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nice story concept and character sketches.
lovely update .
keep it up dear

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Thanx   u

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Next part do reply  Plzzzz

Subh In USA

Atul ,prithvi,raj n Dadi  paresan hai ab kya hoga,  atul ka phone subh ke pass hai aur suhana  usse phone karne wali hai . vo subh suhana ko ek karna chahte hai ,they are thinking will  be sucess in there mission.

Atul- Dai abb kya hoga???

Dadi - bhagwan jane abb kya hoga  ya hone wala hai.

Raj- how boring Dadi aggar kaise hi hum sochte rahe to khabhi bhi  subh shuhana ek nhi ho paye ge. we have to something guys.

prithvi -u are rite raj we have to do something .

atul-  tum log sif khehete hi rahoge kya kuch karo ge bhi.

raj- atul beta tujhe mein baad mein bata hu.
 
pritvi - abb kya kare.

raj- suhana ke phone aane ka wait.

atul- what???? par usse kya hoga

raj- dekh jab tak dono baat nhi karege tho ,baat aage kaise badhe gi.

prithvi- u know na shuhana nature n subh the akaru, iam sure boom blast hone wala hai.

Raj- wali tho mein chahta hu.

atul-   tu lov story bana chahta hai ya barbad karna.

raj-  dekh lov ke mamle mein iam expert u know raj the lov guru.

prithvi - ok lov guru ji.bolo abb kya kare.

raj- boom blast hone ka intezaar.

atul- ok dude.

Dadi- bhacho hamara mission kya hai/??

Atul- Subh shuhana ko ek kana.

prithvi- yaa we are doing to do this.

raj-  ,will do it n jeet humari hogi.

atul- nhi jeet phyaar ki hogi.

tabhi  raj  sia ko phone karta hai yeh puchne ke liye ki shuhana ne abb tak atul ko phone kiya ki nhi.

conversation between sia n raj-

raj- hello sia

sia- ooo raj ,

raj- sia sunn kya shuhana ne atul ko phone kiya kya.

sia- what??? tu ne mujh se yeh puchne ke liye kiya hai
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raj- yaaBig smile

sia- tu yeh atul se bhi tho puch sakta hai na, idiot

raj- yaa but atul ka phone out off range hai ( tabhi atul kheheta hai yaar tune sandwich kaha rakh diya.)

sia- iam not wrong tho yeh atul ki aawaaz hai it mean kuch tho gadbar hai

raj - no gadbad yaar tere kaan baj rahe hoge

phir atul jaise hi kuch khene wala hota hi hai tho prithvi  usse marne lagta hai aur usske  mouth ko  cellotap se tape kar deta hai.

sia- phir se atul ne bola.

raj- tu DR. ke pass ja,mein khahana tere kaam baj rahe hai.

sia-  ok,

raj- meine tujh se kuch pucha tha na

sia- yaa yaa yaa mujhe nhi pata

raj- tujhe nhi pata gog tune mera time waste kar diya

sia- how rude,idiotAngry

raj -- oooo jhasiki rani  tujhe nhi pata ki suhana ne atul ko phone kiya ki  nhi par yeh tho pata hoga na ki vo kiske saath hai. iam not wrong tho khahi vo neha ke saath tho nhi n BTW  iam not rude Dear.

sia- ok . aagar tuhe pata hai tho puch kiyun raha hai ,idiot

raj- tu mujhe bar bar idiot kiyun kerahi hai.

sia- sorry yaar. sab uss idiot samrat ke karan , usse ek bar bhi fursat nhi ki mujhse baat kar le. all men are  just....

raj-- ok ok dekh abhi mere  pass tera dukhra sunne liye time nhi call u later bye.

sia- byi.

Raj-- god neha ke saath hai

atul prithvi ko jor se laat marta hai.

prithvi- oooo (pjir tape nikal  deta hai)

atul- tujhe tho mein

raj- aabe tujhe kitni bhookh lagti hai

atul -sorry yaar.

raj- no ,aggar vo shuhana ka saath hai tho usse bhagana hoga ,varna vo subh ko phone nhi kar payegi, u know na her stupid astology n prediction

atul - i knowOuch

prithvi -abhi bhagata hu neha ko


Next scene in India-

Shuhana- neha ,iam bore what to do now.

neha- shopping chale

shuhana- yaaak shopping , i hate it.

tabhi prithvi neha ko phon karta hai aur kheheta hai yaar tu khaha hai

neha mein - suhana ke saath

prithvi- bhahar mein

neha- haa

prithvi- OMG tujhe pata nhi kiya 

neha- kya plzz tell me

prithvi- u are vergo na

neha- yaa , luky na

prithvi- no lukcy only unluky
neha -y

prithvi-- tujhe pata nhi ki vergo rashi  valo ek pua din ghar se bhahar nhi niklna hai . nhi tho any thing can gappen.

neha- what ,abb mein kya karu.iam with shuhana aur i will not  leave her alone chahe jo kuch hojaye.

