Originally posted by: herms_angel
Dedicated to my friends here on IF and specially to Husna (herms_angel)... :)
^^The above part made me grin from ear to ear :D
Rae I'm so glad I have found a friend like you here on IF, you have always made me feel special with your gestures, and I'm so very thankful for that π€Coming to the spin offs, you know I have loved that idea of yours right from the start, and I'm glad you updated because like I said, you have immense talent and you should showcase it.
Like everyone here said, this is the CUTEST part of this spin-off.
The whole Armaan-Riddhima banter was cute( will they have grow up!? LOL! ), just like how they used to be in DMG.Armaan acting all "Daddy" types and the way you described it was so beautiful.Its funny, the transistion from a boy to a man, how Armaan was a romantic boyfriend in his times and how now he's so protective of his kids.I could imagine Armaan doing that, not paying heed to what poor wife has got to say and enjoying the match, and just when she spills beans on about the 'man' in his daughter's life, and there you go, he jumps, reacts!This might have happened in almost everyone's life, loved the way you put this simple moment of life in the part so beautifully.I like the whole Arima angle, she does know her parents well na :)Looking forward to the next part Rae :)
Zindagi and Spin-offs shall remain one of my favourite FF's ever! :)
Originally posted by: zephyrrArmaan being paranoid about his teenage daughters non-existent (at least he thinks so) boyfriend was just too much fun to read! I'd always imagined Armaan of the future to be over-protective of his daughter. And this one, is playing his part to the T.. LOL!! But I am sure, even if he gives Arima's Nikhil a hard time, he will understand the love between them. π
Originally posted by: repercussion*Apologies-Apologies* The reason why I didn't reply is because I read it at like 4 in the morning, in pitch darkness, and typing would mean a long lecture lol! Anyway, I really don't have to talk about your writing skills (obviously, by now, you know I love it) but it's incredibly funny how Armaan reacts to a boyfriend issue when he was once, the most romantic boyfriend on the planet. I mean this guy forced Riddhima into accepting him and spoiled her silly, he even made her dress shorter lol! It's so typical of men to be sitting on the couch, watching a cricket match, not paying heed to what the miserable little wife is saying! I loved how you picked the most realistic, monotonous scene from our lives and transformed it into an AR moment. Riddhima sure is Armaan's little devil;)
His Reaction to the big news of the day was adorable. Adorable, because I could totally imagine the scene in my head ( thanks to the vivid imagery built by you)! Fantasy, eh! But I'm glad you didn't make it into an epiphany, because sooner or later he'd let go of his daughter but then it'd be too Shashank-ish! And somehow, the 20 year leap doesn't turn me off! Ofcourse, they have matured and things might have changed but you are like the only writer I could take even a 40 year old Riddhima from lol! Thanks a lot for the PM and more for the second one! It feels so great to know that the writer actually bothers to wait to hear from you and if you don't reply, doesn't think twice before authoritatively asking for one! *does her little victory dance*Write more often. *That's an order* and since, you said you'd probably update Bas...Yun Hi soon and even write a whole new story, I can't help but wait eagerly! Have a great day!PS- Referring to your reply on my last comment, I'd always be here...soon or late, to read your stories. Count me in on that! ;)
Originally posted by: Ankita.MSorry for the late comment, AWW I loved the part, beautiful and adorable. Armaans a possessive husband and an even more possessive and caring father. But he is the one who understands love the most !
I love the way you've taken the story ahead to when they are parents of young girls, and yet the love between them blossoms each day !Lovely writing continue soon !
Originally posted by: Riarai2346hey nice os
plz continue soon
w8ing what wna tell ar about nikhil lov you
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