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Posted: 15 October 2010 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
great part
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hi Smile
the up is really very emotionalCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
yeh gunjan kitne aache haai woh manav ka dukh kitne aache tarike se jaan leete haaiBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile par manav haai ke usse toh sirf soniya soniya dekhaye de rahe haai AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryare soniya toh tujhe chor ke chale gaye haai phir bhi bewakoof kahe naaAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
 kab aakal aayega is manav ko god knows LOLLOLLOLLOL
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 16 October 2010 at 3:49am | IP Logged

good concept,manav is doing the wrong thing ,gunjan is very nice

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Coffee house Part 6






Manav sees Soniya in the shopping mall.Soniya feels difficult to face him.He goes near her with a smile.
M:Hi Soniya.How is your love life going?
Soniya realizes that Manav is trying to pull her.
S:Going well.I heard that you got married.Congratulations.
M:Thanks.Are you not coming home to meet my beautiful wife Gunjan?
Soniya is quiet.
M:Soniya!
S:I will come.
Soniya sees a cover in Manav's hand.
M:This is for my wife Gunjan.I came here to buy a dress for her.
Soniya remembers Manav making her happy with gifts.

Gunjan sees rain.she is excited.
G:Wow!So beautiful.
She goes out and stands in the rain.She smiles looking at the rain droplets falling on her.Then she sways her body.Manav comes watching this with a smile.He walks slowly towards her.She turns back fast without knowing that Manav is behind her.So her forehead hits his forehead.She is nervous.
Gunjan thinks:Oh my God!What did i do?Manav must be hurt.
G:Sorry Manav..I ..i did'nt know that...
Manav holds her hand.She is stunned.She looks at her face.He is staring at her eyes.
G:Manav!
He dances with her.She is surprised.For a moment she feels that her dream is coming true.
He murmers:Soniya has come with me.She is watching us.Let her watch our dance.
Gunjan becomes upset.She sees Soniya standing with an umbrella.
M:Let her see me romancing with you.
G:Hi Soniya.Come..
Soniya comes near them:I'm sorry.I think i desturbed both of you.
G:Nothing like that.Come inside.
They go inside the house.
G:I will bring hot coffee for you.It's cold.
S:No thanks.I have to go now.Tonight there is a business party.
M:Yes.I forgot to tell you that we have to go for the party tonight.For the party i bought a saree and ornaments for you.
He shows it to Gunjan.Soniya feels jealous to see him giving costly things to Gunjan.
M:How is it sweet heart?
G:It's very beautiful.
M:Then wear it and come.I want to see you in this now.
Gunjan goes to the dressing room.
S:Ok then i'm going.
M:Wait Soniya.See my wife's beauty.I'm so lucky to have a beautiful wife like Gunjan.Right?
Soniya feels jealous.
Soniya struggles hard to smile:Yes,you are lucky.
Gunjan comes.She has worn a white saree which has colourful dots on it.It's blue border is marvellous.Her silver ornaments match the saree very well.She looks so beautiful that Manav gets lost in her for a moment.
M:Beautiful...you are the most beautiful lady i have ever seen in my life.
Soniya envies Gunjan.
S:Ok,i'm going.I have to get ready for the party.I'm getting late.
M:Ok bye.
S:Bye.
Soniya leaves.
M:I did'nt have to lie this time to make Soniya jealous.I have not seen a beautiful lady like you.You are very pretty.
Gunjan blushes:Thank you.

Party...
Soniya comes along with her fiance Swayam.Soniya looks stylish in her black gown.
The song
'Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Main phir tum aao naa
'Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Main phir tum aao naa
Aisi Barasaato Main aao naa...'{Adnan Sami's music video}is going on in the background.
Seeing Soniya with Swayam,Manav stands very close to Gunjan.Then Gunjan sees Soniya and Swayam together.Swayam takes Soniya to the dance floor and they both dance together.Soniya looks at Manav.Manav gets irritated.
Manav leads Gunjan to the dance floor.They both dance.
Gunjan thinks:Though it's all a drama for Manav it's not a pretence for me.I love being with Manav.
Gunjan is deeply engrossed in the romantic dance with Manav.Manav and Soniya look at each other.They are jealous of each other's partner.

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Posted: 16 October 2010 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Awee....Manav is still behind that Soniya....and not realizing Gunjan's love....hope he does that soon...however it was nice to knw he actually found her beautiful and complimented her wholeheartedly....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 October 2010 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
nice part dear...................both r creating jealously for each other..................wid their partner.............con't soon dear...............
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dono ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai dono ko dande ki jaroorat hai
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Posted: 16 October 2010 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
oh god manav is still after soniya....................uggghhhhhhhhhh...............wrong choice manav................cant wait for the part where manav falls for gunjan..............cont soon...................

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