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Posted: 02 October 2010 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
MEMORIES

Whenever you look outside the window,
You see things have changed
And people have moved on,
 And you feel you have nothing left
Ah! no, you have a bundle of memories!
Memories are the only door to the future & windows to the past,

They reflect you today
But don't conceal your past,
Don't be depressed over what happened yesterday,
But, vow today not to let it happen tomorrow;
For life is only once lived
                                       But the nostalgia lives forever.

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This is written by me only....this was written way back in 12th std...just a week before my CET exam :)

Do read and give in your valuable views :)

-Fatima



Edited by -shabnoor- - 02 October 2010 at 10:50pm

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Posted: 02 October 2010 at 10:55pm | IP Logged

shab do u know

u r the one who write small but beautiful Poem
i said i dont read it much but see you made me
 
 
Luv
Aru di


Edited by arunabehere - 03 October 2010 at 10:40am

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Posted: 02 October 2010 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Wow...its beautiful...Day Dreaming u hv such a poetic soul...Heart
 
Luv it..!! Great one....n btw.. All the best for ur exams Thumbs Up

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Posted: 02 October 2010 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
beautifull..lovely

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Posted: 03 October 2010 at 12:00am | IP Logged
great work dear.................

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Posted: 03 October 2010 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Hey Fatima,
 
I love your writing.How many times have I told you that?
 
Reminded me of a quote
 
"We ll have out time machines, some take us back to our past, they are called memories and some take us to our future, they are called dreams :D
 
Continue with your writing
 
So long
cR

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Posted: 03 October 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Amazing poem! Approve

This poem is really inspiring, every word counts and it indeed, is a fine piece of poetry. More than the poetic devices, the essence is kept in mind and that's best about this poem!

Very well done, Fatima! I wish this poem helps souls like us. LOL

-Kanky

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Posted: 03 October 2010 at 2:22am | IP Logged

Oh my Noor - Hug 

I hope you will think over your own lines and move on... as you promised me.
 
and you reminded me my exam days back in time..  Everyone used to study during study leaves and I used to write stories or poems...
Aur mano ya na mano - jab se meri zindagi se ye exams ka kissa khatam hua and settle ho gayi , meine likhna hi chod diya Smile It was just a coincidence - fir bhi...

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