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I hav two questions...
1. Is it okay if i post a story which i already posted in the writer's corner forum?
okay, thank u 4 clearing that...
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i had a whole lotta trouble in deciding which one to post
The day she left morena her heart had been hammering hard against her chest telling her about the start of something new. Why? Didn't she always dream of setting her ambitions?Of achieving her set out goals.
She feared Mumbai, a city full of different kind of people yet she never expressed it, she hid it all behind her smile.
Excel her new college, on her first day it felt weird, odd, she felt like hiding under a table or to cuddle up in her mother's arms. Why? When she didn't have her mother, when she couldn't avoid the first day?
She met him there, he was the most famous guy in the entire college, every girls heartthrobe, the famous basketball player, but he was not only good at that, he was also a good player of hearts.then Why? Did she get attracted to him, when his player image was so clear to her, why did she fall for him?
He had befriended her shown extra interest, wanting to talk, to drop her home, to help her in college'Why?
He told the reason to that one day, and it was one of the most beautiful day of her life, the day he proposed to her smiling, with only pure love edged in every feature of his, she said Yes.
That One day he didn't come back home and she was worried, Why had he not returned from office yet? had she known of the miserable incident, no, then why did her heart thud so bad against her chest and air seemed to be too hard to breathe in easily. Why?Was it nature's warning?
She stood there staring at his lifeless form..why? did it had to be him?
The truck collided into him and he no longer existed, he was dead then Why? Was she alive?Why wasn't it her with him in the car.
Why Didn't she breath her last with him?Why?
Today again here she knelt down next to his grave as warm tears sprung in her eyes and flowed down her cheeks instantly freezing.
The wind swept her hair as she stood up staring down reading her chosen lines.
Here lies Samrat Shergill
A beloved Son, Husband, Brother, Father and Friend.
Born 15 august 1982- Died 17 may 2008
She still lived. Why?
God answered her soon as she got her medical reports, Little sam would soon join her world, a world engulfed with darkness, into a world where he would never meet his dad, never know his dad.
She gave birth to him, and there he was, not her son but samrat, those chocolate brown eyes a painful similarity with his father's, his jet of black silky hair so similar and his milky white skin.
Every moment he reminded her of him.
Years passed and here she was seeing samrat in the eyes of their 14 year old son.
The best Basketball player, crazy about music, teacher's favourite and every girls dream.
The sharp similarity often clutched her heart, she sat day and night, foolishly praying that may there be similarities but not in fate.
She blinked as a few more tears flowed down her cheeks, she felt lil sam tug her sleeve, she held his finger and directed him to the next grave.
She laid the yellow flowers on the tombstone and the lines caught her eye as she sucked for air, she felt something pressing hard on her chest, it was painful like someone had draped heavy metal chains around her.
Here lies Suhani Shergill
A beloved Daughter, Sister and Friend
Born 26 june 1984- Died 30 may 2008
She knew it had to happen, For suhani her life resided in Samrat, her brother.Things had gone too worst for anyone to control probably her grave would have been next to theirs if it hadn't been lil sam.
The only reason she breathed.
She headed out of the graveyard holding lil sam's finger, though her heart still wished.
To hold his hand to feel his presence next to her, and for a moment she did, often when she was drowned in memories of them together, she could feel him, in her dreams he was so real.
Yet he wasn't here
Why?Why did her heart still crave for him..when she knew it was over'.when she knew he didn't exist anymore'
Is Gunjan Shergill still holding her hand free, waiting'.waiting for Samrat to hold hers'.Why?
Thats all..All the Best Every1!
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