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Coffee house:Rajeev Aamna FF climax (Page 2)

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Posted: 13 October 2010 at 7:55am | IP Logged
amazing part
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Coffee house Part 2








Gunjan,Devyani and Chandni chat and enjoy in the coffee house.
C:This coffee house has become our meeting place.
G:Ya..
D:How fast we became friends.We share happiness and sorrows with each other.
G:I feel nice.I was always alone in my life.Now i feel i have some people who care for me.
C:Our friendship will always remain the same.
They smile.
A car reaches.
C:Adi has come.
A cool guy comes out of the car with a smile.
A:Hi honey.
He runs towards Chandni.They both stand close to each other.
Adi looks at Gunjan and Devyani:So they are your new friends.Nice to meet you all.By the way..i'm Adi.
G:No need of any introduction.Chandni always talks about you.
A:Really?
Adi winks at Chandni.Chandni blushes.
A:Chandni always talks about Gunjan and Devyani.Anyways...today is my birthday.
G:Really?Chandni did'nt tell us.
C:I thought of giving a surprise.The surprise is that Adi wants to invite you both for tonight's birthday party.
A:Yes,not only you both.Devyani's husband Dr.Druv is also invited for the party.
Gunjan and Devyani smile.
A:You both will come.Right?
G:We will come for the party.
D:Yes,it's our pleasure.
A:Don't forget.Black is the dress code.Be dressed in black.

Druv comes back home.
Dev:Druv..good thing that you came back home.I told you about Chandni.
D:Chandni?Who is she?
Dev:You forgot her so fast.Oh!My new friend whom i met at the Coffee house.
D:Oh!What happened to her?
Dev:Her fiancee Adi has invited us for his birthday party.
D:That's nice.But i'm sorry.I can't accompany you.
Dev:Why?Why do you not showing interest in me?
D:Nothing like that Devyani.There is an operation.I have to leave now itself.
Dev:Then why did you come back home?You could have stayed in the hospital itself.
D:I came to freshen up.That's all.
Druv goes inside the bathroom to freshen up.
Devyani wears a black saree and silver ornaments.Druv comes out dressed in his suit.
D:Ok bye Devyani.I'm leaving.
Dev:Ok.
Druv steps out of the room.He turns back.
D:Have a nice time.
Devyani tries to smile.
Druv goes.
She thinks:He could have atleast tried to give me a compliment.After all i dressed well.

Party...
Adi is cool in his black outfit.Chandni looks stylish in her black frock.Gunjan has worn a black frock which has blue work on it.Her blue earrings look amazing on her.Devyani comes.
D:I'm sorry..i'm late.
Adi:tHat's fine.Where is Dr.Druv?
D:Sorry..he could'nt come.
A:That's not fair.Anyways enjoy the party.
Adi cuts the cake and puts the piece into Chandni's mouth.Chandni puts a piece into Adi's mouth.Then she puts the cream all over his face.Everyone laughs.

'Hey what's with you baby
I never never never never never felt this way before
Hey come a little closer
Baby, baby baby wanna steal your heart away

Are gore gore mukhde, chand ke tukde
Kaali kaali zulfein, neeli neeli aankhen
Are gore gore mukhde (be my love), chand ke tukde (be my love)
Kaali kaali zulfein (be my love), neeli neeli aankhen (be my love)
Khwaab dikhaade raah bhula de, hosh uda de sab ke
Chain mita de, tan sulga de, mann mein de masti ghol
Rock and roll soniye, dole yeh man tere liye
Rock and roll my darling, my heart dances for you
Rock and roll soniye, kabhi tu bhi toh mere sang dol
Rock and roll my darling, why don't you dance with me too..'{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.

The song is getting louder and louder.All are dancing.
Devyani imagines dancing with Druv.
"Can i dance with you?"
Somebody asks Gunjan.She looks at him.He is a serious handsome young man.
"Me..Manav Garewel",he says.
Gunjan smiles sweetly.He also smiles.He holds her hand and leads her to the dance floor.
The song which is heard in the background:
'Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale..'{Kites}.
Gunjan and Manav are lost in each other while dancing.The lyrics of the song were expressing their feelings.
Suddenly the electricity goes.When it comes back,Gunjan does'nt find Manav there.She is out of mood.

