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Posted: 30 September 2010 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suchi_dev2006

I like it a lot friend... I like the optimism in it, not just Hannah, but many more can find an answer, a view of life.Smile

Do write moreThumbs Up

Thanks a lot Suchi :D
Ya, this OS was written generally,without any definite character in mind...
 
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Edited by crazilycrazy - 30 September 2010 at 4:14am
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Posted: 30 September 2010 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
really nice :) there were a few tiny spelling mistakes like buzzy and weather.. but its a nice story keep writing Big smile

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Posted: 01 October 2010 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

really nice :) there were a few tiny spelling mistakes like buzzy and weather.. but its a nice story keep writing Big smile
Thanks a lot Nishi.I corrected the mistakes...actually this was the first draft without being edited so....the whether became weatherSmile
And about buzzy..well its no word I know but  I used it anyway :D
Thanks for commenting
 
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Posted: 01 October 2010 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazilycrazy

Originally posted by *Nishi*

really nice :) there were a few tiny spelling mistakes like buzzy and weather.. but its a nice story keep writing Big smile
Thanks a lot Nishi.I corrected the mistakes...actually this was the first draft without being edited so....the whether became weatherSmile
And about buzzy..well its no word I know but  I used it anyway :D
Thanks for commenting
 
cR
ur welcome Big smile

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