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Mystery stories is an option ??? If yes Then I'll definitely try !!!

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@ZJ so so beautiful n kinda touching OS loved it lovee da reason y gunji still alive without sammy coz of lil sammy beautifully written good luck

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Topic Number: Family  Story
Title of Story:"BLOOD  RELATION!"
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Two  Sisters!  Nupur  and  Gunjan .They  were  very  close  to  each  other  and  born  with  the  difference  of  1  and  a  half  year  only. They  both  used  to  loved  each  other  like  none. But  sadly  their  beautiful  bond  faced  its  bad  and  testing  times  as  well  which  changed  a  great  deal  of  things  between  the  two. Nupur    being  the  elder  one  ,  always  had  to  give  up  things  for  Gunjan ,  the  younger  one  and  slowly  this  "giving  up" of  things  led  to  a  envious  feeling  in  Nupur's  heart  for  Gunjan. Time  passed , both  grew  up  and  as  they  grew   the  jealousy  in  Nupur's  heart   grew  and  turned  into  nothing  but   pure  hatred. This  hatred  inside  her  made  her  loose  connection  with  everyone ,  be  it  her  friends or  family. She  remained  distant   from  people  and  arrogant  to  her  family  and  especially  her  sister   and  her  this  behavior   made  her  parents  away  from  her  and  her  sister  upset.
                                                Gunjan ,  the  younger  one    always  thought  that  why  did  Nupur   hate  her  so  much?  God  Why  am  I  the  Chosen  One?  She  tried  to  get  closer  to  her  but  Nupur  wouldn't  budge  instead  she  would  just  shoo  her  off.  Gunjan  wanted  to  spend  time  with  her  ,   to  play  with  her  but  no  luck. She  finally  gave  up  and  went  down  to  play  with  the  others  in  her  colony . Eventually  she  became  best  friends  with  two  boys,  one  of  them  was  her  age  and  the  other  one  was    his  brother    who  was  her  elder  sister's  age. Their  names  were  Samrat (Sam)  and  Mayank (Mankz) . 
                                                  . One  night  she  went  out  with  both  the  boys  to  a  new  pub  and  the  sight   they  saw  their  shocked  them  out   of  their  wits.  Gunjan   thought  "What  is  she  doing  on  the  stage?"  Nupur  was  dancing  with  some  boys  who  were  trying  to  take  off  her  clothes  and  Nupur   was  giving  in  and  in  fact  she  had  removed  her  top . So  without  wasting  a  second  Gunjan  quickly  ran  up  to  the  stage  and  pulled  her  down ,  trying  to  gain  control  over  her  and   the  situation . Suddenly  one  of  those  boys said  something  nasty  about  her  clothing   and  before  she  could  react   Sam  had   punched  the  him  in  the  face  and  took  hold  of  her  hand  and  pulled  them  out.  He  had   always  been  like  this  and  he  couldn't  tolerate  if  she  talked  to  any  other  buy  except  him (Mayank  was   an  exception) . An  hour  later  the  three  i.e  Gunjan , Samrat  and  Mayank  sat  out,  on  their  car  while  Nupur  was  inside  sleeping  calmly . Gunjan  asked  Sam  to  relax  as  he  was  still  upset  about  the  whole  event  to  which  he  said  he  couldn't  and  when  she  asked  "why ?" He   yelled  "I  LOVE  YOU!  That's  why" and  the  two  held  hands  and  Mayank  smiled  at  them. Suddenly  they  heard  someone  say  "Even  I  love  you"  they  turned  around  to  find  Nupur  looking  at  Gunjan  with  teary  eyes.
                              Nupur  walked  towards  Gunjan  ,  they  were  just  a  meter  away  when  Nupur  not  able  to  handle  herself  fell  down  on  her  knees   and  cried  while  Gunjan  bent  down  to  her  and  simply  hugged  her  cradled  her  like  a  mother  would. No  words  were  required. All  the  hatred  had  vanished  now  all  that  was  left  was  Love. They  knew  why  they  were  together  now  it  was  all  because  they  shared  a  BLOOD  RELATION!                                                   

    
      

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