~Madhoshi maaneet thread # 2~ - Page 7

nice update.... baby talks loved it.... continue soon

~madhoshi~
part 20

geet comes to the room screams out loud...(baby~chillavo mat papa hain)
maan closes her mouth..chup bilkul chup..

geet - aap andhur kaise aaye
maan - peeche wale door se...tum lock nahi karthe?
geet - nahi..aap ke liya open karke rakha tha..(snaps back)
maan - tum hamesha mujhe se ladthi kyun rahthi hoo
baby~mujhse bhi ladthi rahthi hain...
geet - aap baat hi aise karthe hoo
kisi ne aap ko yanha dehkliya to aafat aajayee ghi...
baby~mujh se badi aafat!!???
maan - mujhe tumhe kuch dena tha
geet - raat ke 11.30 bajee..
maan sits up & bends to her legs..she feels tickled..
he slides her salwar slowly ..she folds her leg..
geet - yeh aap kya kar rahee hoo.. breathing harder with his touch
maan puts on the golden anklets..& kisses her legs
she hides her face in the pillow..yeh sasha wala payal
maan turns her briskly to meet his eyes...& pins her hands ..kya khaha tumne..
geet - sasha wala..she mumers ...as their eyes meet
maan still comes closer umm!!in sensiatious voice
geet - main yeh nahi lee sakthi ...struggling to breath he nibbles her ears kyun?
tumhe aacha nahi laagha? aap aise baathe kyun kar rahe hoo...weakly she asks
kaise?? maan nibbles the other ears...she was too lost to say anything...
maan - tumhare raj jaise...
geet - umm!! nahi..she snaps back..aap raj nahi ho..
maan - aacha hain
geet narrows her eyebrows...
maan - so u still hate me na!!!
geet - 2, 3, 4,...10
baby~hits his head...
maan lies next to her...she rests her head on his strong arm..
geet looks at him confused this is really expensive na...mera yun lena teehk hoga?
maan - tum kab se itna sochna laaghi..pulls her closer...
geet - pata nahi..puts her hand around him & closes her eyes
she opens her eyes suddenly
maan - kya kuwa
geet - aap ne khana khaya?
maan - nahi
geet - kya karthe ho aap...aacha rukhoo I will get some thing for u
she sneaks into the kitchen & looks around..then she brings bread butter & jam
maan smiles & has it...geet makes a face & sits
maan - aab kya huwa?
geet - ek to main itna mahnat se aap ke liya khana banaya aur aapne kuch khaha bhi nahi
kam se kam aacha hain to bol hi sakthe the
maan tries to control his laughter geet gets even more wild
maan - tum aise bole rahe ho jaise tumne koi 4 course meal banaya hain
geet - aap ke liya kuch karna hi nahi chahiya...
u don't deserve my bread & she pulls the plate from his hand
maan - nahi nahi..it is really tasty..main to mazak kar raha tha
geet - nahi miligha
maan - please mujhe sachi main bhook laaghi hain
geet - u will have to praise my sandwich
maan - promsie
maan eats the sandwich & praises it..he kisses her hand says it is the most
beautiful dinner I have ever had...
geet - joota
maan - sach main..butter & jam could taste so good with bread I really did'nt know
geet - really..
maan - umm
geet - maine pheli baar banaya hain
maan ke ek hain se mano geet kil se utti...aise kush ho rahi thi mano
pura zameen zhoon utta hoo...mano dharthi aasmaan ko choom rahi ho
maan uski khushi ko sambal nahi paya...use aapne bahaoon mein laathe aur
boola tum itne masoomiyat laathe khahan se hoo?
geet - dukan se..!!!aur zoor se hus pati...
maan bhi hus ne laagha...she kept her fingers on his lips
phir boli itna shor mat karo veer ji utt jayage
their eyes met & her naughty eyes looked deep ...she looked at his eyes
& then her gaze moved lower to his lips..maan narrowed his eyebrows & questioned
jam she said & nibbled it from corner of his lower lip
she did'nt break off..her naughty look was turning passionate now..
her hands found their way into his hair & maan gave in..& hugged her closer
she looked at him & said i did'nt know jam could taste so nice catching for her breath...
burried her head in his chest...panting..maan actually blushed..
he kissed her head & patted her...she slept peacefully in his arms..

it was 5.30am...maan wakes up & looks at her...she blushes yet again in her
sleep ..& smiles..maan kisses her cheeks..& slowly pulls his hand out
mat javoo na..says geet with her eyes closed...maan kisses her eyes one after the other...
umm!! mat javoo...she pulls his arms & turns to sleep on the other side...
neind mein me bhi mano uske har unkahee baat samjhe thi hoo
seenay se laga ke Maan ko saaray gham bhol jathi
Maan us se juda na ho pai itna majboor kardthi
man kartha ..leke bahon mein use honton se itna choom lein,
mano sharam-o-haya k maine badal de..

maan left after 30mins & tucked the spread around her..
baby~bye papa miss u...😔
geet made a baby face and continued to sleep..maan reached his room
while having his shower..he wondered why was he getting so involved with geet
geet se dor nahi rah pata tha..us se ek pal ki dori mano muddat se lagthi
bohat baichain rahtee hay tabiat aik muddat say mano
dil o jaan ko nahee mil payee rahat aik muddat say mano..
sameera ke baad kisi ko us ne aapne kareeb nahi aane diya tha
phir kaise..kaise geet uske itna kareeb thi..yeh kya tha...sirf ek
kashish tha yah koi junoon tha ..yah kuch un sab se alag..
paak jaise khuda ki ibadat ho..dekh ke unki rishtoon ke sajde
shayad khuda bhi khud se Sharmaya ho..

geet got ready to go to office...
brij - I will come with u today
geet - why?
brij - muje Maan se kaam hain
geet - kyun aap ko unse kya kaam hain?
brij shot a glare at her for questioning him
she mumered aab veer ji ko unse kya kaam aa pada

precap

geet confused & confusing maan!!!

please please do comment love muskan Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

hi muski

Muskan, I just can't imagine you writing this update. Yaar I was just guessing that you might make him put the anklets while she i sleeping and there I read the same but never imagined he will do that @ her place while her bro is sleeping next door. Wow, she actually called him chuva that too big one😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Yaar what would have happened if Brij had come inside the room to chase the rat out?????????????????? I never thought of calling bread, butter jam as the best sandwitch in the world. So nice of maan to butter her with plottering words. He knows the trick to get her to him ( like the on screen Maan said that " the secret of attracting her to him is to stop talking or chasing her"). Btw Brij is going ask Maan to take care of Geet?????????????? what an irony? Like appointing wolf to take care of the herd sheep. Only if he had known the fact that Geet is bearing Maan's child!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan would have been 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 by now.

Hey I think I read that this maan is married and with kids, where are they and how are they? When will they surface????

Love you for the beautiful, nonstop romantic update. But poor child didn't get any gift from papa.


Jaya

hii muskan

fabulous,amazing,brilliant,superbbbbbbbbbbb

nice one....luvely...continue writing..!!! rohini

muskan sweety love u🤗awesome update loved it as always👏send next part soon😊

awesome.....

loved it..............