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Khataa(Soap Opera) Part 2

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Posted: 18 years ago

Episode 2:-

Scene 1:-Najjo is talking to some one on phone(unknown friend)

Najjo:-Kaisy ho tum?

Friend:-Theek hoon main bhi

Najjo:-Accha tum nay woh film dekhi hay?Kitni acchi hay na

Friend:-Haan baba dekhi hay main nay.Acchi film hay.Tum kya kar rahi ho?

Najjo:-Tum say baat kar rahi hoon(laughs)

Friend:-Aray main mazaq nahin kar rahi

Najjo:-Tou main kaun sa kar rahi hoon

Friend:Accha chalo Allah Hafiz

Najjo:-Ghar aa jao na main akeli hoon

Friend:Akeli?Kya kar rahi ho?

Najjo:Bola na tum say baat..ohoo ab ghussa mat hona.Ammi aur Bhaiyya Khala Jaan kay ghar gaye hain

Friend:-Tum kyon nahin gayeen?

Najjo:-Aisay hi nahin gaye magar ab bore ho rahi hoon

Friend:Main aa jaoon?

Najjo:-Ab tou koi zaroorat nahin hay.Film shuru honay wali hay.Allah Hafiz

Najjo cuts the phone



Scene 2:-

Sabir and Ammi are standing outside Khala Jaan's house and they are to enter when Sabir's phone rings and he tells Ammi that he needs to go somewhere ungently so he meet Khala Jaan and he will come back to pick her up after some time.Sabir gets in the car and go away.Ammi enters the house.

An old woman comes to her to reviel her identity she is Khalaa Jaan.They both enters the room and sits down.

Khala Jaan:-Kaisy ho?

Ammi:-Theek hoon main tum sunao?

Khala Jaan:-Main bhi theek hoon

Ammi:-Shehnaz bacchi nazar nahin aa rahi

Khala Jaan:-Woh zara bahar gaye hay.Accha Sabir nahin aaya tumhare saath?Bauhat din ho gaye oosay dekhay hoay

Ammi:-Busy rehta hay na aaj kal.Tumhain tou pata hay kya chahta hay woh

Khala Jaan:-Haan mujhay pata hay.

Ammi:-Bas main issi liyay tumharay pass aye hoon

Khala Jaan:-Kya matlab?

Ammi tells Khala Jaan some thing which is kept secret.Ammi then gets up as she comes to know that Sabir has arrived and is waiting for him outside.



Scene 3:-
Ammi and Sabir are back at house.

Najjo:-aa gaye aap?

Ammi:-Zara dam bhar lo

Najjo:-Bhaiyya,kaisy rahi?

Ammi:-Aray kya kaisy rahi?Yeh wahan per tha hi kahan..yeh tou kaam say chala gaya tha

Najjo:-Bhaiyya aisa kya zaroori kaam aa gaya tha?

Sabir have a strange lookon face and walks away without answering Najjo.Ammi notices at and the episode ends at camera zooms her face worried about Sabir.

Feedback should be posted only in the feedback section.What changes you want?What turns are you expecting next?Why is Sabir worried?What was Ammi and Khala Jaan discussing?Tune in to find out tomorrow only on IF! lol..

 

Part 1:- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=150810

Edited by Taify - 18 years ago