Still i love you like before.
Devyani can't express her happiness:This is more than enough for me.Hearing from you that you love me.I'm so lucky.Now i forgot that i have no child.Though i have no child i have you.I'm happy.I love you.I feel that our old romantic days have come back.It proves that after marriage also the depth of love does'nt get reduced among couples.
They look at each other eyes' deeply.
Their eyes sing romantically:
'Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Tere Naam
La La La
Tere Naam
La La La La
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam..
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Gulshan Bhi To Ab Veerana Lagta Hai
Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai
Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai
Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai
Tere Bina Tere Bina
Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam...'
{Tere naam}.

D:There is one more surprise.I have bought a dandiya costume for you.Let's play dandiya.
Devyani is surprised again.
Devyani wears the blue dandiya costume.
D:Wow!You look cute.
Dev:After a long time you are giving me a compliment.So it's precious.Thank you Druv.
D:Let's play dandiya.
They play dandiya.The sticks fall down.They dance without sticks also.

Manav rings up Gunjan:Hi Gunjan.i'm Manav.
She is excited:Hi...
M:Would you like to join me for a small picnic?
G:Sure.

Manav and Gunjan are on a drive.
G:Can i ask you something?
M:Ya.
G:Why did'nt you marry Soniya?
M:I could'nt marry her.
G:Why?Where is she now?
Manav stops the car:We have reached the destination.
They get out of the car.It is a beautiful green place.There is a pond near by.
G:Wow!Beautiful place.
M:I knew that you will like this place.
G:How?
M:I know your likings.
G:I don't think you know my likings completely.
He smiles and looks at her eyes deeply.
M:I did'nt know what you like before.But now i know what you like.I know what i like also.
Gunjan smiles happily.
They sit near the pond.Gunjan takes a flask and cups from the bag.
G:I brought hot soup.
She pours soup into the cups from the flask.
She gives one cup to Manav.He tastes it.
M:Your cooking style has'nt changed.Still it's good.Too good.
G:Thank you.Manav..you did'nt tell me what happened after i left.
Manav is silent.
G:You can't go away from me now.You can't hide it anymore.Why did'nt you marry Soniya?Why did you come back to me?I don't think this time you came to me to make soniya jealous.
M:You are right.I don't want to make anyone jealous.I came back to you for my happiness.Because you are my happiness.I realized it very late.
Gunjan's eyes shine due to the tears formed by Manav's confession of love.
They look at each other's eyes.
Their hearts sing:
'Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Saath Hum Denge Tera
Saath Hum Denge Tera Tujhse Vaada Hai Baki..'{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awee.....that was a sweet 'confession' on Manav's part.....however I really hope to knw wat actually happened that made him realize his love for Gunjan....again wat happened to Gunjan....and yeadh gud to see Druv n Devyani together!! Pls continue soon....thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
last 2 parts were superb......................
 
i hope manav confess his love to gunjan