(prithvi- aree yaar yeh tho maan hi nhi rahi hai prithvi dhire se bolta hai)

neha- kya khaha tune

Prithvi - kuch bhi tho nhi, tu ghar nhi jaye gi to mat jaa , aagar kya hua jo tere saath hai usse  bhi  tu big problem mein  dal degi.

neha- ooo god nhi mein suhana ko pro mein nhi daalu gi iam going yaar byi.

prithvi - kaam ho gaya.

shuhana- kya hua neha

neha- mujhe jana hoga byi byi

suhana - sunn na , pagal

suhana- abb mein kiya  karu yeh bhi chali gayi, mujhe aisa kuyn lag raha hai ki mein kuch boul rahi hu. oooh god mujhe atul ko phone kar na tha, ok  tho call kare  time pass karlu gi.

to be continue

Precap - suhana saying subh  Nakchara

To watch out what will happen next plzz do come here .





Edited by Riasa - 06 October 2010 at 1:34pm

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

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Thanx u soo much dear for your  reply soon i will start subh shuhana scene update, First i have to  clear out other thing in the story , i will do it soon . plzzz do watch it n reply Dear.Big smile

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Subh suhana scence #1

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Suhana atul ko phone karti hai ,lekin atul ka phone subh ke pass hai

shuhana- hello

subh- hello

suhana- tum kon ho

subh- BTW tumne mujhe call kiya hai.

suhana- no meine tume nhi apne friend ko phone kiya hai.

subh - soo iam not your friendyeh

suhana- i know , aur khabhi hoga bhi nhi.

subh - y u are wasting my time????

suhana- iam wasting your time u are wasting my time. chalo apne boss ko jaldi se phone do, pata nhi kisss kiss ko kaam pe rakh lete hai

subh- boss ko. hello jobhi ho tum dekho ....

suhana- tum dekho  aggar tumne meri baat nhi maani tho tum apni nokari se haaath dho betho ge.

subh- ajeeb pagal ladki hai

suhana- tumne mujhe pagal khaha, tume ladki se baat karne ki thori si  bhi manners nhi hai.  Nakchara khahika

subh- tumne mujhe Nakchara khaha ....

suhana- tume sunayi nhi deta kiya

subh- uuuu.....

suhana- suhana , call me suhana madam ok

subh- ok miss suhana   madam, aap pagal khane yeh kab chuutiuhana

suhana- kya khaha, mein pagal khane se aayi hu

subh- ooo soo u accepte ki tum pagal khane se aayi ho good

suhana- mein pagan khane se nhi tum pagal khane se aaye ho

subh- dekho.....

suhana- tum dekho ladki samjh ke tum mujhe kuch bhi nji bol sakte ho.

subh- ladki samjhe ke hi kuch nhi bol raha hu. miss ..... vo tumne mujhe  kya khaha nakchra tho tum  jungli billi

suhana- what?????

subh-- ooo jungli billi ko  naam pasand nhi aaya

suhana- mein jungli billi tho tum nakchre

subh- ulta chor kotual ko daate

suhana-  kya khaha  kotual...ko,,

subh- tum aawaaz se tho indian hi lagti ho ,aur tume isska matlab nhi malum.

suhana-  nhi malum tho ,vo mein hindi class mein khabhi dhiyaan nhi diya  BTW mein tumahari jaise nhi tu Desh drohi.

subh- tumne mujhe desh dorhi khaha.

suhana- yaa  drohi , kiyun ki tum apne desh ko chor kar kissi aur desh ki tarki mein saath de rahe ho, tumahare jaise loge ke karan hi indian develope nhi hai.

subh- u...

suhana- kuyn  sach sunn kar bura laga itna hi dam hai tho face to face mera samna karo ,

subh - mein tumse milne kiye nhi aa sakta , mujhe apna time waste nhi karna

suhana- ohhh tho bechana Nakchara darr gaya, don't woory akksar lag mujh se darr jate hai

subh- darr aur tujse miss jungli billi .

suhana -yaa, mera pura din barbad kar diya  aur jisse baat karna tha
vo tho gayab hai janab.

subh- ooo hello tumse baat karke mere bhi din acha nhi jaye hai.


suhana- meine tho apne dost ko phone lagaya tha tume phone kaise lag gaya.OMG kahi tumne mere dost ka phone tho nhi churaya

subh- what , tume mein chor najar aata hu

suhana- mujhe tum kaise nazaar  aao ge  hum dono unforuntely  phone pe hai.

