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Coffee house:Rajeev Aamna FF climax

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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 4:02am | IP Logged

Coffee house





Gunjan Sinha{Aamna}:She is a sweet,soft,mature independant lady who runs a Coffeee house.She is an orphan who achieved everything on her own.

Manav Garewal{Rajeev}:He is a serious moneyminded successful business man.


Devyani{Aashka}:A school teacher who is frustrated about her unromantic married life.She is sad about not having children.

Druv Sachdev{Chetan}:A doctor who is always busy with his work.He is Devyani's husband.

Chandni Kapoor{Manasi}:She is fun loving girl who works in a call centre.She believes in love.

Aditya Gujral{Vikas}:He is a fun loving,smart boy who works in the call centre with Chandni


All the three girls meet at Coffee house.

Devyani goes to Gunjan's coffee house.Her face is gloomy.She has not worn earrings.Her hair strands fall on her face.She looks very simple and sweet.
Gunjan notices her face expression.She can't avoid seeing her.She goes near her.
G:Hi..i'm Gunjan.I'm the owner of this Coffee house.
D:Hi..nice to meet you.I'm Devyani.I have heard a lot about you.But first time i'm talking to you personally.
G:You seem to be very upset.Anything serious?
Devyani is silent.She feels bad when Gunjan found her inner tormoil.
G:Don't be hesitant to share your worries with me.Think that i'm your good friend.
Devyani smiles:I don't have a friend.First time someone asked me whether something is desturbing me.Not even my husband asks me this question.
G:Now i got the reason behind your gloomy look.You had a fight with your husband.Right?
D:No.Bursting out is better.We can share our feelings with each other.But that is not there in our life.No fights at all.
G:You both don't fight with each other.That's a good thing.
D:Not always.We don't fight because we have no time for each other.We are that busy with our work.Even if i find time he can't find time for me.He is a busy Doctor.He has time only for his patients.Not for his own wife.
G:What is your husband's name?
D:Druv Sachdev.
Gunjan is surprised:Dr.Druv Sachdev?
D:Ya.
G:Who does'nt know him.He is such a nice doctor.Everyone adores him.You should be happy for your husband.He is busy because he spends time with his patients.
D:I'm happy about that.But any wife will become upset if the husband has no time for her.
Gunjan pities her.
D:I'm alone.God did'nt give us a baby also.
Her eyes become wet.
G:Don't be upset Devyani.There will be a good time for you also.Have coffee.
Gunjan looks at the waiter:Bring a coffee.
They order more.
Gunjan also joins Devyani in eating.
Suddenly they hear a voice.
"Can i also join you guys?"
They look at that person.She is a bubbly girl.
She:Hi..i'm Chandni..
G:Sure..you can join us.
C:Thankyou so much.I love eating.But what to do?It's not seen in my body.I'm thin.
They three giggle.
A sweet friendship develops between them.


Edited by jasminerahul - 20 October 2010 at 12:44pm

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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 4:10am | IP Logged
nice concept...................love it
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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 5:11am | IP Logged
woooow amazing super love
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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 5:13am | IP Logged
wow another one awesome start thanks a lot for pm.
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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 5:27am | IP Logged
hi
the up is really sweet
i like all the characters and intro very much
rajeev is my fav so plz cont soon and do pm me
bcoz i wil be waiting for it'
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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 5:34am | IP Logged
very nice start.................another RA ff.............cont soon and thanks for the pm............
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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Nice start...very interesting...please continue soon
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Hey thats a nice start....am glad to hav another Rajeev-Aamna fic...liked the characterizations....thanks for the PM....and pls continue soon.

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