That night Gunjan thinks about Manav without sleeping.

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hi Smile
the up is really goodSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
adi ka birthday haai Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileaur woh gunjan aur devyani aur druv ko aapne birthday party mein invite karta haai SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
par yeh druv bhi naa ek dam kharus haai AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryusse kabhie devyani ke baare mein toh sochna chaheye SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmilepar nahin usne toh dekha tak nahin devyani ke taraf AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryshe also excepts something from her husbandOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuchOuch
anyways the party is on its full volume SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
sab log enjoy kar rahe haai SmileSmileSmile
gunjan danced with manav wow niceWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
par yeh manav kya cindrella haai jo light ke aane ke bad he gayam ho gaya LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
anyways plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 October 2010 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Awesome part What Happen to manav kaha gaya great going part looking nice thx a lot for pm.

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superb part dear................
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Posted: 13 October 2010 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Nice part....but wats wid Manav?? I mean aise hi aya aur gayab bhi ho gaya?? Does ke knw any trick of disappearance or wat?? Hehe....anyways....the concept of the three lasies being frnds is nice.....wish Druv was a lil better....anyways....pls continue soon....thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 October 2010 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
nice part..............all the couples are in this part...................cont soon...............
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Coffee house Part 3



Devyani,Chandni and Gunjan are chatting and laughing at the Coffee house.Suddenly Gunjan's eyes fall on Manav who is sipping coffee and watching Gunjan.
She thinks:Manav is here...
She blushes when she realizes that Manav's eyes are fixed on her face..
She goes to him leaving Devyani and Chandni in wonder.
G:Manav...you were here?I did'nt know that.
Manav thinks:You never know my presense even when i'm with you.
Manav smiles simply.
G:What a pleasant surprise!How did you vanish so fast yesterday?
Manav says in his mind:I wanted to be with you for more time.But i doubted whether you will like it.But now your eyes say that you crave for my presense.I hope so.
Manav gets up:Ok..Gunjan..i'm going.
G:Ok bye.
Manav goes.Gunjan does'nt move till he vanishes completely.
She goes back to her friends.
D:That is the business man Manav.Right?
G:Yes.
D:Saw him at yesterday's party.Why did you go to him?
Gunjan smiles simply.
D:Yesterday i was shocked to see you dancing with him when he asked you to dance with him.Today he came here.You went and spoke to him.Is it love?
Gunjan becomes shy.
D:Gunjan..be careful.We can't trust these rich business men.For them girls are a time pass.
Gunjan's joy fades from her face.
C:Manav Gareweal?No way.Adi knows him.He is a nice guy.
Gunjan smiles.
D:But love exits only in the beginning.After some time the sweetness of love disappears.Earlier I and Druv used to crave to be with each other.We used to find time to roam about.But now..Druv is always busy in his hospital.When he gets free time i'm stuck up in the school.Now there is no romance in our life.Life becomes boring fast in our busy life.So don't think this excitement will last forever.I don't believe in love.
C:I don't think so.I believe in love.I know Adi since our college days.Our romance has'nt gone sour.Still we have candle light dinners and a walk on the beach.But Gunjan..i forgot to tell you one thing about Manav.I heard that he is a divorcee.
G:He divorced only once?
C:Ya.Why did you ask like that?Teasing me?
G:No never.I know that he divorced his first wife.Did'nt he remarry?
C:No.He is single.He did'nt marry after his divorce.
Gunjan's face becomes gloomy.
C:What happened Gunjan?Suddenly you went to some other world.
D:Still thinking of Manav?
G:Yes.
D:After knowing that Manav is a divorcee also you are thinking of him?
G:Yes.I can never stop thinking of him.Because i can't forget him.
Chandni grins:Gunjan is out of control.Deeply in love with Manav..
D:What rubbish!Gunjan..you don't know anything about Manav.You don't know how his character is..why he divorced his wife..then how can you fall in love?
G:I'm not falling in love now.I fell in love with him long ago.
Chandni and Devyani are wondered.
D:What?You have seen him before Adi's birthday party?
G:Yes.Our first meeting took place long ago.And i know why he divorced his wife.
D:How?
D:Because his wife was none other than me.
Devyani and Chandni are shocked.
They:What?

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