subh- ok tho , i think tum itni intellegent tho ho  na

suhana- yaa but not in studies.

subh- kiyun koi  tume padhane waala teacher nhi mila , i know kissi gungli billi ko padha kissi ke bas ki baath nhi.

suhana- kya , meine tume truthfully sach bataya aur tum mujhe...

subh- ok sorry ,

suhana-  vo tho hona hi chahiye.

subh- ooo jara sa sorry bola aur tum mere sirr par chad gayi

suhana- ok ok  sorry tho tum USA mein kya karte ho, koi jab vob ki tlash mein ho...

subh - for your kind information mein  dusro ko job deta hu.

suhana-oo yaaa aur  feko .lagta hai tumahara naam mujhe  Mr. Nackchra se Mr. feku  rkhna padega.

subh- tum se baat karna bekar hai.

tabhi India mein barish hone lagti hai

suhana- barish .mazza aagya

subh- barish mein mazza what a joke.

suhana - tume barish nhi  pasand,ek  bar tum yaha aaoo tab mein tume barish ka maaza  samjho ge , nhi samjho ge tho mein samjha dugi.  mein tume puri  India tho nhi par mera sehar yani naini tal pura dekha dugi u will lov it.

subh -  tum naini tal se ho mein bhi

suhana- what ??? par mujhe nhi pata tha ki nsin  mein koi Nakchra bhi hai

subh- aur mujhe bhi nhi pata tha ki vaha koi  jungli billi bhi hai.

Phir dono suddenly hassne lagte hai.

subh- bohot aajeeb baat hai aab tak hum lar rahe the aur abb ache se baat kar rahe hai like ...

suhana - friends...

subh- yaaa, so friends

suhana- tum itne bhi bure nhi  ho , ok Friends for ever

subh- friends forever , tho tum mujhe abb nakchra tho nhi  bulao gina

suhana- obiously bulau gi ,

subh - tum nhi badlo gi

suhana- nhi aur tume kaise pata ki mein aisi hu

subh- aisi kaisi????

Suhana- sooo India kab aarhe ho

subh- i don't know jab tak mujhe deal nhi milti

suhana- kon si deal, yani u are a bussinessman cool

subh- yaa mein bussinesman hu mere hotel ke liye deal bohot important hai

suhana- ooo tho tumahara dhaaaba hai.

subh- dhaaba nhi hai aur meri dost hokar aisa bol rahi ho

suhana- gussa kuyn ho rahe ho mein majaak kar rahi hi.

subh-- tho mein bhimajaak kar raha tha.

suhana- tum deal ke liye paresan ho na.

subh- tume kaise pata.

suhana- mein bohot smart hu. n don't worry tumko hi yeh deal milega

subh- tume kaise pata

suhana -  mein bohot lucky hu ,abb mein tumahari dost ho tho  tum bhi lucky ho gaye ho

subh- ha ha ha ok miss lucky dekhte hai tum kitni lucky ho

suhana - dekh lo ,ooo  god mein tho tumahara naam puchna hi buol
gayi

subh- subh

suhana- hey humare naam same sounding hai subh suhana, suhana subh.

subh- yaa tum bilcul  bachi ki ho

suhana- i know san kehete hai tum kab baari hogi.

subh- BTW tum isse phone kar rahi thi

suhana- atul ko..vo mera

subh- atul

suhana- tum jante ho

subh- he is my best friend

suhana- same pinch, thanx u bolo

subh- ok thanx u ,par kuyn

suhana -
beczz atul mera bhi best friend hai.

subh- strange hum dost ban gaye

suhana - vo tho hai ,par itna bhi nhi ,kissi se dosti karne ke liye kissi ko puri trha jan na  jaruri nhi.

subh- wrong  jab janno ge nhi tho dosti kaise hogi ,

suhana- dekho Mr Nakchre dosti ke mamle mein mein expert hu

subh- Miss jungli billi  khabhi dusro ki bhi sun lo

suhana- aggar mein sahi hu tho mein dusro ki kuyn suno

subh- tum khabhi fight kiye bina nhi baat kar sakti ho

suhana - tume mujhe jhgralu khaha

subh- yaa

suhana- good bye ,aab tum  india aaoge tabhi mein  tumse baat karugi aur mein tume phone nhi karne wali tum mujhe kato

subh- hello no. tho baata do

tabhi  suhana phone kaat deti hai.

subh- jungli billi

suhana- nakchra.

Precap
 subh telling about suhana  to raj n raj is making him to think more about suhana n same way suhana is telling about subh to raj n raj is doing same.....


to be continue........


Edited by Riasa - 06 October 2010 at 3:18pm

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Next part  coming soon.

Subh  Suhana  scene #2

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amazing parts.loved them
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